Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-21857Fetoscopic Endoluminal Tracheal Occlusion with Smart-TO balloon: efficacy of removal and safetyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sananès, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised by all reviewers during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 19 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? 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If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors reported the study protocol of the single arm phase I trial conducted in parallel in Paris and Leuven about the use of the Smart-TO balloon for congenital diaphragmatic hernia repair. They concluded, that this phase-I study may provide the first evidence of the potential to reverse the occlusion by Smart-TO and free the airways non-invasively, as well as safety data. There remain some questions regarding the protocol, which I would like to ask the authors. 1. The title should be added by the fact, that the paper is about the study protocol rather than study results. 2. I am a bit sceptic about the classification as Phase 1. The term first in human (patients) trial clearly describes what will be done. 3. As these first in human trials usually will focus on safety (see Guideline on strategies to identify and mitigate risks for first-in-human and early clinical trials with investigational medicinal products, EMA) the objective of the study should be refined from efficacy to safety. Here special focus should be paid to the pediatric and rare disease nature of the disease. 4. I wonder myself - as this is somewhat unclear - a sequential recruitment strategy with continuous monitoring for safety applied combined in both locations, would reflect safety aspects more appropriate as a fixed sample. Other designs, which might be considered is Simon's two Stage design. For both: (http://cancer.unc.edu/biostatistics/program/ivanova/ContinuosMonitoringForToxicity.aspx). 5. As the number of subjects is rather high for safety and differs in both locations, I think even this should be refined. Numbers of up to ten in sequential order administration might be reasonable. Please note, that even if efficacy would be allowed as study endpoint, the effect size should be the same in both locations, as the trial is the same , and thus the sample size should be the same. 6. I wonder why the study must be conducted parallel in Paris and in Leuven. The first in human trial aims could be answered in one center, right? 7. The sampling plan, in particular what is written in "Existing data", "Recruitement" and "Sample size" needs review, as the delivered text does not meet the required information, or in the case of sample size is not appropriate to FiH trials. 8. Co-Primary endpoint in the Paris Trial need a statistical decision rule and considerations about the type one error inflation. 9. The parallel conduct of the trial needs a clear decision rule about the potential / desired outcome of the trial. Reviewer #2: I REALLY enjoyed reading your manuscript. This is incredibly important work. Thank you Below you will find some thoughts/comments/questions that I had while reading your manuscript. Page 12 – line 2 - Reversal is at present an invasive procedure that can be performed by either ultrasound-guided puncture, fetoscopy, or, less ideal, while the fetus is maintained on placental circulation or at birth after vaginal delivery [10]. From the paper cited “Primary attempt was by fetoscopy in 196 (67.1%), by ultrasound-guided puncture in 62 (21.2%), by tracheoscopy on placental circulation in 30 (10.3%), and postnatal tracheoscopy in 4 cases (1.4%). Would recommend re-wording the sentence to something like this “Reversal is at present an invasive procedure that can be performed prenatally by either ultrasound-guided puncture, fetoscopy, or, less ideal, after delivery of the baby prior to cord clamping while the fetus is maintained on placental circulation or after the cord is clamped at birth after vaginal delivery [10]. Page 12 – “The only neonatal deaths that occurred, were when balloon reversal was attempted in centers without experience or that were unprepared [10].” I think this should be worded stronger …. 3/9 babies that underwent a postnatal balloon removal died. These were in non-FETO centers. However, even in FETO centers it is difficult to remove the balloon postnatally. 