Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 11, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-07362Linking gait mechanics with perceived quality of life and participation after strokePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rowland, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you can see below, the reviewers were positive on your work. Please, reply carefully all questions raised by the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 13 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article is interesting and well-written. Moreover, the statistical analysis il well-conducted. I have only the following comments. 1. The statistical methods considered by the authors rely on assumptions about the nature of the underlying data. If the data do not meet those assumptions, then the results often are not valid. Therefore, it is important for authors to check that those assumptions are satisfied for the data at hand, at least, approximately. 2. Figures 1 and 2 need to be further commented. Just as an example, the shape of the scatter plot in Figure 1 is “particular” (it seems there is more than one group and leverage points) while from Figure 2 it seems to me that there are some outliers. 3. All the statistical symbols should be: 1) defined for the reader the first time they are used and 2) written in italic. Just as an example, define N at line 97. 4. Consider including the following paper in your introduction and discussion (PMCID: PMC7390624 ). Reviewer #2: The authors present a study that indicates that it is part or segment of another study, and the same number is observed in the clinical trial registration. Which in no way diminishes the scientific relevance. The complementary data informing how the training protocols were performed are clear in the studies mentioned as the basis for this one. It is suggested, however, that the subjects' database (without naming them) and collection data be made available in complementary material. Reviewer #3: The present study determines the role of limb propulsion during gait on the perception of quality of life and participation in people following stroke. After controlling for gait speed, paretic limp propulsion is not correlated to perceived quality of life or participation. Although may not have a related effect, limp propulsion appears to be an important factor to enhance gait performance, and this highlights the importance of further investigations in the rehabilitation area. Below, some considerations: An important factor was presented in the introduction and deserves discussion: a change in limb propulsion without a concomitant change in speed or gait ability may not be representative for people after stroke. How hard a person pushes the ground may not lead to a change in mobility if it is not related to benefits in speed or walking ability. In this scenario, the self-selected walking speed and maximum walking speed bring us a better understanding of the functional improvement of gait, as it is related to both energy and mechanical efficiency. (https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jstrokecerebrovasdis.2021.106023 - “Comfortable and Maximum Gait Speed in Individuals with Chronic Stroke and Community-Dwelling Controls” and 10.4103/2468-5658.184750 – “A new integrative approach to evaluate pathological gait: locomotor rehabilitation index”) #Materials and Methods *Participants Page 5, Line 97-105: This section is specifically to describe materials and methods used in the research, as well as to describe participants characteristics, without any results on the number of included/excluded. You can describe that you used pre-test data to perform the cross-sectional analysis, however, I suggest not putting the N as well for the post-training analysis. I suggest leaving all results in relation to N included/excluded to the RESULTS section, presenting a flowchart for both cross-sectional and post-training analysis, it would be clearer for readers. About table 1, it should also be placed in the RESULTS section. #Data Collection Page 6, Line 118-119: Please, this information refers to the result, insert in the RESULTS section. Page 7, Line 131-133: Please enter this information in the RESULTS section. Page 8, Line 148-149: Please delete the N=40 information, just leave it described Cohort 1 so readers will know what it is. Page 8, Line 155: “(N = 29 for step count, N = 31 for all others)”, you can remove this information, leave it to the RESULTS section. Page 8, Line 161: “(N=38), remove this information, leave it to the RESULTS section. Page 8, Line 162-163: “(N=29), remove this information, leave it to the RESULTS section. *Is comfortable gait speed equivalent to self-selected walking speed? I ask this question because it is described like this: “Comfortable gait speed was measured as participants made three passes across a 14-foot GaitRite pressure mat (CIR Systems, Havertown, PA)”. Were participants instructed to walk at the most comfortable speed? This is a very important factor as they can often walk slower or faster than their usual comfortable speed during a test. RESULTS Participants reduced an average of 125 steps for the Step Count variable after the training period. I believe that 125 steps in a stroke population is relevant. Can you discuss this and bring possible explanations for this fact? Since they have improved walking speed and walking ability, why have they reduced the number of steps? I would expect the number of steps to increase with rehab. For this aspect, it would be interesting to calculate the effect size and see the magnitude of this result, because apparently 125 steps less are clinically relevant in my opinion, despite not having presented a statistically significant difference, the p value is very close to that. DISCUSSION Page 12, Line 213-221: In this scenario, your training was performed only on the treadmill. I believe it will be interesting for the future to investigate precisely the effect of specific strength exercises to improve limb propulsion, as well as trunk and balance postural control exercises. I fully agree with the rationale that “For example, someone who increases gait speed through enhanced limb propulsion can be considered to have recovered limb function”, however, it is possible to improve gait speed without improving limb function. Would it be more important to worry about gait speed, as it would be more related to functionality? This discussion is very important, because according to the findings of the present study, they perceive that gait performance is strongly related to quality of life, rather than the means by which they achieved, and in my opinion, the quality of life of individuals is very important. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Leandro Tolfo Franzoni ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Linking gait mechanics with perceived quality of life and participation after stroke PONE-D-22-07362R1 Dear Dr. Rowland, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Leonardo A. Peyré-Tartaruga, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-22-07362R1 Linking gait mechanics with perceived quality of life and participation after stroke Dear Dr. Rowland: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Leonardo A. Peyré-Tartaruga Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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