Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-16651Factors associated with delayed diagnosis of appendicitis in adults: a single-center, retrospective, observational studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Harada, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 22 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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However, the medical record only tells you whether an exam maneuver was documented, not whether it was performed. How sure can you be that exam maneuvers that were not documented did not occur? - The rate of delayed diagnosis (>25%) is dramatically higher than in other studies (<5% typically). This is a red flag and makes me question the study results. Is it possible that selection bias existed? - There are not enough patients in the study to perform a regression with 19 variables. I strongly recommend statistical consultation and revision of the modeling plan. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Title: Factors associated with delayed diagnosis of appendicitis in adults: a single-center, retrospective, observational study (PONE-D-22-16651) Methodology: retrospective study Authors’ main findings: In 26% (200/763) patients, diagnosis of appendicitis was delayed, defined as any possibility other than “diagnosis at the first visit if the facility had computed tomography (CT) capability” or “referral to an appropriate medical institution promptly after the first visit for a facility without CT capability”. The factors associated with dealyed dianosis following multivariate analysis were female sex, absence of right lower quadrant tenderness, first consultation at clinic, and consultation by a non-generalist. Reviewer’s comments: The topic of timely diagnosis of acute appendicitis is an important topic for emergency physicians and general surgeons. I has many difficulties with this study. 1. The set up of the study is unclear – The study was carried out in one hospital in Tokyo, I assume with CT scan. It is unclear, who evaluates patients in the emergency department? The classification of physicians is also uncear since it includes specialists - who are these? emergency physicians? general surgeons?, others? It includes generalists – a term which is unknown to me, and non-generalists, another unknown term. The authors ought to explain the set up. How do the patients reach this hospital. Are they referred by their family doctors? Are they referred by their family doctors after some outside workup was done? As written above, who are these physicians who examine the patients in the emergency department (what is their training)? 2. The authors’ main endpoint relates to if CT was done or not done. Is CT compulsary for the diagnosis of appendicitis in the auhors’ institution? This is not common practice in many countries. 3. The authors’ finding was that generalists were more likely than non-generalists to examine patients for signs of peritoneal irritation and pelvic appendicitis. I understand that some would send more laboratory exams or imaging exams than others. I do not understand how it can be possible that one physician is more likely than another physician to examine the abdomen of a patient presenting to the emergency department complaining of abdominal pain. 4. Twenty variables were included in the multivariate regression analysis. It is unclear whether interactions were included as well. I would suggest a statistician to evaluate the analysis. Reviewer #2: Comment to the authors: The authors report that the present study reveals factors associated with delayed diagnosis of appendicitis. Particularly, they insist that generalists perform physical examinations well and are less likely to have delayed diagnoses of appendicitis. Although the details are very interesting, there is a certain dissociation between the purpose of the study and its conclusions. Additionally, the fatal flaw of this study is that the methodology for avoidance and adjustment for possible bias is not enough, though I understand that this is a retrospective study. Therefore, the authors can not insist on their current conclusions based on the findings of this study, and major revisions are required. Major points Introduction: 1. The authors provide adequate comments on the delayed diagnosis of appendicitis. However, there is a lack of information regarding the association between generalists and physical examination, and between appendicitis and physical examination. It is unclear contextually why the authors hypothesized that generalists (or physical examination) would lead to a lower delayed diagnosis of appendicitis. The authors should add information with references in the literature. 2. The objectives stated in the Introduction, and the conclusions of this study seem to be disconnected. The authors should conclude with discussions of the study's findings with objective information already known and a clear answer to the objectives and hypotheses. Method: 3. Informed consent should not be waived for a retrospective study. At least comprehensive consent or opt-out should be implemented and mentioned in the main text. 4. Please clarify the symptoms of appendicitis or CT findings used for inclusion, objectively and specifically, with references if possible. Additionally, please clarify how the accuracy of the review of medical records was ensured, e.g., how many reviewers were responsible for the review. 5. The inclusion criteria are not fully explained. 6. When was the CT performed, and when did the patients have the reviewed symptoms? 7. Please explain how missing data is managed. Mainly, how the authors managed physical findings and symptoms being not recorded is essential. Please clarify whether the authors counted them as none or missing. Additionally, please describe in the limitation how this may affect the results of this study. 