Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 17, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-04861Cytokines and chemokines profile in encephalitis patients: a meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rezaei, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Both reviewers identified significant concerns with the parameters and analysis in this study that need to be addressed. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please ensure that your decision is justified on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria and not, for example, on novelty or perceived impact. For Lab, Study and Registered Report Protocols: These article types are not expected to include results but may include pilot data. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 07 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, This is a well-written study describing the alterations in the levels of different cytokines in patients with encephalitis. The authors reviewed dozens of articles and selected 23 of them for meta-analysis. My major concern is that the authors write that 71 studies were eligible for study inclusion, but only 23 were included in the meta-analysis. However, the criteria for selecting 23 out of 71 were not described and should be explained. Minor remark: In the abstract the authors write: „Also, these cytokines and chemokine might potentially prevent severe sequelae related to encephalitis infection.” However, this sentence seems loosely related the manuscript, as the manuscript does not deal with the role of cytokines in the course of encephalitis and its compilations. Reviewer #2: General Comments- The authors undertake a meta-analysis of existing literature concerning cytokine/chemokine concentrations in serum/plasma and CSF samples from patients diagnosed with encephalitis compared to in-study controls. In principle, this is a study of interest that could inform diagnostic and therapeutic strategies to deal with encephalitis. However, as is common with meta-analysis studies, the high degree of variability between studies and the generalizations employed (ie. Infectious v. autoimmune encephalitis) lessens confidence in the findings. Despite these drawbacks, with additional selection criteria, subgroup analyses and a clear and inclusive discussion of the limitations of this study, this work could be publishable. Major concerns- 1) While useful as a starting point, the assumption/generalization that the cytokine/chemokine profile for any given autoimmune encephalitis or encephalitis of infectious origin is going to be similar is flawed and may be diluting important findings. Multiple studies within this meta-analysis describe the etiology of the encephalitis. For example, Japanese encephalitis and NMDA-autoimmune patients are described in multiple studies with overlapping cytokine/chemokines analyzed. The authors should provide additional subgroup analyses that characterize confirmed cases to provide a more accurate cytokine/chemokine profile in those conditions. Conversely, analyzing diagnostically unconfirmed cases as a group may reveal a unique cytokine/chemokine signature and should be untaken. 2) The authors state that (line 163) “Regarding the studies that had investigated more than one type of encephalitis, we pooled the mean and SD of the concentration of these groups”. In line with comment 1), this is inappropriate as written. Were the data pooled regardless of being encephalitis of infectious or autoimmune origin as this would imply? This needs to be clarified. Infectious vs. autoimmune data should be subgrouped and if the etiologic agent/condition is known, the data should be subgrouped again. 3) It does not appear that patient age is considered in these analyses. Several of these studies were performed in pediatric populations and some patient populations contained very old individuals. Cytokine/chemokine levels are differentially regulated at younger and older ages. Statistical tests should be run to ensure that age is not significantly influencing the analysis. 4) The discussion section needs to be largely rewritten. The second and the majority of third paragraphs (line 526-556) read as a textbook synopsis of adaptive and innate immune responses to HSV in the brain and largely do not relate directly to work presented. Furthermore, little attention is paid to the limitations and caveats of this study, of which there are many. Discussion should include, patient and control populations age, gender, condition (ie. healthy v. nonspecific health conditions), location, immune experience and assay sensitivity. Minor points- Line 73-74- “More recently, there has been a growing interest towards autoimmune encephalitis, such as Anti-N-Methyl-D-Aspartate Receptor (NMDAR)”. This is an incomplete sentence. Line 83- “causative” agents. Line 95-96- Cytokines are also produced by cells in the tissue. References should be provided for these statements. Line 103-104- Chemokine are also produced by cells in tissue. Line 108- Lower case “chemokines”. Line 123- Wrong protocol is linked. Line 135- All patients with cancer should be excluded, correct? Tumors for example can change basal cytokine/chemokine levels themselves or induce changes in secretion by other cells. Line 206- add “in” Can not see all of tables 1 and 3. Transform to landscape. Table 2- Should 2: be 0:? Line 370- add “the” Line 627-629- Heterogeneity was high in “most” of the meta-analyses. Line 640- “Accordingly, the interleukin antagonists should be investigated as adjunctive treatment in encephalitis.”- This may be flawed logic as the induced immune response if often critical to resolution of infectious encephalitis. This language should be tempered. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Cytokines and chemokines profile in encephalitis patients: a meta-analysis PONE-D-22-04861R1 Dear Dr. Rezaei, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Karin E. Peterson, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, The manuscript has been improved substantially. All comments have been addressed. I have no additional remarks. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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