Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 1, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-12798EVALUATION OF RIGHT VENTRICULAR FUNCTION DURING LIVER TRANSPLANTATION WITH TRANSESOPHAGEAL ECHOCARDIOGRAPHYPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gouvêa, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The authors should improve the quality of their manuscript by addressing all issues raised by expert reviewers and by editing the english and grammar of the text. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 01 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Cardiac complications in liver disease, especially in cirrhosis, are associated with increased mortality following liver transplant. Pre-transplant guidelines recommend risk stratification with 2D and dobutamine stress echocardiography, which may lead to coronary angiography or right heart catheterization. There is a paucity of data on the utility of RV hemodynamics during the perioperative period. Cardiovascular events have a major impact on the outcomes of liver transplantation, especially since contemporary liver transplant patients are older than their predecessors and more likely to have cardiac comorbidities. Additionally, the pathophysiologic effects of advanced liver disease on the circulatory system pose challenges to perioperative management in liver transplant. 2012 American College of Cardiology and American Heart Association (ACC/AHA) guidelines for evaluation of cardiac disease in kidney and liver transplant patients note that it is reasonable for patients to undergo echocardiography to assess for pulmonary hypertension and intrapulmonary arteriovenous shunting, while 2014 guidelines from the American Association for the Study of Liver Diseases (AASLD) and American Society of Transplantation (AST) note that echo for this purpose should be done routinely. Portopulmonary hypertension is found in 5% to 10% of patients with chronic liver disease. Unless patients undergo liver transplant or start appropriate medical therapy, portopulmonary hypertension carries a very poor prognosis. The pathophysiologic mechanisms specific to PoPHTN have been compared with other known forms of pulmonary hypertension, including primary pulmonary hypertension, and has been found to fall within a spectrum of disorders related to factors both due to intrinsic liver failure [with resultant portal hypertension and hepatopulmonary syndrome (HPS)] as well as pulmonary vascular remodeling. The heart and the liver are in close relation to each other. Impairment of cardiac function may lead to hepatic dysfunction and vice versa. Liver hypoperfusion and hepatic congestion are the 2 central pathophysiological mechanisms, both in acute cardiogenic liver injury and hepatic congestion. Cirrhotic cardiomyopathy is a syndrome that includes systolic, diastolic, and electrophysiological abnormalities that develop in the setting of liver cirrhosis. A significant number of patients presenting for liver transplant carry hemodynamic sequelae of end-stage liver disease, including generalized vasodilation, low systemic vascular resistance and an impaired vasoconstrictive response to endogenous and exogenous vasoconstrictors. These patients also have simultaneous central hypovolemia with splanchnic hypervolemia. The combination of acute blood loss, large fluid shifts and manipulation of the inferior vena cava during surgery can put significant stress on the cardiovascular system. Because of these factors, intraoperative hemodynamic instability is common during the dissection phase of liver transplant (due to blood loss) and the hepatic phase (due to obstruction of the inferior vena cava). Mean normal TAPSE and PAPI in the literature are 2.0cm and 2.75, respectively, but in many studies mean TAPSE was 2.52cm and PAPI was 3.54. This is likely explained by the high cardiac output state in cirrhosis. In the RV failure group, TAPSE and PAPI were within the normal range suggesting the need to identify a different baseline for patients with a hyperdynamic state due to cirrhosis. RV function was impaired in patients with cirrhosis and more commonly, in patients with ascites. However, values of RV-GLS did not distinguish the degree of severity of liver disease. In addition, the LVEF was low and LV-GLS was normal in patients with cirrhosis. The manuscript contains many critical points. As stated by the authors, the number of enrolled patients is low and the "normal" haemodynamic conditions of the patients place this group as not representative of the average liver transplant population. Other significant data is linked to the hyper dynamism of patients with hepatic insufficiency which can lead to a maintenance of TAPSE values in the normal range. It would be more appropriate to study a GL strain of the RV. The manuscript lacks data on fluid therapy (quantity and water balance) and pharmacological treatment (quantity of vasoconstrictor, if repeated boluses or continuous infusion). We do not know if it was present and how the pulmonary pressure changed; the degree of tricuspid insufficiency present was mild and this situation may worsen during intraoperative maneuvers with consequent maintenance of TAPSE, in the face of an increase in pulmonary pressure. The manuscript is interesting and I agree with extending intraoperative echocardiographic evaluation to most liver transplant candidates. I would also suggest to evaluate, in addition to the parameters reported in the study, also the tissue doppler and the global strain of the right ventricle. Reviewer #2: The authors are to be commended for this study of RV function during liver transplantation. The study is well done, acknowledges prior studies on this subject appropriately, and adds to the body of evidence concerning monitoring of RV function throughout the operative period of liver transplantation. The manuscript flows well, no significant grammatical errors (although authors should read the final version closely to eliminate any grammar problems), and is scientifically rigorous. I wanted to state the method used for TAPSE is the m-TAPSE but this was noted in the methods section. One consideration is to explain this earlier (such as the introduction) but I don't think it's absolutely necessary. The common surgical method for liver transplant anastomosis - partial caval clamp - was performed in the study which makes the findings of RV assessment that much more relevant to current practice of intraoperative monitoring. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Evaluation of right ventricular function during liver transplantation with transesophageal echocardiography PONE-D-22-12798R1 Dear Dr. Gouvêa, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you very much for addressing every questions. In this revised version, the manuscript is clearer in understanding the cardiovascular issues in liver transplant patients. Some points deserve more elucidation, but in consideration of the understanding of the text, they would not produce substantial improvements. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the revision of your manuscript. The discussion section is greatly improved and this study adds to the body of evidence regarding RV function and monitoring of it during liver transplantation. I didn't find any large grammar errors and the conclusion discusses all of the results appropriately. It flows well and doesn't make assumptions that aren't supported by data - it is scientifically rigorous. I hope that the authors consider a larger study in the future or a multicenter study. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: luigi tritapepe Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-12798R1 Evaluation of right ventricular function during liver transplantation with transesophageal echocardiography Dear Dr. Gouvêa: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Vincenzo Lionetti Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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