Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 24, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-15060Prevalence and intensity of soil-transmitted helminth infections and associated risk factors among household heads living in the peri-urban areas of Jimma town, Oromia, EthiopiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zeynudin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please find the comments provided by the editor and reviewers below this email. The comments should be adequately addressed in a revised manuscript. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 06 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Manuscript Title: Prevalence and intensity of soil-transmitted helminth infections and associated risk factors among household heads living in the peri-urban areas of Jimma town, Oromia, Ethiopia Reviewer’s decision: Accept with Minor Corrections The manuscript is of high quality considering the amount of work-done and analysis made. It is also well written. The introduction and rationale for the study is sound. The methodology section is also very well described, without scientific jargon. The result section is also well written and tables well presented. The authors claimed that the prevalence of 18.1% is low, it would be nice to see the prevalence across each communities studied to have a better insight. In the supplementary file 2, one of the communities has a prevalence as high as 27.8%. It would be a great point to talk about these dynamics in the manuscript abstract and discussion. Reviewer’s Comment TOPIC: The title of this manuscript is appropriate and concise, ABSTRACT: This is a well written abstract. However authors should confirm the word limit for the abstract section. INTRODUCTION Line 68: recast as..”…lack of access to ... Line 74-75: recast as “hence impacting negatively on economic development…. Line 79-80? Please mention the medicine used during the treatment, Line 80: Remove the words “to eliminate infecting worms” Lin 82-83: Please provide a reference here Line 85: replace “as well as others” with “ and other vulnerable groups” Materials and Methods Line 144” mention the specific name of the medicine and the dosage e.g. Albendazole 40mg/kg or so RESULTS Line 163: Maintain a 1-digit decimal point. So, 9.3 instead of 9.285 Table showing the prevalence by communities is missing. It would be nice to see how the overall 18.1% STH prev is distributed across the communities studied. One great suggestion that could help is the rearrangement of the tables, the table on intensity can follow directly after table 1. Table 3: Authors should provide a footnote explain the infection intensity, and the acronym EPG Line 196-198: Since it wasn’t reported in the manuscript table, how useful are these lines here. DISCUSSION Line 269: needs a reference Line 272: Rather than using the word failed, authors could recast that the target was not met Line 353: remove the comma after from, Line 353: replace the semi-colon with “with” Reviewer #2: A community-based cross sectional study by Ahmed Zeynudin and others was conducted in Ethiopia from May to July 2021. The study targeted household populations (18 years and above) and aimed at determining the prevalence of STH and risk factors in Jiren, Bore, Horagibe, Kofe and Ifabula Peri-urban kebeles surrounding the Jimma town. While the study is not novel, it provided an update on the STH prevalence and the associated risk factors. Here are some comments that I hope are constructive for manuscript improvement: I: General comments 1. It will be useful if the author(s) can provide a country map showing the location of the five selected peri-urban kebeles of study. 2. The prevalence of STH in this study was based on the Kato-Katz microscopy, however, hookworms, in particular, was expected to be underestimated using this technique especially when light infections are common. 3. Please include more details on the Kato-Katz smear preparation and microscopic examination, specimens processing and examination timing, as there is no reference provided in the methodology. 4. Table 1 showed the prevalence of STH in different variable subgroups. The age group >60 years consisted of 27 households which are very low compared to other subgroups, and only one individual was found infected with Ascaris lumbricoides and Trichuris trichiura parasites. I recommend merging this sub-group into the previous one. 5. In table 2, no subjects under “Sometimes” for the washing hand hygiene. Better to delete them from the table. 6. Line 184-185: households who drained the liquids directly into the garden = 94.9%. It should be 94.7% (according to S2 file). 7. Single infections were 83.8% in the abstract (line 32) and discussion (line 247) while 85.1% in the results (line 199) and 83.1% in line 311 in the discussion. Please check and correct. 8. Line 192-195: no need for the CI to present the prevalence (%) of parasite detection. II: Editing issues: • Abstract line 16: soil transmitted helminthes: change to “soil-transmitted helminths” (correct elsewhere in lines 41, 44). • Line 22: A community based: change to “A community-based” (correct elsewhere in line 97). • Line 23: May to July, 2021: delete comma (similarly in line 99). • Line 30: A. lumbricoides: italic. • Line 31: T. trichiura: italic. • Line 38: still remain: delete still (redundant). • Line 60: major: change to “a major”. • Line 68: socio- economic: remove space. • Line 68: lack of accesses: change to “access”. • Line 71: is: “are”. • Line 98: population: change to “a population”. • Line 102: temperature: change to “a temperature”. • Line 129: Sufficient: change to “A sufficient”. • Line 129: were collected: change to “was”. • Line 130: leak proof: change to “leak-proof”. • Line 131: unique Identifier (UID): change to “unique identifier” or “Unique Identifier” (UID). • Line 133: specimen were: change to “specimen was”. • Line 148: sold waste: change to “solid”. • Line 156: was assess: change to “ assessed”. • Line 182: About 56.1% the households: change to “of” the households. • Line 196-197: S. mansoni, H. nana and E. vermicularis: full genera names. • Line 199: had single infection: change to “a single”. • Line 220: washing / peeling: remove spaces. • Line 222: p- value: remove space. • Line 222: finger nail: change to fingernails (correct elsewhere in 224, 230, 231, 253, 374 and in tables 2 and table 4). • Line 250: about 80.1% households: “of” households. • Line 272: as public health problem: “a public”. • Line 289: indirect: “an indirect”. • Line 336: finding the Ethiopia Demographic: “of” the Ethiopia Demographic. • Line 347: counter parts: one word. • Line 374: soil- transmitted: remove space. • Table 1: N (%): change to “n” (%) (correct elsewhere for consistency). • Table 3 and Table 4: No (%): change to “n” (%). • Line 247: (88,5%): (88.5%). • Line 308: (19.1%). were found: remove the full stop after the bracket. • Line 309: Species: “species” (uncapitalize the word). • Line 311: (83.1 %,): remove the comma after correcting the number (see comment 6). • The AOR for untrimmed hand fingernail was 2.99, change the 2.9 (line 229) to 3. 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Prevalence and intensity of soil-transmitted helminth infections and associated risk factors among household heads living in the peri-urban areas of Jimma town, Oromia, Ethiopia: A community-based cross-sectional study PONE-D-22-15060R1 Dear Dr. Zeynudin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have satisfactorily responded and addressed all the comments raised in the last round. The manuscript is technically sound and of high quality. It can be accepted for publication as it stands. Reviewer #2: The author(s) successfully responded to the reviewer 2 comments and coherently addressed all the points raised. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Prof Uwem Friday Ekpo Reviewer #2: Yes: Wahib M. Atroosh ********** |
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PONE-D-22-15060R1 Prevalence and intensity of soil-transmitted helminth infections and associated risk factors among household heads living in the peri-urban areas of Jimma town, Oromia, Ethiopia: A community-based cross-sectional study Dear Dr. Zeynudin: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Hesham M. Al-Mekhlafi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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