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Original SubmissionApril 27, 2022
Decision Letter - Ehab Farag, Editor

PONE-D-22-10759The analgesic efficacy of pericapsular nerve group block in patients with intertrochanteric femur fracture: a randomized controlled trialPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Mingjian Kong 

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Reviewer #1: Partly

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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5. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study comparing Peripheral nerve blocks to Fascia iliaca compartment block. The manuscript to structured in a easy to read manner.

They a few comments worth addressing.

1. At the end of introduction, can the authors state the primary and secondary objectives.

2. Can the randomisation information include the allocation ratio.

3. Can the authors define their population of analysis for the primary analysis (e.g intent to treat), secondary and safety.

4. Table 1, as this this is an RCT, its recommended not to formally test baseline characteristics, any difference are simply due to chance and also do not serve a useful purpose so p-values should be omitted (see "Comparisons against baseline within randomised groups are often used and can be highly misleading by Bland JM, Altman 2011").

5. Any correction taken into account for multiple testing, i.e testing in each timepoint, increase you chance of finding a significant result?

6. Can the authors state whether a statistical analysis plan was signed off prior to unblinding?

7. Was there an oversight committee to monitor the safety of patients, its not mentioned in the manuscript?

Reviewer #2: Why do you think there was zero incidence of quadriceps motor weakness in the PENG block group compared to prior referenced studies that showed some degree of motor block, although still lower than fascia iliaca? You attributed it related to lower concentration or was the small sample size not adequately powered to detect secondary outcome measurements? Also would have been useful to measure quadriceps muscle strength at timepoints later than 6 hours

How was the method of passive exercise testing decided on? Is there a basis for using a 15 degree passive hip elevation?

How long after block performance were patients induced and surgery started? As t1 is 30 min post block time, does an increased length of time between block performance and starting the timer at the conclusion of surgery influence block duration when measured postop? The length of surgical time is shown but not the length of time between T1 and T2.

Source 13 does not refer to anything relevant to this study - need to edit this

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Revision 1

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Respected Editors:thanks for your review , modifications have been made in the manuscript as requested.

2. In your Data Availability statement, you have not specified where the minimal data set underlying the results described in your manuscript can be found. PLOS defines a study's minimal data set as the underlying data used to reach the conclusions drawn in the manuscript and any additional data required to replicate the reported study findings in their entirety. All PLOS journals require that the minimal data set be made fully available. For more information about our data policy, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability.

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Respected Editors:we have uploaded a separate minimal data.

3. We note you have included a table to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Table 4 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table.

Respected Editors:we have modified this and marked it in the manuscript.

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Respected Editors:We have added the title of the supporting information file to the end of the manuscript.

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Respected Editors:We have checked the reference list and made corrections to ensure it is complete and correct.(all revisions have been marked in the manuscript)

Reviewer 1

1.At the end of introduction, can the authors state the primary and secondary objectives.

It has been supplemented in the introduction section of the manuscript.We will be happy to edit the text further, based on helpful comments from the reviewers.

2.Can the randomisation information include the allocation ratio.

It has been supplemented in the Randomization and Blinding section of the manuscript.We will be happy to edit the text further, based on helpful comments from the reviewers.

3.Can the authors define their population of analysis for the primary analysis (e.g intent to treat), secondary and safety.

It has been supplemented in the discussion section of the manuscript.We will be happy to edit the text further, based on helpful comments from the reviewers.

4.Table 1, as this this is an RCT, its recommended not to formally test baseline characteristics, any difference are simply due to chance and also do not serve a useful purpose so p-values should be omitted (see "Comparisons against baseline within randomised groups are often used and can be highly misleading by Bland JM, Altman 2011").

We thank the reviewer for pointing out thi issue.We studied the document you provided and found that there was a misunderstanding. The baseline written on the form was a clerical error and has been deleted in the text. In our research groups were be compared directly by two-sample methods.

5.Any correction taken into account for multiple testing, i.e testing in each timepoint, increase you chance of finding a significant result?

We thank the reviewer for pointing out thi issue. We have taken this situation into consideration,VAS score belongs to grade data and does not conform to the normal distribution, so we use the median (interquartile spacing) for statistical description, and use Kruskal Wallis H test to get the result P < 0.05. It can be considered that the distribution of scores in each group is not the same, and the difference is statistically significant, and then compare them at different time points to find out the positive results.

6.Can the authors state whether a statistical analysis plan was signed off prior to unblinding?

This study developed a statistical analysis plan before Unblinding. The staff who conducted the data analysis did not understand the processing methods of each group. They only selected the corresponding statistical analysis method according to the type of data collected, and then unblinded after completing the statistical analysis of each group of data.

7. Was there an oversight committee to monitor the safety of patients, its not mentioned in the manuscript?

The Ethics Committee supervised the implementation of this study and protected the rights and interests of patients. Relevant contents have been supplemented in the study design and subjects section of the manuscript.

Reviewer 2

Why do you think there was zero incidence of quadriceps motor weakness in the PENG block group compared to prior referenced studies that showed some degree of motor block, although still lower than fascia iliaca? You attributed it related to lower concentration or was the small sample size not adequately powered to detect secondary outcome measurements? Also would have been useful to measure quadriceps muscle strength at timepoints later than 6 hours.

We thank the reviewer for pointing out thi issue.We consider that this situation may be the reason for the concentration. The reference study nerve block used 0.5% ropivacaine, and this study used 0.375% ropivacaine.

In addition to the time point of 6 hours after operation, we also measured the quadriceps femoris muscle strength at 12 hours and 24 hours after operation, but there was no positive result, so it was not included in the result.

How was the method of passive exercise testing decided on? Is there a basis for using a 15 degree passive hip elevation?

We refer to reference 15 for the specific methods of passive motion testing.We will be happy to edit the text further, based on helpful comments from the reviewers.

How long after block performance were patients induced and surgery started? As t1 is 30 min post block time, does an increased length of time between block performance and starting the timer at the conclusion of surgery influence block duration when measured postop? The length of surgical time is shown but not the length of time between T1 and T2.

We thank the reviewer for pointing out thi issue.We made statistics on T1-T2 of patients in each group, and the results were not statistically significant. Table1 has been supplemented with relevant data.

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Decision Letter - Rizaldy Taslim Pinzon, Editor

The analgesic efficacy of pericapsular nerve group block in patients with intertrochanteric femur fracture: a randomized controlled trial

PONE-D-22-10759R1

Dear Dr. Kong

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Additional Editor Comments (optional):

Thank you for addressing comments from the previous submission. The included tables and figures bring added clarity to the data and results.

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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #2: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing comments from the previous submission. The included tables and figures bring added clarity to the data and results.

One comment would be for the addition to the beginning of the discussion section: "We also

analyzed the safety of anesthesia related complications after nerve block surgery" - this sentence is unclear, the word surgery probably should not be included after nerve block.

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Reviewer #2: No

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Rizaldy Taslim Pinzon, Editor

PONE-D-22-10759R1

The analgesic efficacy of pericapsular nerve group block in patients with intertrochanteric femur fracture: a randomized controlled trial

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