Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 31, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-09461Muscle contractile exercise through a belt electrode device prevents myofiber atrophy, muscle contracture, and muscular pain in immobilized rat gastrocnemius musclePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Honda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. You will see that the reviewers have raised a range of concerns (please further below), from minor aspects on formatting to more substantial aspects on methodological clarity and approaches, which could alter the results and their interpretation. Therefore, I would invite you to carefully consider each comment and address it appropriately. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 09 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Editor, Re: "Muscle contractile exercise through a belt electrode device prevents myofiber atrophy, muscle contracture, and muscular pain in immobilized rat gastrocnemius muscle " Thank you for my opportunity to review this manuscript. The study used the immobilized rat gastrocnemius muscle model to show the consequences of the belt electrode device on skeletal muscle. The device was used as the therapeutic method to alleviate the myofiber atrophy, muscle contracture, and muscular pain effects caused by immobilization. The objectives of the study are clearly stated, the concept and the experimental design of this study is well structured and the experiments are well conducted. However, there are points need to be addressed to increase the reliability and quality of the manuscript. Reviewer Comments: 1. The name of the abscissa axis in Figure 1. B is wrong, and the author wants to express the stimulation time, not the stimulation intensity. 2. The special symbols for p-values denoting between-group differences in Figure 2. B and Figure 5. B do not exactly match the legends. 3. According to the author's experimental results in Figure 4. A, we found that there are only type IIb muscle fibers in the superficial gastrocnemius muscle in this experiment. How to determine that there are only type IIb muscle fibers in the superficial gastrocnemius muscle? 4. In the text, the baseline PPT of the gastrocnemius muscles in the LF group was higher than that in the immobilization group. However, in Figure 6. A, the gastrocnemius muscle baseline PPT value in the LF group was lower than in the fixed group. Reviewer #2: This study was to test the physiological benefit of repeated muscle contractile exercise using a belt electrode device in an animal model with both ankle joints immobilization. The authors reported that myofiber atrophy, joint movement limitation, and mechanical muscle hyperalgesia were observed in immobilized rats, and muscle contractile exercise through the belt electrode device was beneficiary in preventing them. In general, the study has translational significance followed with previous studies. The method was detailed, and data were presented clearly to support the conclusion. However, there are some major comments to improve this paper before I would recommend that the paper be published. If the authors can address my concerns, I am happy to review this paper again. In addition, here are some minor essential changes needed and some suggestions to consider. Major essential changes needed: 1. In this study, myonuclear apoptosis is mentioned as one of the mechanisms of skeletal muscle atrophy, but the involvement of muscle protein synthesis and degradation is ignored. The total and phosphorylated forms of Akt, p70S6K, and 4E-BP1 (FoxO 1/3 phosphorylation would also be informative) in each experimental group should be added as items to be examined. For example, the time course of the acute effect of a single bout of muscle contractile exercise through the belt electrode device on their phosphorylation should be investigated. In particular, Akt-mTOR signaling pathways may orchestrate both a positive protein metabolism in skeletal muscle and myonuclear apoptosis. 2. Methods. In statistical analysis for "range of motion on ankle joint dorsiflexion" and "pressure pain threshold", a split-plot ANOVA using 2 factors (time [baseline vs. 1W vs. 2W] and group [control vs. immobilization vs. LF vs. HF]) must be used to determine the interaction and main effects, after verifying the normality of the data. Minor essential changes needed: 1. Methods. Please add the length of time between last electrical stimulation, and euthanasia and tissue collection. Exercise itself can raise macrophage accumulation, NGF upregulation, and some cytokines in tissues. This will help exercise physiology readers interpret the results compared to their own. 2. Methods. The authors described "2 sec (do)/6 sec (rest) duty cycle" as low-frequency and "2 sec (do)/2 sec (rest) duty cycle" as high-frequency for electrical stimulation conditions. It is necessary to clarify the definition of low-frequency or high-frequency in the electrical stimulation conditions. 3. Methods. To mention that 60% maximal voluntary contraction is most effective in preventing skeletal muscle atrophy, should be provided a clear link to the previous studies referenced. In general, it is defined not only by the intensity of muscle contraction exercise, but also by the number of exercises and the number of sets. 4. Methods. What is the stimulus intensity you set when you conducted the preliminary experiment to determine the stimulus time? 5. Results. For histological observation, the quality of the tissue images stained with immunohistochemistry (Figure 2A) and H&E (Figure 3) were poor in the PDF file. Minor suggested changes: 1. Introduction. Hypotheses should be added at the end of the Introductory section. 2. Results. In lines 224 on page 10 to line 226 on page 11, "In the immobilization, LF, and HF groups..." seems to be more appropriate than "In the immobilization, LF, HF groups...". 3. Results. In lines 253-254 on page 12, “The CSA of type IIa myofibers was...” could be more accurate if change to “The CSA of type IIa myofibers in the deep region was...”. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Yun Zhou Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Muscle contractile exercise through a belt electrode device prevents myofiber atrophy, muscle contracture, and muscular pain in immobilized rat gastrocnemius muscle PONE-D-22-09461R1 Dear Dr. Okita, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The revised version of the manuscript by Honda Y et al. has included satisfactory changes and the queries raised have also been adequately dealt with. Reviewer #2: The authors have been very responsive to my concerns. I have no more concerns. I agree with their statements and changes in response to the other reviewers as well. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Yun Zhou Reviewer #2: Yes: Masahiro Iwata ********** |
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PONE-D-22-09461R1 Muscle contractile exercise through a belt electrode device prevents myofiber atrophy, muscle contracture, and muscular pain in immobilized rat gastrocnemius muscle Dear Dr. Okita: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Theodoros M. Bampouras Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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