Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 17, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-16494Association between inflammatory biomarkers and cognitive agingPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 01 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, I admire the efforts done in the manuscript for improving the future understanding of the pathophysiology of dementia. I would like to recommend adding references relating to the vascular regional hypo-perfusion as an associated substrate for accelerating the cognitive decline, whether in this manuscript or future ones. One example of a recent reference can be found here: Wu YT, Bennett HC, Chon U, Vanselow DJ, Zhang Q, Muñoz-Castañeda R, Cheng KC, Osten P, Drew PJ, Kim Y. Quantitative relationship between cerebrovascular network and neuronal cell types in mice. Cell Rep. 2022 Jun 21;39(12):110978. doi: 10.1016/j.celrep.2022.110978. PMID: 35732133. Reviewer #2: The authors examine the association of 11 plasma proteins (CD14, CD163, CD5L, CD56, CD40L, CXCL16, SDF1, DPP4, SGP130, sRAGE, and MPO) related to immune and inflammatory responses with measures of cognitive function, brain MRI and dementia risk. And results are showing significant associations between higher levels of CD40L and myeloperoxidase (MPO) with executive dysfunction; CD5L levels and sRAGE with brain volumes, APOE ε4 carrier status with cardiovascular risk factors that indicates the involvement of an activated immune system in abnormal brain aging. Excellent research on an extraordinarily important subject and very striking results are clearly explained. Reviewer #3: Research Summary This is a biomarker development study where the author(s) have attempted to investigate the association of inflammatory biomarkers with neuropsychological test results and brain MRI result outcomes in FHS offspring cohort study. 11 protein biomarkers were chosen for the study and their levels were estimated in the frozen fasting plasma samples using sandwich ELISA methods. Their finding suggested co-relation of several inflammatory markers such as CD14, CD5L and MPO with exclusive cognitive dysfunction. Additionally, CD5L and sRAGE has also shown co-relations with TCBV. However, none of these biomarkers were significantly associated with increased risk of dementia. Moreover, their study highlights a correlation of the immune system activation with aging associated changes in the brain and cognitive decline. Comments: This paper describes an important aspect of involvement of peripheral immune system in ageing. This approach could lead to development of new inflammatory biomarkers associated with ageing and dementia/AD. However, the paper has been written poorly, and it will require a significant amount of work. Importantly, the poor writing makes it highly complicated to read. The paper also failed to describe the experimental model and design of the study. The flow of the paper is also poorly organized. Moreover, the study design, methods and supporting data are disorganized and lack clarity. Major Comments: 1. The paper requires a major reorganization in terms of writing introduction, elaborated method, discussion and figure generation (Both main figure and supplementary figure; It requires consistency with font size, and organization). It would be helpful for the readers to find required information on the same figure that is explaining similar results. 2. The studied groups is highly diversified which includes APOE carrier and non-carrier; Chronic Leukemia or Lymphoma, patients taking different immunosuppressant. The author has to justify what were the inclusion criteria for such a diverse group. Additionally, for assessing the inflammatory markers why lymphoma, leukemia, or cases with immunosuppressant supplement were considered in study. (Note- Immune systems are either hyperactive or compromised in such situation). 3. It would be necessary to draw a co-relation between cognitive tests and MRI brain volume between entire cohort and the AD/dementia cases. 4. The introduction section and discussion section has been strongly written in favor of association of inflammatory markers and risks of dementia while the results does not reveals a major correlations. Author should elaborate the justifications on this point in the discussion. 5. Authors should include several points in the discussion; 1) which other biomarkers are previously studied or established in ageing, dementia/AD. 2.) What information is available/established in terms of biomarkers in CSF in ageing, dementia/AD? Minor Comments: 1. Author(s) should cross-check references and possibly add a small description of method even though the citations are given. Conclusion: The paper requires a major revision. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Association between inflammatory biomarkers and cognitive aging PONE-D-22-16494R1 Dear Dr. Fang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Muhammad Tarek Abdel Ghafar, M.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: As per the review comment before, the authors shall publish future manuscripts involving the regional hypoperfusion therapy as a probable cause of dementia. Reviewer #4: This is a valuable research and will written manuscript and the subject is very important All the reviewers comments are addressed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Mohamed Mostafa Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-16494R1 Association between inflammatory biomarkers and cognitive aging Dear Dr. Fang: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof Muhammad Tarek Abdel Ghafar Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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