Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 21, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-17748Sweetpotato-based infant food as an alternative complementary formulationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Amagloh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 18 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Although the aims of the study are good, it was planned and carried out very superficially. It has been seen that the written language, sample, analyzes and methods of construction are not sufficient. Samples are not well explained, not understandable. It is thought that measuring each of the samples in the viscosity study by bringing them to the same dry matter significantly affects the difference between the samples. It is thought that the evaluation made in this way will not give correct results. Reviewer #2: PONE-D-22-17748-peer-review-v1.comments Sweetpotato-based infant food as an alternative complementary formulation Comment 1: The research is quite innovative and interesting, with clearly established objectives and conclusions. Comment 2: Abstract: The following line is little bit confusing, it is recommended to rephrase it to make it more clear and easily understandable: ‘However, the protein content in the porridges on an as-would-be-eaten basis was about 6% lower.’ Comment 3: Abstract: Have you mentioned the amount and the desirable water content for proper mixing of the blends? Comment 4: 62: Is not 10 ppb really high even to be marked as maximum level for infant cereals, when we are talking about the acceptable levels as 0.18-0.39 ppb? Comment 5: Line No. 109: Did you measures moisture and protein content only in nutritional parameters? If so, what about the determination of other nutritional contents like minerals, fiber and vitamins? Comment 6: Line No. 150: Have you mentioned anywhere about total number of samples or treatments that you have used? Comment 7: Line No. 223: In my opinion this level of alfatoxin as reported from the results here are high for infant consumption. Please add justification. Comment 8: Line No. Conclusion: Overall the study is good, but in this type of study a small animal based efficacy investigation should also be included as to ensure pros and cons of the product developed. Without having its safety confirmation we are unable to recommend such innovative idea. Reviewer #3: The research article “Sweetpotato-based infant food as an alternative complementary formulation” by Francis seeks to describe the combination of different ingredients and their properties and product studies (protein and viscosity). The article needs extensive corrections. I think the author should change the title it did not match with the content. Comment 1: First, the English language has to be corrected, the authors use too much every-day spoken English, too much for a scientific publication. Comment 2: Authors should add the descriptive sensory analysis or 9-point hedonic scale and shelf life of porridge. Comment 3: The author should add the physico-chemical properties of multigrain porridge such as fat, crude fiber, ash, and carbohydrates Comment 4: Author should check the dough's rheological properties which are prepared from orange maize. Comment 3: The abbreviation CHE have no sense in line number 104-105, the abbreviation details should be added in line number 101-104 (The ingredients of the control formulation included whole corn flour (CHE indicated on the package), skimmed milk, sucrose, palm olein, acidity regulator, calcium carbonate, vitamins, ferrous fumarate, vanillin, zinc sulphate, Bifidus culture, and potassium iodide.) Comment 6: In line number 114 the author should clearly add which type of dry process and instrument were used for drying at 108°C overnight. Comment 7: Rewrite the viscosity measurement protocol from line number 124-142. Comment 8: In Table 1 no need for the repetition of (n=1), you can add it at end of the table Example: Data are presented as mean ± SD (n = 3) a-nMeans with the same superscript in a column do not vary significantly (p<0.05) from each other In table 1 author adds the value please justify then and explain in paragraph also. Or the author removes those values. Comment 9: The author checks the result discussion and conclusion part. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
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PONE-D-22-17748R1Sweetpotato-based infant foods have lower viscous porridge and total aflatoxins level than cereal-based complementary blendsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Amagloh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please take into consideration the comments raised by Reviewer 1. The language has to be checked by a native speaker. This will be the last option for revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 15 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Fatih Oz, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, Please take into consideration the comments raised by Reviewer 1. The language has to be checked by a native speaker. This will be the last option for revision. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Unfortunately, my views on the study before the revision have not changed. The study was planned and carried out very superficially. It has been seen that the written language, sample, analyzes and methods of construction are not sufficient. Samples are not well explained, not understandable. The author made few changes in the article and could not give adequate answers to the comments and suggestions of other referees due to various reasons. Reviewer #2: You have revised this paper in a very good way. Thanks a lot for your great work. Wish you all the best. Reviewer #3: The author addresses all comments. But the author should take the comments in a positive way which helps their manuscript to make more effective. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rana Muhammad Aadil Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Sweetpotato-based infant foods produce porridge with lower viscosity and aflatoxin level than cereal-based complementary blends PONE-D-22-17748R2 Dear Dr. Amagloh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Fatih Oz, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-17748R2 Sweetpotato-based infant foods produce porridge with lower viscosity and aflatoxin level than cereal-based complementary blends Dear Dr. Amagloh: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Fatih Oz Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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