Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 27, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-15355Globalization and social distance: Multilevel analysis of attitudes toward immigrants in the European UnionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tzeng, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. You certainly have chosen a topical issue about the attitudes towards migrants in the European Union. To be able to consider the paper for publication in the journal, there is some substantial work to revise the manuscript. The two reviewers gave you very detailed critical remarks and comments (especially Reviewer 2), which need to be responded to, but first and foremost, considered deeply in your revision - as far as structuring your thoughts and presenting your findings, the methodology, additional literature, as well as conclusions are concerned. Take these points seriously and submit your corrected, more scientifically sound and elaborated paper. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 14 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper is first and foremost based on an Eurobarometer survey from 2017. Bearing in mind events that took place since that the collection of that dataset, an attempt to use more up to date date should have been considered. The continuation (albeit in a more limited way) of the migration and asylum crisis, as well as the Covid-19 pandemic may have had a considerable effect on the examined issues. As an even more recent development, the Ukraine conflict's effects could also be considered. The secondary sources used should also be updated as a lack of recent literature is partly percievable. All in all the analysis definitely has merits, but the reader is left with a sense that had the paper been more up-to-date, it would have resulted in a much more valuable scientific contribution. In any case, the conclusion part should be considerably expanded as well. Reviewer #2: Globalization and social distance: Multilevel analysis of attitudes toward immigrants in the European Union Recently, migration, migration-related issues are undoubtedly significant research topics. The title promises that the authors adress their study to those migration patterns that affect the European Union. But at the same time authors have undertaken to find relation between globalization and social distance. As a reviewer I would suggest to make a much more narrow and clear focus in the abstract. In this shape the abstract is blurry and unclear to understand the real aim of this study. Lately authors use EU and Europe as an interchangeable term, but it is not proper at all. If they speak about the EU, then authors ought to focus on the 26 member states formed and operated political and economic cooperation. I would encourage authors to cite much more. Citations provide relevant info that writers are aware of the basic, related and adequate literature. This is now missing at many places, for instance in the 64-65th row. Just for sure, the EU did not receive "more than one million immigrants", but more than 1,5 million refugees / asylum seekers and economic migrants arrived and accrossed the external border of the EU, hundred thousands of them illegally, many of them as asylum seekers who applied for refugee status. The so-called hypotheses in the 67-68-69th sentence must be testified by using different methodology. First a theoretical and historical description what is totally missing now, and then the utilized multilevel analyses. What is also worth mentioning that seemingly the EU is a united entity, but in the reality it is not at all. There are 26 countries who are making different policies towards migration and migrants, seeking different solution for emerging challenges and attempt to find common and mutually beneficial solutions what is getting harder and harder as crisis phenomena multiply. The reviewer suggests the authors should use clear and more focused concepts in introduction also. There are a couple of authors who wrote about the EU-related migration and its implications, they should use their findings. I think the most important finding can be found in sentences Nr. 102-103-104 for that is what the story is about. Not only the sentiments and attitudes should be detected and explained in the case of a given host society, but the perception also, what means, how a given society perceive the presence of migrants and what is the government policy towards immigrants and immigration. Furthermore, what is also worth mentioning the sentiment could change time after time as something unusual happen that might induce a shift in host society's attitude and triggers a persistent rejection of migrants OR against certain migration while others are still welcome. For understanding this very complicated topic the following study could help the authors: Segal, Uma A. 2019. Globalization, migration and ethnicity. Public Health 172:135-142. DOI: 10.1016/j.puhe.2019.04.011 The hyphotheses on page 9 and 10 are mostly facts and not presumptions and sometimes even not entirely true if we see for e. Japan. One of the engines of economic globalization but migration is still a very sensitive topic there. I would also recommend authors should use updated surveys. Survey made in 2014 or 2012 might be outdated, mostly in the case of migration! Authors should find fresher surveys, that were conducted after 2015, the migration crisis. At sentence Nr. 259 authors refer to Bogardus and social distance concept. They should introduce the definition social distance earlier, somewhere after the introduction. On page 16 authors brought in new notions like populism, especially right-wing populism what is literally one of the consequences of the uncontrolled and non-regulated migration. But these parties rose their popularity by building politics on immigration and shortcomings of integration policies. I dont understand how this issue correlates with migration and social distance, because study did not investigate and unfold this topic properly. That's what I said before, the theme is too wide and that is why authors were not able to reveal aspects that would be relevant in this field. This problem appears again and again until the end of study. I think discussion and conclusion part is the most useful in this study. Authors could summerized their thoughts in these pages. Unfortunately earlier their train of thought has been puzzled and confused. Authors should fix the abovementioned problems, revise given parts of their study and add more citations. All in all the work would be a progressive study and bring new perspective into field of migration studies but authors could not realize their commitment entirely, because they wanted to express a lot of aspects but could present less than they expected. ********** 6. 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Globalization and social distance: Multilevel analysis of attitudes toward immigrants in the European Union PONE-D-22-15355R1 Dear Dr. Tzeng, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Dear Author! As the reviewer of the 1st version of your manuscript I have re-reviewed the new and corrected version what I found much more completed than the previous one. I appreciate that you used and inserted the recommended articles, materials and you took my advices. The only thing I would clarify is the "misunderstanding" in the case of surveys. In this version as in the previous one you referred to surveys, here you are: "For example, the European Social Survey (2014) asks whether respondents would mind having an immigrant as their boss, or a close relative via marriage; the World Value Survey (2012) merely asked respondents whether or not they would like to have immigrants as neighbors." I said you might find more recent/current data on this topic. That was my suggestion, it was not misunderstanding at all... If it is possible, because both 2012, both 2014 have been before the migration crisis happened in 2015-2016. Europe and European Union. Yes, you are right, the cooperation is called EU since 1993, before this year the cooperation was called European Economic Community (EEC) since 1957. As far as you know perfectly Europe is a continent, if you refer to this entity as a continent you are supposed to be right, but as a political-economic cooperation the adjective is wrong there. EU and EEC, these notions refer to Western Europe and the mass migration influenced this part of the European continent. Good luck and congratulations for your work! Kind regards, ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-15355R1 Globalization and social distance: Multilevel analysis of attitudes toward immigrants in the European Union Dear Dr. Tzeng: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. István Tarrósy Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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