Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 12, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-10841Histopathological profile of cervical punch biopsies and risk factors associated with high-grade cervical precancerous lesions and cancer in northwest EthiopiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Derbie, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been evaluated by two reviewers, and their comments are available below. The reviewer has raised a number of concerns related to reporting of the study methodology and results. In particular, the reviewers had requested additional information regarding samples size calculations, participant recruitment as well as the current cervical screening practices in the study location. It may be seen that one of the reviewers had commented on the scientific impact of the study. While PLOS ONE does not issue decisions based on perceived novelty we do however require studies to further contribute to scientific knowledge, https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/criteria-for-publication#loc-2. As such we suggest discussing related literature and how the current study further contributes to scientific knowledge. Finally, one of the publication criteria at PLOS ONE (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/criteria-for-publication#loc-5 )is that articles must be presented in an intelligible fashion and written in clear, correct, and unambiguous English. Both reviewers had raised concerns regarding the quality of English language of the mansucript and we recommend thoroughly copy editing the mansucript for language presentation. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 17 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments to the authors While it would be of some interest, this study does not bring any breakthrough to the scientific community. Generally, the manuscript has a lot of grammatical errors and inappropriate use of vocabulary. The specific comments include: Background 1. The data reported in P3L66-67 should be cited. 2. Sentences expressing feelings need to be avoided in your writings. For instance, “….. interesting report….” P3L76. 3. The second paragraph is missing the state-of-the-art description of the burden of cervical cancer and associated prevention program in Ethiopia, especially the screening program. In addition, appropriate references related to Ethiopia are missing (P3L74-79). This should be rewritten. 4. P6L145-154 should be summarized and shifted to the background section. 5. The purpose of the study is not clear. I guess the authors wanted to identify the risk factors associated with the burden of cervical cancer in the studied population. The question is what did they achieve with this study? The conclusion being vague is not giving any feasible answer. Materials and Methods 6. The authors need to revise the histopathological classification of cervical cancer cases according to the World Health Organization classification of tumors from women reproductive organs. The subtypes are benign, precancerous, and cancerous cervical lesion. The following reference might be of help in revising your work: - Zuberi, Z., Mremi, A., Chilongola, JO., Semango, G., and Sauli, E. (2021). Expression of p16 and TOP2A biomarkers associated with clinico-histopathological features among women seeking cervical cancer care in Tanzania. PLoS One, 16 (10): e0259096 Results 7. The authors should report the mean age as mean ± SD and not mean, SD in Table 1. 8. The subheadings of demographic characteristics, the histological profile of the participants, and reproductive and gynecological features can be merged into a new subheading titled “Clinical histopathological features among women seeking cervical cancer care.” In addition, the subheading P10L209 should be renamed to “Risk factors associated with cervical lesions among women seeking cervical cancer care.” 9. The incorrect in-text citation of the table at P8L195 should be Table 2, not Table 1. 10. The findings presented at L181-219 should be supported by the biological relevance of the study observations. 11. Why statistical significance was not presented in Table 2? That’s to say, include the p-values. 12. In Table 2, the univariate logistic regression could be performed for benign, precancerous, and cancerous cervical lesions to identify the risk factors associated with cervical cancer lesions. 13. What exclusion and inclusion criteria were deployed to combine high-grade (CIN-2) and cervical cancer lesions? CIN-3 is also a high-grade cervical lesion, why was excluded? 14. Why a p-value ≤ 0.25 was considered for univariate regression analysis (P7L159-160)? 15. Figure 1 should be improved by following the histopathological classification of cervical cancer cases according to the World Health Organization classification of tumors from women reproductive organs by Kurman et al. 2014. Discussion 16. The discussion should be completely rewritten. In addition, the discussion is repeating the results that is unnecessary. Reviewer #2: The paper "Histopathological profile of cervical punch biopsies and risk factors associated with high-grade cervical precancerous lesions and cancer in northwest Ethiopia" aimed to determine the histopathological profile of 335 women and risk factors associated with high-grade cervical lesions and cancer over a period of 2.5 years in northwest Ethiopia. It is necessary to do this type of work, to publicize the cervical characteristics of the patients as well as unifying criteria between pathologists. The paper is interesting and fairly well written. The data which are presented are moderate to clearly presented though there are several issues that deserve more attention or should be improved. Specific points: Methods section 1. The authors should give some more information on how current screening in Ethiopia or area of study is organized. Are cervical scrapes performed? Is there any way of screening with pap-smears after which women are referred for colposcopy with cervical biopsy? This will give the reader a better understanding why cervical punch biopsies were taken blindly in the current study. 2. This being a prospective study, authors should explain how sample size was determined? The authors should clearly explain how they reached at a sample size of 335. Results section 1. It is good to note that Table 1 has both demographic and clinical characteristics. What does Bahir Dar 2021 on line number 197 and all the tables titles mean? Unless it is in agreement with the journal requirement I recommend that the authors delete it from all the tables, because it does not make sense. In Table 1 o you report 335 participants but the sum of life time number of sexual partners is 332 (163 + 169=332) less than total participants, number of deliveries is 342 (59+86+197=342) exceeding number of participants in the study. o It is also indicated that there were 70 participants who reported to have used hormonal contraceptives but the breakdown for years of hormonal contraceptive use is 57 (32+15+10 =57). o The women who had heard about cervical cancer are 142 but when they were asked how it is transmitted only 124 (10+114=124) responded. Some are missing o The same applies to those screened for cervical cancer in the last 5 years and high-risk Human papillomavirus (HR-HPV) detection Conclusion 1. Even though the majority of the study participants lived in the rural setting (66%), had no formal education (77.3%) and never heard about cervical cancer (57.6%), the conclusion does not specifically address this population. Minor issues 1. Authors should proof read the manuscript because there are a few typos and language that need to be corrected. For example in results section line number 174, in discussion section line number 240, 245, 324 amongst others. 2. Authors also need to check that references, words, symbols and stats are not running into each other. For example words vs references are in background section line number 72, discussion section line number 235 etc ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Histopathological profile of cervical punch biopsies and risk factors associated with high-grade cervical precancerous lesions and cancer in northwest Ethiopia PONE-D-22-10841R1 Dear Dr. Awoke Derbie We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Paul Uchizi Kaseka;, MSN Guest Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-10841R1 Histopathological profile of cervical punch biopsies and risk factors associated with high-grade cervical precancerous lesions and cancer in northwest Ethiopia Dear Dr. Derbie: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Paul Uchizi Kaseka; Guest Editor PLOS ONE |
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