Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 7, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-27763Congenital Malformations and Preeclampsia Associated with Integrase Inhibitor Use in PregnancyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Smith, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please comply with Reviewers’ comments. In particular, recognize the limitations of your work and check the title. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 06 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The main limitation of this article is that overall percentage of congenital anomalies is very high, even in non-INSTI-exposed infants. It would be important to provide baseline data for the US population and to make sure the categories used to report congenital anomalies in this paper meet standards for this kind of report. Conclusion from this publication should be very careful as they are very different from previous reports. For instance, in a previous publication cited by this paper (Money 2019), there were 80 cases with dolutegravir exposure in the first trimester (including 69 cases with dolutegravir at conception) with four cases of non-chromosomal congenital anomalies, giving a rate of 5.0% (95% CI 1.4–12.3%) – this is highly different from this work. Comparison of the group with exposure to integrase inhibitors in the first trimester to the group of exposure to non-INSTI ART in the first trimester is already done, but comparison to the group of no exposure to ART in the first trimester (n=90) should be added, while comparison to group never exposed to an INSTI should be removed. Further comments: -Congenital anomalies should be categorized using the ICD https://icd.who.int/browse10/2016/en#/XVII. -Still birth should not be excluded from the analyses regarding congenital anomalies as autopsy data are available. -details the type of ART used in the non-INSTI group (what kind of a PI or NNRTI?). -How was defined race/ethnicity in children and mothers ? -Were the 36 infants with congenital anomalies tested for common causes of such anomalies, such as congenital CMV infection and genetic conditions? Of note, I am not sure that the trisomy 21 case should be excluded – either exclude all genetic conditions or none. - Laboratory abnormalities: what is the protocol in place to follow lab toxicity in pregnant women living with HIV? How frequently were these lab tests performed in pregnancy in each group? -Preeclampsia results: several other confounding factors should be addressed (BMI, parity, smoking…) – not sure you have enough cases for this. -Table 1: Add gestational age at ART initiation (preconception versus first trimester versus 2 and 3rd trimester); Viral load at baseline and at delivery should be reported in caterogies (undetectable versus detectable) -Table 2: Each infant should be represented only once, with a new category ‘Multisystem anomalies’ for those who have several anomalies; ; change also this in the text and in the abstract. -Table 3: Remove Polyhydramnnios, Oligohydramnios Placenta previa - Placental abruption (not relevant) Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript which is well written. The manuscript describes associations between timing of INSTI-and non-INSTI ART on congenital anomalies in infants as well as other pregnancy outcomes, finding increased rates of congenital anomalies in infants born to women receiving INSTI-based ART pre-conception and in the first trimester, as well as increased pre-eclampsia. Some minor revisions suggested: Introduction: -Line 45 suggest adding maternal health benefit to maternal ART (not just PMTCT) -Line 61-63 suggest explaining clearly the issue with " lack of denominators" upfront, since this comes up a number of times in the manuscript but may not be understood by all and is unclear as written here. This becomes clearer in the sentence lines 70 onwards, but suggest that this explanation is included upfront. - Suggest adding some information on background congenital anomaly rate in the community where the study took place Methods: - Please include a brief standard of care explanation, with inclusion of whether women who are periconception receive folate supplementation in the periconception/1st TM through pregnancy? Also, whether there is grain fortification with folate? This could be a potential factor related to no NTD being seen? - Line 116-117 is not clear to me, specifically ".....starting a new medication or within 3 days of stopping a new medication". Should this be resolves within 3 days of stopping? That seems too short though? Please clarify - Obesity is an important factor related to congenital anomalies, particularly cardiac anomalies. Could the BMI not have been calculated using available weight and height, understanding that pre-conception weight may not have been available, but there is data from the first TM in many women. Table 2: - This table is quite long-consider highlighting 1st TM exposures as well, rather than just pre-conception Discussion - Line 294-296: point well taken, but perhaps also specify that many of the pregnancy registries collect surface examination data only at delivery/first few weeks and have the advantage of larger numbers, but do not investigate for internal anomalies that are not visible. - Obesity data not available is mentioned as a limitation, although please see previous comments regarding calculation which should be done if possible. Reviewer #3: The paper is interesting but as the authors point out in the study limitations the cohort has many limitations, not the least of which is the failure to report alcohol and smoking for example To make it definitively acceptable the authors could check only major congenital defects, in particular major anomalies were defined as those that required surgical or medical intervention or had serious cosmetic significance. Also with regard to the diagnosis of preeclampsia, risk factors are missing: antiphospholipid antibody syndrome, Chronic hypertension, Pregestational diabetes and body mass index (BMI) >30 and assisted reproductive technology. (Bartsch E, Medcalf K E, Park A L, Ray J G. Clinical risk factors for pre-eclampsia determined in early pregnancy: systematic review and meta-analysis of large cohort studies BMJ 2016; 353 :i1753 doi:10.1136/bmj.i1753). Finally, if the authors are able to complete these requirements, it would also be helpful not to overemphasize the role of INSTIs in the title, but simply report the results of their single-center cohort with many limitations. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Congenital Malformations and Preeclampsia Associated with Integrase Inhibitor Use in Pregnancy: A Single-Center Analysis PONE-D-22-27763R1 Dear Dr. Smith, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Carlo Torti Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): This paper is suitable for publication. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-27763R1 Congenital Malformations and Preeclampsia Associated with Integrase Inhibitor Use in Pregnancy: A Single-Center Analysis Dear Dr. Smith: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Carlo Torti Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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