Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 21, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-17407The Safety INdEx of Prehospital On Scene Triage (SINEPOST) study: the development and validation of a risk prediction model to support ambulance clinical transport decisions on-scene.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Miles, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 10 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the paper titled “The Safety INdEx of Prehospital On Scene Triage (SINEPOST) study: the development and validation of a risk prediction model to support ambulance clinical transport decisions on-scene”. The objective of this study was to determine whether prehospital information can predict avoidable attendance. This is likely one of the most pressing questions facing paramedic services today as demand exceeds capacity. There are few decision support tools that exist at present to help with determining whether a case is an avoidable attendance. Paramedics can have challenges determining medical necessity and need for hospitalization. As you will see, I have made several minor suggestions for how the paper might be improved. Background: • Here is another recent reference on the potential for harm due to offload delay. o Dawson LP et al. Med J Aust. 2022 Jun 23. doi: 10.5694/mja2.51613. Online ahead of print. The influence of ambulance offload time on 30-day risks of death and re-presentation for patients with chest pain • Here are a couple of comments for consideration: 1) It might also be helpful to situate this paper in the context of systems where paramedics transport most patients to the ED (and may not be making the decision) unless the patient refuses transport. I think this work could inform those systems in developing clinical pathways based on the tool developed here. 2) I’m also wondering what an appropriate over-triage might be? 9-32% over triage may not be that bad. Methods • Please define HES A&E and ECDS were defined. • Participants - should this state “face to face paramedic contact from Yorkshire ambulance service”? • More info on the scaling of the NEWS2 would be helpful. How are the NEWS2 categories determined? • How many clinical interventions were considered? • Patient’s mobility is interesting. Please clarify – this is really about how the patient was extricated from the scene and not about their day-to-day level of mobility and balance. Is this a drop-down selection in the ePCR system? • Were any indicators of frailty considered? • Please clarify what is meant by social variables and network variables. What types of data do paramedics routinely document here? • Sample size – should the conservative estimate state 0.09? Please check if this is the correct reference and prevalence. • This is a great description of the data linkage process. Results • Are you able to report on how many records were successfully linked by NHS Digital? • Conveyance is repeated in the first paragraph of results. • Were the first set of vital signs used prior to interventions? • Please check the discrimination section. Should it be 0.820 (95% CI 0.815-0.824)? • Typo in model updating section – should be fig 3 instead of fig 14 • Figures 4-6 were difficult to read. Consider removing and describe. Discussion • Does the model better predict when to transport to a tertiary care versus a smaller community hospital? • There is reference to a figure 13 which does not exist. • I think more thought should be placed on how to situate this work within the academic literature. o This study may be helpful for determining what additional patients may be suitable for non-conveyance. Emergency department interventions that could be conducted in subacute care settings for patients with nonemergent conditions transported by paramedics: a modified Delphi study Ryan P Strum 1, Walter Tavares, Andrew Worster 2, Lauren E Griffith 2, Andrew P Costa 2CMAJ Open 2022 Jan 11;10(1):E1-E7. doi: 10.9778/cmajo.20210148. Print Jan-Mar 2022 • Overall, I thought this was an interesting paper and moves the field forward towards understanding how paramedics can make better decisions regarding transport dispositions. There may be opportunities to be more concise throughout. Reviewer #2: The proposed manuscript (ms) greatly contributes to the sciejce. I have not found fundamental issues making the proposed ms rejected. Despite some short comings,the ms is relatively technically sound, presented in an intelligible fashion and not written in good quality english. Appropriately chosen terms and abbreviations are clearly explained and used for better understanding. Impact of the study is well highlighted. I am suggesting a minor revision without which the proposed ms can not be accepted. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The Safety INdEx of Prehospital On Scene Triage (SINEPOST) study: the development and validation of a risk prediction model to support ambulance clinical transport decisions on-scene. PONE-D-22-17407R1 Dear Dr. Miles, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the revised manuscript. I believe all of my concerns have been addressed. This paper adds to the literature on determining avoidable attendance to the ED. Reviewer #2: Revised manuscript seems to be written very good english as well as addressed all comments properly.It can be accepted for publication in Plos one journal. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Judah Goldstein Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-17407R1 The Safety INdEx of Prehospital On Scene Triage (SINEPOST) study: The development and validation of a risk prediction model to support ambulance clinical transport decisions on-scene. Dear Dr. Miles: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Yong-Hong Kuo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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