Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 8, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-37884Effects of different amoxicillin treatment durations on microbiome diversity and composition in the gutPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Winther-Larsen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. THERE ARE SOME POTENTIALLY FATAL FLAWS INDENTIFIED, ESPECIALLY IN THE EXPERIMENTAL DESIGN. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 10 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Should your manuscript be accepted for publication, we will hold it until you provide the relevant accession numbers or DOIs necessary to access your data. If you wish to make changes to your Data Availability statement, please describe these changes in your cover letter and we will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide.. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, Lekang and colleagues seek to determine the acute and enduring effects of various levels of antibiotic treatment on composition of the fecal microbiome of mice. While this is an important problem to address and the authors do a good job of detailing changes at many taxonomic levels longitudinally, there are several weaknesses in study design and lack of novelty that render this work currently unsuitable for publication, as outlined in the following major and minor comments: MAJOR: 1. Is there justification for using all female animals in this study? Given that sex is an important determinant of microbial composition and both male and female patients receive antibiotic treatment, potential interactions with sex as a biological variable should be included in this study. 2. Were any measures taken to prevent coprophagy? This poses potential confounders including longer administration of the antibiotic than intended (re-administration of malabsorbed antibiotics) and re-inoculation of microbial taxa that may otherwise be eliminated by antibiotic use. 3. Were quantitative or preliminary studies performed to confirm that water consumption (and food consumption, for that matter) was stable across the entire 14 day period? For example, might water consumption decline across the experimental period due to bitter taste, GI symptoms, or changes in microbial composition? These factors would change not only the intended treatment, but microbial composition as well. Additonally, was the fruit flavor added to the water of group A as well? This is not clear. 4. Could baseline samples (prior to antibiotic treatment) be used to normalize inter-subject variability? For example, there is a lot of variability in the alpha diversity values (Figure 2) even at day 1, where assumedly groups B, C, and D should have consumed the same amount of antibiotic. This also raises the point that all groups seemingly experienced increases in alpha diversity throughout the study period, including the control group. 5. The authors do not report the total number of sequences, number of sequences surviving after quality control, and the distribution of sequences among samples. Was rarefaction performed? Alpha rarefaction plots would be important supplementary information that could confirm that sequencing depth was ample for these samples, particularly since the authors highlight findings for low-abundance/rare taxa. 6. The authors highlight the importance of antimicrobial resistance with prolonged antibiotic exposure, but provide no data to support or refute this occurrence. Is any evidence provided regarding function of this altered microbiota? This level of exposure may alter microbial composition, but the less-affected microbiota may simply be shifting to take up the niches of the more-affected microbes, thus not altering function nor causing long-term consequences even if composition remains slightly altered. These are very important and underexplored concepts that would add novelty to a seemingly redundant replication of data already extant in the literature. MINOR: 1. In the introduction (line 55 and throughout) “intestines” should always be singular (intestine). 2. If the point of the manuscript is to highlight differences in treatment duration on specific microbial taxa, it would be easier to make these comparisons if all treatment groups were graphed together for each taxa of interest. At present, it is difficult to make these comparisons given the number of small graphs that are spatially distant (example – figure 4). 3. A stacked bar graph or pie chart including all taxa (at levels of interest, to highlight impact of antibiotic administration) may more-clearly demonstrate broad effects on microbial composition, even if only supplementary. Reviewer #2: Overall, the manuscript is well written. I have some comments as the following: 1. Sample size. Please provide power analysis to justify the sample size. 2. On line 164, provide more details regarding the method used for DNA extraction. 3. On line 197, for the usage of DESeq2 to determine differentially abundant taxa. Please provide more details about what read counts were used? And did the author impose any cutoff for the read count, p-value and fold-change? 4. Figures 2-7 are very blurry. Please consider improve the resolution for publication. 5. Please consider depositing the data into public domain. 6. Is there any difference between oral administration and injection in terms of the amoxicillin treatment? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-21-37884R1Effects of different amoxicillin treatment durations on microbiome diversity and composition in the gutPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Winther-Larsen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. THERE ARE SOME FINAL MINOR CONCERNS THAT NEED TO BE ADDRESSED. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 10 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Juan J Loor Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thanks to the authors for addressing the vast majority of my comments, even if only to state them as limitations of the current study and important considerations for future work. One important piece of information that I could not find in the manuscript that MUST be included prior to publication is whether or not rarefaction was utilized for any/all analyses and to what number of reads all samples were rarefied. I see in supplementary table 1 that there were adequate read depths, but readers will still need to know the methods used for analyses (i.e. rarefaction depth). I do hope that authors follow through with their statement to deposit corresponding data and metadata in a publicly available database. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Effects of different amoxicillin treatment durations on microbiome diversity and composition in the gut PONE-D-21-37884R2 Dear Dr. Winther-Larsen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Juan J Loor Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-37884R2 Effects of different amoxicillin treatment durations on microbiome diversity and composition in the gut Dear Dr. Winther-Larsen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Juan J Loor Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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