Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-15548Foot arch rigidity in walking: In vivo evidence for the contribution of metatarsophalangeal joint dorsiflexionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Davis, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 26 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have completed the evaluation of the manuscript entitled ‘Foot arch rigidity in walking: In vivo evidence for the contribution of metatarsophalangeal joint dorsiflexion’. Overall, this study is an interesting study, and I am satisfied with the manuscript quality. It investigated the gait biomechanical characteristics under the added mass and increasing MTP joint dorsiflexion conditions. It may have a potential use in a clinical setting for understanding the foot rigidity mechanism. However, I have some reservations that I hope the author(s) will address in the manuscript. 1. Abstract, the background is sufficient but could be tweaked a little bit to concretize the abstract. Furthermore, enhancing the methods in the abstract. The results should be focalized on the main findings. 2. Lines 52-54, providing the literature evidence to support your opinion. 3. The introduction is good but can be improved by illustrating different methods utilised in understanding foot windlass mechanisms and recent advances. 4. More detailed participant info, such as height, would be expected. 5. If three trials were sufficient to reduce the data collection errors? 6. Has the author (s) considered the analysis of variance test to check the statistical inference between groups. Please note that t-tests are NOT the non-parametric tests. The description of the statistical analysis section should be optimized. 7. I can not find the figure in the S1 appendix. 8. What is PA stand for in the caption of Fig 3? The readers would appreciate the full name and abbreviation in the figure. 9. I recommend splitting Fig 5 with panels A and B for moment and quasi-stiffness measures. 10. It’s a bit hard to understand why the black line (AM) is wider than others. Presenting data with Mean±Standard deviation may help to illustrate the data trend. 11. It is suggested that the figure legends be depicted below the subfigure Power and list in line. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this interesting paper. This study sought to explore the role of the windlass mechanism and medial arch rigidity on energy transfer during walking by increasing dorsiflexion at the metatarsophalangeal joint (MTPJ) angle and increasing body mass. The work is an extension of work by Welte et al. (2018) who manipulated MTPJ angle during vertical loading and the work of Kern et al. (2019) who explored the effect of increased mass on midtarsal quasi-stiffness in walking. The study would appear to be novel and well designed and delivered. My comments are largely around adding greater explanation of rationale, mechanisms and variables for those who are not so familiar with potentially challenging concepts. Page 3, lines 58 to 61: Figure 1 in the paper by Welte et al. assists the explanation of the windlass mechanism well. The authors of the present study may wish to consider adding a similar figure. Similarly, clarity could be improved by defining key variables (e.g. quasi-stiffness) and establishing their relevance early on. For example, in the introduction in the Kern et al. paper it is stated: “Quasi-stiffness of the ankle (sometimes called dynamic stiffness) is defined as the slope of the joints’ moment-angle relationship (Sanchis-Sales et al., 2016; Shamaei, Sawicki & Dollar, 2013; Rouse et al., 2013). This is an experimentally derived parameter, which describes the joints’ resistance to motion for a given change in moment throughout stance.” Page 4, line 72: I would replace “In Kern et al” with “In a study by Kern et al” and “participant’s” with “participants’”. Page 4, lines 72 to 80: The reporting of the findings of Kern et al is good, however I think the rationale for why increasing mass is worth investigating could be made clearer, perhaps with reference to altered forces experienced by the foot as the original authors did. Page 5, line 98: Was there a justification for recruiting 14 participants? Was a power calculation performed? Page 5, line 103: The flow of the Methodology (Materials and Methods according to PLOS One submission guidelines) may be improved by reporting the protocol before the foot model, as was the case in the earlier work by Welte et al. and Kern et al. Page 5, line 101: According to PLOS One submission guidelines it should be specified whether informed consent was written or oral. Page 5, line 108: What was the diameter of the markers? Page 6, lines 118 to 126: For completeness I would add a specific definition of strain (length change relative to resting length?) in outlining how length of the PA was calculated. I would also consider placing this section in the data analysis along with the definition of the kinetic variables of interest. Page 6, lines 130 to 132: Were the markers attached directly to the skin and not on socks? Page 6, lines 128 to 129: The concept of a Froude number was interesting and not something I have come across before in gait or foot and ankle literature (and I see the reference is rather old). Is it known how this number differs from a self-selected speed? Could it be a point for discussion, seeing as Welte et al. compared loading at different speeds, although the only significant difference between speeds which was found as in energy dissipation? In any case I would recommend rearranging the sentence to start with something along the lines of “Target walking velocity was established by…” so the Froude number is not emphasized as much and does not detract from the main purpose. Page 6, line 133: Is the shore value (hardness) of the wedge known? Page 6, line 138: The previous work used 15% and 30%, why was a value of 15% chosen here? Page 7, line 152: Was there a rationale for a threshold of 35 N, which is higher than I would expect? Page 7, line 154: Is the rotation sequence correct? In reference 19 it is stated: “A ZYX Tait–Bryan angle sequence determined the angles of the first metatarsal relative to the calcaneus (arch angles) and the phalanx relative to the metatarsal (MTPJ angle)”. Page 8, lines 163 to 164: How was power calculated (vertical GRF multiplied by arch velocity?). Page 9, line 196 and subsequent references: I do not see a supplementary figure, only tables and text… Page 10 to page 13: When referring to differences shown in Figure 2, readability could be improved by referencing the specific panel in Figure 2. Page 11, lines 232 to 240: My interpretation is that the circles and triangles represent individual participants, if this is correct it may help to clarify in the figure caption? I would advocate such an approach as there is a lot of inter-individual variability in foot function, so it is useful to demonstrate whether differences in conditions was consistent across participants in addition to any difference in the means. Page 16, lines 361 to 362: Was foot type/posture accounted for? How might this effect finings? Page 16, lines 363 to 364: A “to” is missing from “[differences…] due active” Figures 2-5: Clarity may be improved by writing added mass and toe wedge in full rather than using uncommon abbreviations. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Foot arch rigidity in walking: In vivo evidence for the contribution of metatarsophalangeal joint dorsiflexion PONE-D-22-15548R1 Dear Dr. Davis, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Imre Cikajlo, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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