Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 13, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-25498Age and micronutrient effects on the microbiome in a mouse model of zinc depletion and supplementationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ho, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers felt the work was interesting but noted a number of issues that need to be more adequately addressed. In particular, the discussion would benefit from more information regarding predicted microbial metabolic changes in response to age/dietary zinc and a more thorough explanation of the connection to IL6 and existing work in the field. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 27 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper was overall quite good and the results weren't unexpected based on other mouse/zinc/microbiome studies, but I would have liked to see data on changes in predicted microbial metabolic pathways of the bacteria (i.e. KEGG analysis or something) with changes in age/dietary zinc. Line 88 To further support the importance of considering zinc deficiency/bioavailability in combination with another condition, suggest mentioning this reference on zinc and pregnancy effects on the microbiome: DOI: 10.3389/fnins.2019.01295 Line 109-110 Could the authors please further clarify this statement? How does the microbiome contribute to changes in zinc availability? Does microbial metabolite profile change with host age? Line 125 Could the authors add a sentence that summarizes the key points of their recently published work (reference 19)? Line 161 The authors use “IL-6” in the methods section, and then use “IL6” in the discussion – suggest sticking with one abbreviation for consistency. Also, could the author define IL6 as Interleukin 6 in the first mention of the abbreviation? Line 168 Could the authors include either tables or figures in either the main text or supplemental information that show the results of measured serum zinc and IL6 (i.e. show if there are differences in serum zinc and or IL6 between the ZA/ZD and ZA/ZS groups)? Line 298 For Figure 1D, could it be clarified in the manuscript in the Figure caption if the subjects shown are on a specific diet? Is there a way to show the average of specific groups - i.e. average all the aged mice on the zinc adequate diet instead of showing all subjects in each group? Line 536 This reference mentions that Lachnospiraceae can potentially be predictive of zinc status, which may further support the authors’ statement that this bacteria family responded to changes in dietary zinc: DOI: 10.3390/nu13103399 Line 560 The authors did excellent work looking at which bacteria were responsive to changes in dietary zinc. The authors could consider looking into predicted functions of the bacteria based on the bacteria present to help strengthen the paper. What are the specific (predicted) functional capacities that are impacted by dietary zinc? Do the authors have an idea which conserved genomic functions are related to dietary zinc? Reviewer #2: In this work, Davis et al. used a multifactor approach to describe the complex interplay between age and nutritional factors in the gut microbiota. They determine that the microbial composition is impacted strongly by age (young v. old) but less so by nutrient zinc. Though the overall composition was not changed by zinc, they did detect alterations in key phylogenetic clades that were zinc dependent. This work was interesting but would benefit from a more thorough explanation of the connection to IL6 and existing work in the field. Elaboration on some points listed below would greatly help with comprehension. Key points: - There is a disconnect between the primary story and the introduction of IL6. Inflammation is minimally mentioned and ‘inflammaging’ introduced only in the discussion. o Ln 158-162. Is this how IL6 was measured? If so, please explicitly state IL6 measured from blood. o Sentence at Ln 167-168 is confusing. Was LPS-induced IL6 included in this study? - This manuscript needs more references. The discussion reads as a reiteration of the conclusions and many topics are not well developed/supported with citations. Authors should outline novelty from these findings and how they fit into the current understanding of the gut microbiome. Consider including information from the human microbiome literature. - Dispersion differences across experiments are not well addressed. Ln 286-292. Do the authors believe this to be diet dependent? This would be helpful to know before combining all data together for models. o I appreciate the authors purchasing mice from different locations. Was baseline sequencing performed? Could this contribute to dispersion differences? - Fig 1. Adequate and deficient/supplemented mice should be made clear by color or symbol. I would recommend replacing fig 1C with supp fig 1A. - Understanding directionality of differences is confusing throughout. Adding abundance levels of each organism to supplemental tables would be helpful to know when abundance is increasing/decreasing across age or diet. This is clear in fig 2. - Please include information about sample size, type (fecal, cecum, colon), and timepoint in methods and figure legends. Minor: - Please check usage throughout for microbiota v. microbiome. - Ln 34. Please remove the word ‘elevated’. - Ln 47. Please remove ‘at each’. - Ln 49. Replace ‘components’ with ‘taxa’ - Ln 52-53. Remove ‘of microbiota’ - Ln 54-55. Remove ‘there exists’ and change to ‘interplay exists’ - Ln 74. Remove first ‘more’ - Ln 103. Remove ‘,including zinc,’ this is redundant. - Ln 332-333. Remove ‘in order to detect these taxa’ - Ln 341-344. Remove this section. This is restated in the following section - Ln 369-371. References? These have a different format (#) v. [#]. - It would be helpful to have panel titles added to figures 3 and 4. Or changing symbols so age and diet are clearly different. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Age and micronutrient effects on the microbiome in a mouse model of zinc depletion and supplementation PONE-D-22-25498R1 Dear Dr. Ho, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Brenda A Wilson, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have appropriately addressed the comments provided by this reviewer. The manuscript is now acceptable. Reviewer #2: I appreciate the efforts the authors have made to make this manuscript more cohesive, all of my concerns were addressed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-25498R1 Age and micronutrient effects on the microbiome in a mouse model of zinc depletion and supplementation Dear Dr. Ho: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Brenda A Wilson Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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