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PONE-D-22-15747Does “Lottery Culture” Affect Household Financial Decisions? Evidence from ChinaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 15 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review comments: major revision Question 1: Can the "lottery culture" of each province from CNRDS be specific to families? Can it be consistent with the family data of CHFS? Please the authors give the answer. Suggestion 1: This paper uses cross-sectional data, so there should be no “area fixed effects” (because this paper is not panel data). Therefore, it is suggested that the author revalidate the empirical results and remove the line "Area fixed effects" to avoid common-sense empirical errors. Suggestion 2: It is suggested to add “variable introduction” in this paper, listing “(1) explained variables; (2) Core explanatory variables; (3) Control variables” for more clarity, and should not be mixed into model expressions and data introductions, which appear to be chaotic. Suggestion 3: The third explained variable —— “the diversity of financial portfolio”. The measurement formula is wrong. It is believed that it should not be “ ”, but should be “ ”,So this is the financial portfolio diversity index.. Suggestion 4: It is suggested that the three explained variables in this paper should be abbreviated in the introduction of variables, so as to be consistent with the empirical results in the following article and not make people feel very abrupt. Suggestion 5: It is suggested that all control variables in the empirical results do not need to be analyzed by empirical results interpretation. In addition, specific regression coefficients and standard errors are not required to be listed in the table of empirical results, and “YES” can be used to represent control, so as to highlight the influence of the core explanatory variables on the explained variables and echo the theme. Suggestion 6: In the explanation of endogeneity, it is suggested to explain in detail the two basic conditions —— exogeneity and correlation conditions —— for the selected instrumental variables (because this paper only explains correlation, not exogeneity);For the instrumental variables method used, the test for weak instrumental variables and the test for exogeneity of instrumental variables (only the weak instrumental variables test is explained in this paper) should be performed, and it is suggested that the authors conduct additional tests to ensure the completeness of the endogeneity explanation in this paper. Suggestion 7: Robustness test: For the first two explained variables, this paper uses the logit model to replace the OLS model. For the third explained variable —— the diversity of financial portfolio. Please explain clearly what specific variable is used to replace the third explained variable in this paper (Table 4,Column 5), and suggest that columns 3-4 of Table 4 should be dropped because they have nothing to do with the robustness check for this article. Suggestion 8: In the further analysis, that is, the mechanism test in this paper, the random disturbance terms in equations (3) and (4) should be represented by different letters to distinguish them accordingly; In addition, there is no need to list specific regression coefficients and standard errors for all control variables in the table, and “YES” can be used to represent control. Suggestion 9: It is suggested to add the corresponding research hypothesis of mechanism analysis into the research hypothesis (Hypothesis 3a: "Lottery culture" influences household financial decisions through household risk attitude "; Hypothesis 3b: "Lottery culture" influences household financial decisions through human capital.) In order to echo before and after the part. Suggestion 10: Pay attention to the translation errors in the text (e.g., Does "Lottery Culture" Affect Household Financial Decisions?—— Evidence from China; Previous research show that "lottery culture" have significant impacts on corporate decisions, Household investment portfolio choices and stock returns. Chen et al.[2], etc.) and standardize the reference format of this paper. Reviewer #2: (1) What's your definition of “lottery culture”? Can it comprehensively be measured by the ratio of the per capita lottery sales to the per capita GDP of provinces? My suggestion is that the authors should cite more literature. (2) Is the result of analysis with cross-sectional data convincing? Why didn’t you use panel data? Please explain why you used cross-sectional data instead of panel data. (3) There are many factors that affect family financial decision-making. Please explain the selection of control variables and the possible reasons for the analysis results. (4) Is there a science to choosing the number of Chinese Football Super League and China Basketball Association teams as the instrument variable? Please explain it by citing more literature. (5) Is there any theoretical support for the intermediary mechanism? Why didn’t you propose the hypotheses on it in part 2 (Hypotheses Development)? My suggestion is that the authors should add some description about mediated relation between “lottery culture” and family financial decision-making in the second part. (6) Is the conclusion of the data analysis in 2017 applicable after 2020 (COVID-19)? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dong Haisong Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Does “lottery culture” affect household financial decisions? Evidence from China PONE-D-22-15747R1 Dear Dr. Dan Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ricky Chee Jiun Chia Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-15747R1 Does “lottery culture” affect household financial decisions? Evidence from China Dear Dr. Wang: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ricky Chee Jiun Chia Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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