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Original SubmissionDecember 7, 2021
Decision Letter - Simone Perna, Editor

PONE-D-21-38695The preventive and therapeutic effects of probiotics on mastitis: A Systematic Review and Meta-AnalysisPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Partly

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #1: The preventive and therapeutic effects of probiotics on mastitis: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis

Qinghong Yu · Chuchu Xu · Mengqian Wang · Jiayan Zhu · Linghong Yu · Zimei, Yang, Shan Liu and Xiufei Gao*

Yu et al, in this study, meta-analyzed data to identify effects of probiotics on the prevention and treatment of human mastitis. The data of participants of randomized control treatment studies included healthy pregnant and lactating woman taking probiotics systematically by oral route during pregnancy and lactation. Meta-analysis of six data showed that oral doses of prebiotics significantly reduced the incidence of mastitis and tendency of reduction of breast pain rate. Of these, two studies showed highly significant reduction in milk somatic cell count in two studies of healthy woman and five studies of mastitis patients. Increased number of milk somatic cell count is a definite maker of mastitis. It was concluded that, to a certain extent, probiotic intake appears to reduce incidence of mastitis and mastitis-related symptoms in pregnant and lactating woman.

Though, this study explored 807 records, only six studies qualified for inclusion in this review. Due to lack of sufficient data, role of probiotics in reducing mastitis and mastitis associated symptoms are speculative. Though, authors have acknowledged the limitations of study and suggest high-quality multicenter trails to support their results.

Major issues

1. Line 45: A total of six studies included in the meta-analysis. However, later it is mentioned that two studies of healthy people and five studies of mastitis patients, a total of seven studies are discussed. Please explain this discrepancy or make it the statement clearer.

2. Line 46: “……during pregnancy can reduce the incidence of mastitis (RR: 0.49,

95%CI: 0.35 to 0.69; p<0.0001) and breast pain rate (RR: 0.81, 95 %CI: 0.64 to 1.01; p=0.07)”. This statement explains reduction (P < 0.05) in breast pain rate, which is in fact a tendency of reduction in the pain rate (P = 0.07). Please explain or make the necessary changes.

Minor issues

• Please be consistent with using word “Figure” or “Fig.” See the guidelines of PlosOne.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript has included just 6 studies which are not enough to draw a conclusion under the review

The presentation of manuscript is not according to journals instructions/format

The abstract is not in proper format

The Materials and methods and conclusion parts need to be improved

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Ratan K. Choudhary

Reviewer #2: No

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Submitted filename: PONE-D-21-38695_reviewers comment.pdf
Revision 1

Dear editors and reviewers:

Thank you for your letter and comments on our manuscript titled “The preventive and therapeutic effects of probiotics on mastitis: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis” (PONE-D-21-38695). These comments helped us improve our manuscript, and provided important guidance for future research.

We have addressed the editor’s and the reviewers’ comments to the best of our abilities, and revised text to meet the PLOS ONE style requirements. We hope this meets your requirements for a publication.

Since our original manuscript has been professionally polished, there may be some differences in wording from my previous manuscripts, but we did not change the original intention. Relevant revisions made in response to reviewer comments, we marked the revised portions in red and highlighted them yellow in manuscript. The main comments and our specific response are detailed below:

Reviewer 1:

1. Line 45: A total of six studies included in the meta-analysis. However, later it is mentioned that two studies of healthy people and five studies of mastitis patients, a total of seven studies are discussed. Please explain this discrepancy or make it the statement clearer.

Response:I am sorry that this part was not clear in the original manuscript, I should explain that during the review process, we included a total of 6 studies, 2 of which included double data of healthy people and patients with mastitis, and the data discussed at the end were all from these 6 studies. My language did not express clearly, the expression has been removed in the revised manuscript.

2. Line 46: “……during pregnancy can reduce the incidence of mastitis (RR: 0.49,

95%CI: 0.35 to 0.69; p<0.0001) and breast pain rate (RR: 0.81, 95 %CI: 0.64 to 1.01; p=0.07)”. This statement explains reduction (P < 0.05) in breast pain rate, which is in fact a tendency of reduction in the pain rate (P = 0.07). Please explain or make the necessary changes.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion, I have revised the abstract accordingly.

3. Please be consistent with using word “Figure” or “Fig.” See the guidelines of PlosOne.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion, I have made the corresponding changes according to the guidlines of PLOS ONE.

Reviewer 2:

1.The manuscript has included just 6 studies which are not enough to draw a conclusion under the review.

Response: Thank you for your suggestion. Due to the widespread abuse of antibiotics and the prudent choice of medication during pregnancy/lactation, our team believes that it is meaningful to evaluate the intervention effect of probiotics at this time. There are really not many relevant studies at present, and we have acknowledged this in the limitation of manuscript. However, since the relevant experiments in the registration have not been published, our research team is also conducting relevant experiments recently. We hope to supplement this evidence when follow-up related research results are available.

2. The presentation of manuscript is not according to journals instructions/format. The abstract is not in proper format.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion. I have already revised the format of our manuscript.

3. The Materials and methods and conclusion parts need to be improved.

Response: Thanks for your suggestion. Since we did not know the specific modification goals, we consulted Liu S, a statistician, again. And made corresponding changes in the materials and methods and conclusion parts, we hope that this revision will be better than before.

Editors:

Thanks for your suggestion, we have uploaded and all the figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool and passed the certification. So, we re-uploaded our figure file with no changes to the data.

We would be glad to respond to any further questions and comments that you may have.

Sincerely yours,

Xiufei Gao

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Decision Letter - Simone Perna, Editor

The preventive and therapeutic effects of probiotics on mastitis: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis

PONE-D-21-38695R1

Dear Dr. Gao,

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Kind regards,

Simone Perna, Ph.D

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Ratan K Choudhary

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Simone Perna, Editor

PONE-D-21-38695R1

The preventive and therapeutic effects of probiotics on mastitis: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis

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