Peer Review History
Original SubmissionMay 26, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-15309Factors impacting adherence to an exercise-based physical therapy program for individuals with low back painPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shahidi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 26 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this important paper. Overall it is an important topic that is often under-examined. However, I have a few major and some minor comments that should be addressed before considering this manuscript for publication. Major Comments: 1) It would be beneficial to define adherence in the introduction. In the introduction and the abstract, it is unclear if adherence has to do with adhering to the rehabilitation program, which includes attending appointments or adhering to the program provided by the rehab experts, such as home exercise programs or general physical activity recommendations. Part of this is the novelty of this research, most research focuses on adherence to HEP and not adherence to attending PT sessions, so the readers can get easily confused. 2) In the introduction, you mention logistic limitations, such as lack of insurance coverage. Thus it is highly recommended that insurance coverage is added to the independent predictor variables included in your model. It is also recommended that lack of geographic accessibility is incorporated into the models as they are the top factors you identified as being contributors to non-adherence. 3) Most of the discussion are the results written in a narrative format. It is recommended that the authors expand on the discussion to add insight into the "so what?" Minor Comments: Abstract: 1) Your objective is related to predictors of adherence and reasons for non-adherence. But your results are primarily about those who discontinued the program. Recommend combining the first four sentences and expanding on the last one, which relates more to the objectives. 2) The conclusion should relate to your results. I think re-writing your results will help with this. Introduction: 1) Some more background information about potential factors/expanding on the following: "Logistic limitations such as lack of insurance coverage and accessibility restrictions have been shown to affect trial enrollment and may reduce selection of populations with restricted resources." This would also help justify the reason you picked the four discharge categories on top of page 8. Methods: 1) line 116-please specify wat clinics, outpatient physical therapy clinics? 2) It would be valuable to justify your independent predictors in the introduction or in the methods. Currently, most of the predictor variables seem random. Furthermore, some of the predictors included in the model per Table 2 are not presented in the methods. Including these in the methods would decrease the appearance of the predictors being at random. 3) Since chart data is used, it would be valuable to have a section on how missingness will be/was handled. Results: 1) Please add a footnote on abbreviations used in the table. 2) Table 1- I find it hard to believe that Baseline VAS is significant when the 95%CI includes 1. Please double-check these values. Discussion: 1) I fully believe that this is novel and understudied, but I can't entirely agree with the second statement as a quick google search found the following article and results: https://bmcmusculoskeletdisord.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/1471-2474-11-124 “actors that significantly correlated with adherence included: age (r = 0.7, p < 0.05), initial pain intensity (r = 0.5, p < 0.05), and subjective report of improvement (r = 0.7, p < 0.01). Adherence did not correlate with the type of LBP, patient occupation, experience or nationality of the physiotherapist." 2) I would like to see references or further support regarding the conclusion written on line 259, "suggesting adherence is not affected by insufficient health capacity." 3) The information in paragraph three of the discussion strengthens the reasons why this study should be conducted but doesn't expand on the results. I recommend moving most of this information into the introduction. 4) Throughout the paper, you mention supervised sessions, but this is different from skilled physical therapy sessions. At some point, this needs to be differentiated. Are these patients receiving skilled physical therapy or participating in a supervised exercise program? I say this because many of the references you are using in the discussion are from supervised exercise programs and not skilled physical therapy, and adherence to these are expected to be different. Reviewer #2: Reviewer Summary and General Comments This manuscript assess demographic and specific clinical factors as predictors of adherence to an exercise-based rehabilitation program among individuals with low back pain. In addition, they assess reasons individuals were non-adherent to the program. The contributions of these findings to the literature are very important given the lack of adherence assessment within the literature, as well as lack of assessing why individuals struggle to adhere to these important and effective rehabilitation programs. However, there are a few minor points that are unclear to the reviewer and should be addressed prior to the publication of this manuscript. Please see the list below by each section: Ethics Statement • It is not stated within this statement whether consent was written or oral. Please clarify. Abstract • Check spacing after periods throughout. It looks like a single space in generally used, however within the conclusion on Line 47 there appear to be extra spaces. Introduction • Line 71-72 – Do you have a reference for this statement? In addition, do the authors have information as to how often recurrences and progression to chronic LBP occur? Methods • Line 115 – As mentioned above, can you clarify whether written/oral informed consent was obtained? Additionally, was the IRB through UCSD? If so, please include here as well. • Line 117-118 – The dates as currently written here are a bit confusing to read, may be clearer to write out the month and then year (e.g., November 2015). • Line 118 – Can the authors provide a rationale for using gender instead of the more appropriate term sex? Or possibly clarify individuals who identified as either male or female gender had information collected? • Lines 126-137 – This section may benefit from numbering the criteria for each specific diagnostic category. For example: “… patients were categorized in the lumbar stenosis category if they had, 1) neurogenic claudication and/or radicular leg symptoms, or 2) confirmatory cross-sectional imaging showing lumbar spinal stenosis at one or more levels.” • Lines 139-140 – Can the author clarify how long the rehabilitation program was within this sentence? It appears it was 10 weeks, but the exact duration is unclear. • Although mentioned later in the manuscript, a brief explanation for how missing data were handled in the statistical analysis section should be included. • Line 175 – Can the authors define NSAID. This appears to be the first time NSAID has been written in the paper and thus should be defined. • Can the authors provide a rationale for not looking at adherence as a continuous measure (e.g., percent adherence), in addition to the binary measure used in this analysis? Results/Tables • Check alignment/spacing within each table and table legend. • A footnote should be included for each table that should include the definition of each abbreviation used within the table. • Table 1 – the colons used for gender, smoking history, diabetes diagnosis, and radiculopathy diagnosis are a bit confusing. Perhaps a / would be clearer to use. (e.g., 44.8/55.2) • Table 2 – not all units are included within this table, please check to be sure they are added for each variable. Discussion • Line 248 – Given this is a rehabilitation program, not necessarily a supervised exercise program, this line should be adjusted to read along the lines of: “..long term supervised rehabilitation exercise program…” • Lines 260-263 – Did the authors happen to examine the demographic breakdown of those who reported discontinuation due to inability to obtain insurance authorization or transportation means? May be something important to include depending on the results. • Lines 291-297 – Perhaps including the authors thoughts as to why such a big difference in percent adherence was found between the two example programs mentioned may add to the impact of this paragraph. Conclusion • Line 336-337 – The authors should re-word, there appears to be a missing word or some re-arranging that makes this sentence unclear. Reviewer #3: 1. In their investigation of adherence, the authors do not consider activity tolerance to the prescribed intervention as a factor in adherance. Consideration for pain rating and pain trajectory may strengthen the argument for tolerance and appropriateness of the exercise prescription provided to the study group. 2. The authors do not detail why BMI was an exclusion criteria. Elaboration of this point would help justification of the sample. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Factors impacting adherence to an exercise-based physical therapy program for individuals with low back pain PONE-D-22-15309R1 Dear Dr. Bahar Shahidi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ravi Shankar Yerragonda Reddy, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors have done a nice job with this revision and have addressed all of my comments. Therefore, I have no further comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Katherine A. Collins ********** |
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