Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 27, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-12178Effectiveness of interventions aimed at reducing HIV acquisition and transmission among gay and bisexual men who have sex with men (GBMSM) in high income settings: a systematic review.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sewell, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you will see, your manuscript was well received overall. I ask that you attend to all of the reviewer's comments as I think they make good points that could strengthen your manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 24 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The Authors present their systematic review paper well and in a layout that reads well. The methods are well described to explain the findings. The authors were able to assess for and be able to control foe bias in their inclusion methods. The references given are relevant to the subject and are adequate. The tables and figures are well laid out and easy to read. Reviewer #2: Thank you for inviting me to review this important paper. The paper aims to undertake a systematic review of prevention interventions in relation to reducing HIV transmission adding. This exercise was last undertaken in 2013. The paper is well written, relevant, clear and I have no issue with the statistical analyses. However, I think the paper would benefit from placing the results in the wider context of HIV prevention. General comments Firstly some interventions lend themselves more easily to be studied under an RCT design, and while the necessity of restricting to these studies only is necessary for a quantitative systematic review, it does lead to a risk of not including evidence of other interventions that cannot be studies as well through this design. Similarly the evidence base for a lot of strong interventions TASP etc apparent before this time frame. While this acknowledged on page 36 para 1, I think the authors need to be clear in their conclusions their analysis is only related to what met their criteria, and that their findings do not replace the strong evidence of tASP etc. Secondly, the paper would benefit to put the context of why this is now relevant – most high income countries have an ambition to end HIV transmission in gay and bisexual men and this work is needed to provide evidence of where efforts should be focussed The intro and abstract correctly set the context of that a reduction in HIV transmission is not equally felt across all gay men, and ethnicity minorities etc are more likely tobe left behind. However, at present paper provides little insight of how the interventions assessed can help reduce inequalities. There is some mention of specific groups being under study in table 1, however, there is little synthesis of evidence about reducing inequalities other than stating specific interventions worked for some populations. It may not be possible to say much more the need that evidence based interventions that showed strongest effect need to be culturally competent in their implementation to make them accessible - but needs to be included as limitation in discussion. There needs to be acknowledgement that a hierarchy of prevention interventions is not particularly helpful – it has been shown that combination prevention is necessary to end HIV transmission -focussing on PrEP only for instance, neglects the need to reduce transmission by ensuring rapid linkage to care following diagnosis and support to attain viral suppression. Apologies if I missed it but it is not clear while this was restricted to RCTs only – presumably to allow the statistical analysis… Major comments Major comments: Abstract - please put setting in introduction since this is not a universal fact Abstract – conclusion suggest reword as “our systematic review of the recent evidence that we were able to analysedindicates” – I don’t think the design of the systematic review allowed for a comprehensive review of all prevention activities, e.g. including treatment as prevention, PEP, condoms, etc due to the time frame and necessity of being RCT design. In intro on page 10 , last sentence of intro can you quickly explain why you are restricting to RCT design, when Stromdahl did not, given your aims are to identify prevention efficacy in the years since Stromdahl published. Methods – page 10 last line – outcome is condomless anal intercourse, how can this be interpreted as an outcome related to HIV transmission when you are including PrEP as an intervention? Fir instance on page 15 one paper is cited as PrEP having a small increase in CLAI….. does that matter? Perhaps only restrict prep to the HIV incidence? Page 30 last para – surely issue is lack of access to Prep in subpopulations of MSM – perhaps better to say need interventions and research to increase uptake in these populations given overwhelming evidence of effectiveness Page 37 limitations of the data – only studies that met criteria analysed and these are likely underrepresent needs of groups with unmet needs Data synthesis – does this mean that there was no studies of other interventions, or that those interventions did not meet the criteria (sufficient quality, RCT etc) In results, perhaps make clear you are first looking at the impact on the outcomes, and then going through each intervention as it is hard to follow atm Conclusion needs reworking to show applicability on sub populations of gay men, and to acknowledge this does not replace evidence of tasp ETC, and need for combination prevention. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Effectiveness of interventions aimed at reducing HIV acquisition and transmission among gay and bisexual men who have sex with men (GBMSM) in high income settings: a systematic review. PONE-D-22-12178R1 Dear Dr. Sewell, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. I was unable to re-engage one of the prior reviewers; as such, I assumed the reviewer's role and judged that you adequately responded to their critiques. Nice job! Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ethan Moitra Brown University Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ubaldo Mushabe Bahemuka ********** |
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PONE-D-22-12178R1 Effectiveness of interventions aimed at reducing HIV acquisition and transmission among gay and bisexual men who have sex with men (GBMSM) in high income settings: a systematic review. Dear Dr. Sewell: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ethan Moitra Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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