Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 17, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-07999Specific and non-specific determinants of use of complementary medicine in Switzerland: data from the 2017 Swiss Health SurveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Meier-Girard, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 23 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In particular both reviewers have highlighted questions about presentation of the data and analytical decisions (e.g. use of non-standard age categories). [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript is well written and is very information and of interest to the readers. However, there are some clarifications and suggestions for the authors: 1. Primary/ important important objective of the study was to see the prevalence of CM and also it's comparison with previous data, so in the title of manuscript the mention of prevalence would be more apt. 2. The flow diagram similar to PRISMA flow chart: http://prisma-statement.org/prismastatement/flowdiagram.aspx would have made the data inclusion more clear. In table 1: for " Any type of complementary medicine" the N is 5654 and therefore all other rows following this {Osteopathy 1930 Naturopathy (1799), Homeopathy (1731), Herbal medicine (1369), Other therapies (1323),Acupuncture (1120) , Shiatsu/reflexology (8840),Traditional Chinese medicine (472) and Ayurveda 221} should total to 5654 but it is not. Please clarify why In table 3: Supplemental health insurance for complementary medicine: Yes (10815), No (5600) and Don’t know(2292) should total to N= 18,832 but it is not. Please clarify why Another important aspect is the duration of use of CM, some individuals use it for short duration for example for some short duration issue like 1- 2 days(constipation, diarrhoea, pain ) for 2-3 days. Was there any criteria for inclusion of data based on duration of use of CM. The use of CM it is most of the time not taken after consultation from GP or other expert but is usually taken through recommendation by family members, friends or other acquaintances. Highlighting these sources other than experts would have been interesting as it may have safety issues Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this work. The 2017 and 2012 survey data were large but may be outdated. The authors should be applauded for the effort to conduct add-on questionnaire with a relatively good response rate. Nonetheless, the ‘85.1%’ was based on the 18,832 as the numerator and the 22,134 (but not 43,769) as the denominator. Please clarify and add an overview of the Swiss Health Survey in relationship with this particular study. The coverage by mandatory basic health insurance seems to be intuitively the main factor of the increased CM use. As such, the analysis and/or discussion should differentiate the marginal effect of individual preferences, given the insurance coverage. When was the CM covered (before 2012 / between 2012-2017 / after 2017)? Table 3 presented the ‘Supplemental health insurance for complementary medicine’ as a separate finding. Actually, this point could be relatively easy to address by analyzing secondary annual claim data that should be available in the developed high-income country context like Switzerland. This suggested approach not only could provide the ‘revealed preferences’ of Swiss individuals, but also reduce the unreliable operational definitions of the CM and conventional therapies perceived by the respondents as pointed out below. Line 110-114 presented a series of therapies without clear definitions to the readers (and to the respondents). Given the fact that these therapies have been covered by the mandatory basic health insurance, they should be clearly defined, along with whether each of the therapies is fully reimbursable and whether out-of-pocket or copayment is required. Line 114-118: What are the additional benefits of the arbitrary and non-standard CM categorization? Line 120-123: Conventional health care is poorly defined and, therefore, could not be referred to as a control group for the research question of this study. Line 130: Was the age variable collected as a categorical variable as presented here? If not so, how do the authors justify these arbitrary categories? Please clarify this point with the other ‘ever-continuous-but-now-categorical’ variables as well. Line 163: Is ‘last cannabis consumption’ part of the Lifestyle indicators of the Swiss Health Survey? If not, please differentiate which variables are from those that are not. ********** 6. 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Prevalence, specific and non-specific determinants of complementary medicine use in Switzerland: data from the 2017 Swiss Health Survey PONE-D-22-07999R1 Dear Dr. Meier-Girard, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sergio A. Useche, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have done a good job in responding to the reviewers’ remaining comments. The paper can be now accepted for publication. la Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: All of my comments have been satisfactorily addressed. Nonetheless, the manuscript still requires formatting edits. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Assoc. Prof. Dr. Krit Pongpirul, MD, MPH, PhD. ********** |
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PONE-D-22-07999R1 Prevalence, specific and non-specific determinants of complementary medicine use in Switzerland: data from the 2017 Swiss Health Survey. Dear Dr. Meier-Girard: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Sergio A. Useche Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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