Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 24, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-02381Poison frog dietary preference depends on prey type and alkaloid loadPLOS ONE Dear Dr. O'Connell, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. You manuscript has been reviewed by two reviewers and I have included their reports. Both liked the idea of the manuscript and that it was overall well presented. However, they also raised a number fundamental concerns, several related to methodology but also to how well your conclusions were supported by data. You need to supply convincing argument both to me and the reviewers that the problems raised do not challenge the conclusions of the study. In your response letter, make sure that you include point by point responses to the reviewers' comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 10 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study appears to have been reasonably conducted and analyzed. I have only a few minor comments in that regard. I am, however, somewhat concerned with the interpretation of the results which I do not think are necessarily supported by the data. It is possible that I am misunderstanding the points the author is trying to make, in which case I believe that some additional clarity is warranted. Specifically, I am not certain that the claim that both toxicity and nutritional value are taken into account by frogs during prey selection is substantiated. Rather the results seem to suggest a single preference for high protein fly larvae. Specific comments related to these points follow: Line 99-101: This sentence is confusing. Line 102-103: This prediction isn’t backgrounded so I am unsure where it comes from. Line 171-178: My only concern with the method is that all frogs were exposed to treatments in the same order which may be confounding. It is possible then that any differences between control, high, and low dosages are a results of experimental order. I don’t think that the control here is fully appropriate. As I understand it the control treatment was vehicle solution at the beginning of the trial to every frog. This doesn’t appear to control for time or the repeated administration of vehicle solution. I would have liked to see a control group that was given vehicle solution at the same time points as the experimental group. Line 179: It would be helpful to know how many videos were discarded form the dataset. Line 272-276: This section is hard to follow. Line 312-315, 346-351: I think you need a reference here. Also I wonder if this results is due to biomass of ants being dominant in most natural settings rather than prey preference exactly. The authors do discuss this a bit later on in the discussion but I think is perhaps worth highlighting in more detail. The findings here really support the idea that prey availability not preference might be the main factor determining diet. It also occurs to me that there is an alternative hypothesis here that frogs can determine prey alkaloid content. Because all of the prey items offered here were not defended it is possible that you wouldn’t see predicted prey choice if they “know” all the options are alkaloid free. Line 333-334: references please. Line 360-362: It isn’t clear why this is contrary to predictions? Why would you predict that alkaloid supplemented frogs should be bias against protein rich foods? Line 440-441: Has this been demonstrated? A naïve preference for defended prey, because as captive bred frogs that have never been exposed to nature prey sources they may not associate any species with being defended unless it was innate. Line 449-452: I am not convinced your data supports this conclusion. It seems like there is no evidence from your experiments that dietary preference explains diet of wild populations. Line 455-459: Again if I understand your results right, I don’t think this is supported. The preference toward larvae suggests a preference for high protein not high lipid prey items doesn’t it? General: I would specify fly larvae throughout as all the prey species exhibit a larval stage. Fig 2b: I am having a hard time interpreting this figure. The caption doesn’t seem sufficient to explain what is being show. Does this not look like a preference for adult flies and not larva? Reviewer #2: The authors designed several experiments to better understand foraging decisions by a frog that acquires its chemical defenses from diet. Overall, I think the ideas presented in the paper are significant, and represent a new and important direction towards an understanding of organisms that acquire chemical defenses. The literature review presented in the paper, and the synthesis of the experimental results as they pertain to current knowledge in the study system are well presented in the discussion. My main concern with the paper has to do with the biological relevance of some of the results, and what they might mean in a natural system. I also have several questions surrounding some of the methodology, all of which are aimed at improving the overall study. I present my concerns below. To the authors credit, they do address in the discussion some of the limitations of their lab experiments as they pertain to natural systems, which I think is important. Although just an opinion, I think the most significant results in the manuscript are in relation to the protein and lipid content analysis of different prey items. These results are novel (at least within this system), and are more widely applicable to natural systems. Specific Comments: Arthropod prey used in experiment. The authors used two different ant species in their feeding experiments, Camponotus vicinus and Linepithema humile, which are assumed (to the authors knowledge) not to be chemically defended. It is possible that these species do not contain alkaloids, however the present authors recently report in Moskowitz et al. (2020) the presence of alkaloids in other species of ants in the same genera. Although there are many exceptions, the presence of alkaloids in ants are commonly found to be genus specific. Therefore, it seems possible that the ants used in the present study also contained alkaloids. To eliminate this possibility, the two ant species used in the present experiment should be examined for alkaloids, as the presence of alkaloids would significantly impact the findings of the study. Size mediated dietary preference assay. Why did the authors use both “eat” and “attempt to eat” events? If the goal of the study was to understand what the frogs would eat when given a choice, then why use “attempt to eat”? I am sure there is a good reason, but in the absence of more information on the category “attempt to eat” (e.g., what constitutes an attempt to eat? how was this determined?), it is not clear. Also, what are the raw numerical differences between these two categories? Did most frogs eat, and only a small subset attempt to eat? Or, did most frogs attempt to eat? Given the aim is dietary preference, it seems that the eat category would be the only relevant category to measure. A failed attempt to eat could be interpreted as a mistake by a frog, but it could also be a decision by the frog not to consume a particular prey item. Again, without more information, this is difficult to assess. Alkaloid feeding and taxon dietary preference assay. Can the authors offer any ideas on why all of the males in this experiment exited the arena before trial completion? This result is especially strange given that 9 males did not exit the arena in the size-mediated experiments. Also, the fact that this part of the experiment only involved females should be added to the discussion. Lines 103-105: (1) “non-chinous” should be “non-chitonous.” (2) As written, the prediction is a bit confusing and it is not entirely clear what the authors mean. Lines 128- 133: A minor point, but there is no information on where the fruit flies originated. Lines 143-144: Something is missing or incorrect. How is it possible that “one week before the trials began”, frogs were “exposed to arthropod prey items six times over three weeks”? Lines 143-149: Were the frogs exposed to the novel arthropod prey items in their larger terraria, or were they first put in experimental arenas? Also, is it know if frogs will eat “normally” after being removed from a larger terrarium and placed into a smaller arena? Was a control performed, in which frogs were simply fed their normal diet of fruit flies in the experimental arenas? I think this would strengthen the findings. Line 152: I think “five big” should read “five large”. Lines 167-168: Why was a limited prey selection chosen for the alkaloid feeding experiment, as compared to the size-mediated experiment? Adding some clarification would strengthen this portion of the experiment. Lines 171-178: Did the authors examine the frogs for alkaloid content at the end of the experiment? Although there was a small effect of alkaloid “load” on prey interaction, the differences in alkaloid amount between frogs is not reported. My concern is that there was not a difference in alkaloids between treatments, or that the differences were too small to be biologically relevant. The authors cite Alvarez-Buylla et al., which conducted a similar type of alkaloid feeding experiment over the course of 5 days. However, in the present paper, the “low-DHQ” treatment was fed to frogs 3 times, whereas the “high-DHQ” treatment was fed to frogs 6 times. The difference between treatments is only 3 feedings (that occurred over a longer time period for the high treatment), which may not have been large enough to result in a difference in alkaloid content between frog treatments. Comparing the alkaloid content in frogs between treatments would provide more clarification. Line 179-180: (1) “Videos” should be “videos” (2) How many videos could not be scored due to camera malfunction? The number or percentage should be reported. Also, how does this change the overall sample size of the experiment? Line 254: (1) Why are the results heading different than the method headings? (2) The heading is confusing, as both small and large things are prey. But, more importantly, the result stating that there “was no preference for small versus large ants or larvae within this behavioral assay” contradicts the heading. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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