8. How were the collected items selected? Did the authors review the literature? 9. Please explain whether CT with or without contrast enhancement was considered and how and why it was determined. 10. Shouldn’t the diagnostic accuracies in other modalities be discussed? 11. I think that performing CT and referring patients for CT should be different. What is the meaning to analyze patients from clinics without CT and hospitals with CT as the same population? Please clarify in the main text. 12. The other biases that affect differences in the location of the first consultation seem not to be adjusted sufficiently. 13. Although the duration from onset (6 hours) and age (60 years) were analyzed as categorical variables, they must be analyzed as continuous variables. If the authors analyze them as categorical variables, they should explain how they set the cut-offs. 14. The bias for delayed diagnosis due to the clinical settings would not be adjusted unless the duration from the onset in detail is included in the covariate items. 15. The differences in the departments may reflect the differences in the visiting patients. Depending on the role of each department, the patients’ backgrounds should be different, such as a patient with a difficult diagnosis visiting a specialist or a first-time patient visiting a generalist. How did the authors address such biases? 16. What is the definition of the generalist in this study? Please clarify whether they are board-certified physicians or simply belong to a general medicine department. 17. Because the primary outcome of this study is a delayed diagnosis, potential confounding factors such as type of department, number of medical doctors, number of beds, and number of outpatients in each department should be clarified and adjusted in the multivariate analysis. 18. The first paragraph of the Exploration analysis should be included in the background. 19. The second paragraph of the Exploration analysis should be described in Data collection and definition of variables. 20. The number of patients should not be mentioned as 247 in the method. This should be mentioned in the results. Discussion: 1st paragraph 21. This study design does not adequately adjust for differences between patients in specialist and generalist departments. It is impossible to determine whether the difference between the two groups is truly significant unless the biases such as patient characteristics, symptom course, and other conditions are adjusted. 3rd paragraph 22. This is somewhat of a leap in logic. While it is true that the generalist performed CT earlier, this study's results cannot determine if this was the correct diagnostic practice. 23. Since there are many factors to be considered, such as patients for whom CT was not performed, patients diagnosed by other modalities, and differences in patients according to the department, it would be preferable to use a non-judgmental expression here. 24. Additionally, the physical examination was only analyzed in univariate analysis, and it is difficult to adjust adequately with other factors considering the small sample size. I believe this is a critical flaw in this study to emphasize the superiority of the generalists' physical examination. 25. I cannot understand the relation of the 4th paragraph to the results or the conclusions of this study. Conclusion: 26. Please revise the conclusion based on the hypothesis, objectives, findings, and appropriate discussions. 27. “Second, we could not verify whether physical findings, such as peritoneal irritation or pelvic inflammation, could prevent delayed diagnosis owing to the retrospective study design.” This section is not the conclusion that can be drawn from the findings of this study. 28. “Our findings will need validation in future multicenter and prospective studies.” I do not think it is necessary as a conclusion of this study. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-22-16651R1Factors associated with delayed diagnosis of appendicitis in adults: a single-center, retrospective, observational studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Harada, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 22 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-22-16651R2Factors associated with delayed diagnosis of appendicitis in adults: a single-center, retrospective, observational studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Harada, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 12 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Kenneth A Michelson, MD MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: I am happy with the changes and how you have contextualized the findings. The Michelson study showed that 63% of patients who had a revisit had a delay in diagnosis. Most patients do not have revisits. So, 63% of the small fraction of patients with a revisit leading to an appendicitis diagnosis had a delay. Overall, delay rates are still < 5% among all children diagnosed with appendicitis. As an example, Mahajan et al in JAMA Network Open and Goyal et al in Academic Emergency Medicine show low delay rates. Please modify the text to incorporate the generally low delay rates published in contemporary cohorts. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Factors associated with delayed diagnosis of appendicitis in adults: a single-center, retrospective, observational study PONE-D-22-16651R3 Dear Dr. Harada, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kenneth A Michelson, MD MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-16651R3 Factors associated with delayed diagnosis of appendicitis in adults: a single-center, retrospective, observational study Dear Dr. Harada: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kenneth A Michelson Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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