Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 17, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-23114Transport of Antibody into the Skin is Only Partially Dependent Upon the Neonatal Fc-ReceptorPLOS ONE Dear Photini, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The two reviewers raised comments that should be straightforward to address, without the need for additional experimental work. I also noted that one sentence in the abstract is misleading and should be revised ("the protective efficacy of a passively-administered antibody is reduced in the skin in FcRn deficient mice, but not to the same extent that we have previously observed..." (Protection is reduced as compared to WT). Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 12 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled « Transport of Antibody into the skin is only partially dependent upon the Neonatal Fc-Receptor (FcRn) » by Nasir and Sinnis describes the role of FcRn in the transport of rat IgG2a and mouse IgG1from the blood into the skin by respectively measuring antibody binding to skin cells and neutralization of sporozoites in the skin of WT and FcRn -/- mice. The authors consistently observed less staining of langerin+ cells in the skin of FcRn-/- mice 12-24h after IV injection of rat anti-langerin IgG2a mAb suggesting that FcRn partly participates in the mAb transport from the blood to the skin. Accordingly, 22-24h after IV transfer of mouse anti-PbCSP IgG1mAb (3D11), a ~ 7-fold reduction in liver infection of FcRn-/- mice in comparison to ~12-fold decrease in WT mice from (ref 8) was observed after mosquito bite challenge. Equivalent IV challenge produced similar level of reduction in liver infection of passively immunized mice (2.2-fold reduction in FcRn-/- mice vs 1.7 in WT mice (from ref 8)). Altogether, skin cell binding and sporozoite neutralization in the skin data suggest that FcRn partially contributes to the transport of antibodies from the blood into the skin. However, since FcRn -/- mice also present faster clearance of plasma antibodies, this phenotype could explain the observed differences. To address this, the authors performed the quantification of the normalized % of antibody remaining in circulation in WT and FcRN -/- mice following passive transfer of mAbs (Fig. 3). There are two points regarding figure 3 that still need explanation before the acceptation of the manuscript. The first is that in figure 3, values are determined as a percentage of the amount of 3D11 mAb in the serum at 6h. It is not clear if all points are normalized to the value of WT group at 6h or by the respective 6h values. In the last case, despite the same normalized kinetics until 24h, it is not possible to appreciate the decrease in serum concentration that could help to explain the differences observed in figures 1, 2 and 4. Please plot the non-normalized data. The second is that a quick search about mAb clearance curve in FcRn-/- mice showed that at a substantial decrease in the amount of antibodies can be observed at 24h (PMID: 27610650, PMID: 28613103). Please compare/discuss your data with published data. Reviewer #2: This is a short and simple study assessing a potential role for FcRn-mediated transport into the skin for antibody-mediated protection against Plasmodium sporozoite infection. Using FcRn deficient mice, the authors quantify antibody trafficking into the skin by imaging anti-Langerhans antibodies, finding that trafficking is reduced in deficient mice, but not eliminated. Further, extended time indicates an antibody accumulation as time goes on. The mice were then used in challenge experiments, finding that in mosquito bite challenge, where skin-resident antibodies are critical to protection, protection was reduced in the absence of FcRn. IV challenge saw little or no protection in either background, as expected. Overall, this is a relatively simple experiment that shows a role for FcRN, but also indicates that it is not critical. Given the simplicity of the study, there is not a lot of major feedback, and the results are straightforward. However, it would be good to address why the authors did not use FcRn binding site knockouts to test this from the antibody side. That would likely be a cleaner way to address this, by knocking out FcRN binding of the antibody, and may have fewer pleiotropic effects than the genetic mouse knockout. Perhaps a discussion of this would suffice, but it is an obvious question an erudite reader will ask. Minor points: All log scale graphs lack minor ticks bottom of 2C was cutoff in the review copy Fluorescence units were not listed or labeled, or defined in the M/M ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-23114R1Transport of Antibody into the Skin is Only Partially Dependent Upon the Neonatal Fc-ReceptorPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sinnis, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I am sorry for not being clear enough in my previous comment. The following sentence in the abstract is misleading: "To understand the relevance of FcRn in the context of malaria infection, we use the rodent parasite Plasmodium berghei and show that the protective efficacy of a passively-administered anti-malarial antibody is reduced in FcRn deficient mice, but not to the same extent as previously observed in wildtype mice." The way I understand this sentence is that protective efficacy of the antibody is less reduced in FcRn deficient mice as compared to WT mice, which is the opposite of what the data show. The parasite load is less reduced, not the protective efficacy. The protective efficacy is reduced as compared to WT. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 05 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Olivier Silvie, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Transport of Antibody into the Skin is Only Partially Dependent Upon the Neonatal Fc-Receptor PONE-D-22-23114R2 Dear Photini, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Olivier Silvie, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-23114R2 Transport of Antibody into the Skin is Only Partially Dependent Upon the Neonatal Fc-Receptor Dear Dr. Sinnis: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr Olivier Silvie Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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