1/3 are removed emergently prenatally and in the post-natal situation, there is a lot of (published and unpublished) morbidity concerns. This is VERY IMPORTANT! The concept of magnetic balloon removal prior to delivery to avoid all of this is – is SO, SO important!! Page 12 – “In conclusion, the occlusion period is a serious burden on patients who are requested to stay close to the FETO center until balloon removal, as well as for the fetal surgery centers because of the need for permanently available staff. All these conditions, limit the acceptability of FETO as being practiced today.” An experienced FETO team available 24/7 is required and even with this team, balloon removal can be difficult. Plus, it is not just about balloon removal – also management of the secretions and plugs if balloon is removed emergently in the postnatal situation (either before or after cord is clamped). Lots of potential morbidity. This balloon is the answer to SO many concerns, fears, problems that have happened. Again, I think the wording should be stronger here. Page 13 – you mention different positions and height, but does the degree of polyhydramnios affect the magnetic affect? Page 13 – the proximity to the MRI will cause the balloon to 1. deflate, then 2. to be expelled, correct? How do you know that the MRI does not cause the balloon to be expelled while inflated? If this is theoretically possible, maybe vocal cord injury and airway injury should be assessed with a post-natal ENT evaluation Page 13 “Other objectives include assessment of prematurity, preterm premature rupture of membranes, lung growth, neonatal survival, and the need for oxygen supplementation at discharge from the hospital.” Should you also assess ventilator days, need for tracheostomy (related to vocal cord injury as well as chronic lung disease), need for ECMO, length of stay and discharge on pulmonary hypertension medications Page 16 – “assessed through ultrasound immediately after MRI exposure” Have you done ultrasound during the MRI exposure? (to ensure balloon is deflated first … ) Page 18 – “In the Belgian site, the E.C. also required to positively identify the localization of the balloon following deflation” – this makes sense – also to make sure balloon is not expelled into the mouth and then with first breath at delivery could migrate to airway or esophagus (probably impossible, but thought to mention as it crossed my mind) Page 23 – “Balloon expulsion from the fetal airways (by postnatal chest X-ray)” – the balloon is radio-opaque? This was not clear to me in the study protocol Page 25 – should it be stated US by trace or AP method? MRI by Myers or Rypens method? Page 28 – neonatal outcomes – include stridor? aspiration? tracheostomy? (secondary to vocal cord injury/immobility/paralysis) Page 28 – would be nice if both hospitals measured tracheal diameter postnatally and required formal neonatal ENT evaluation Page 29 – not sure all of these outcomes are necessary (?) …. NEJM publication showed balloon impacts these outcomes. I would like to see more on description of pulmonary secretions/plugs at birth, first blood gas, first CXR (open or bilateral opacification due to airway secretions/plugs), time to intubation after delivery, neonatal …. In addition to how many required emergent removal at the time of delivery either before or after cord is clamped – this is really the most important feature Reviewer #3: Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review your work. Please see some of my comments below Page 11, 3rd paragraph "A second disadvantage of the current procedure is the need for a second intervention to reverse the occlusion and re-establish airway patency." Consider wording this as "Another (there are a few disadvantages) disadvantage of the current procedure is the need for an invasive, second intervention to reverse..." I think the possibility of a non-invasive intervention is critical. Page 12, "The only neonatal deaths that occurred, were when balloon reversal was attempted in centers without experience or that were unprepared [10]." Consider emphasizing this- neonatal deaths occurred only at non-FETO centers. 3 of 9 (33%) interventions done outside FETO centers led to neonatal death, presumably due to lack of technical expertise. This non-invasive procedure might offer better outcomes when families are unable to return to the FETO center. Page 13, "In that experiment, deflation was successfully achieved regardless of the fetal position and the exact level of the fetus from the ground [12]" Would you consider elaborating more on this? The ex-vivo findings in the standing and "lying-on-a-stretcher" were very reassuring. The only failed deflation was for the mother sitting in a wheelchair. "In the latter experiment, fetal lambs expelled the Smart-TO balloon following exposure to the fringe field of a 3T MRI." Forgive me if I misread this, but for deflation (albeit in an experimental environment) a 1.5T MRI was sufficient, however the expulsion occurred in the field of a 3T MRI? Does this need to be clarified? Will both deflation and expulsion be done around a standard 1.5T MRI? Also are there any concerns for airway damage in the setting of the expulsion of a partially deflated balloon? "The main objective of the study is to demonstrate the ability to consistently deflate the balloon prenatally by the magnetic fringe field generated by a clinical MRI scanner, and that it will be expelled from the airway" Are there two primary objectives? Deflation AND expulsion? Also, is it essential to clarify if this will be a 1.5T or 3T MRI? Page 15, "... hypothesized that for a 100% deflation and expelling rate". Consider using deflation and expulsion rate Page 23 Neonatal secondary endpoints (Belgium) "Tracheal diameter on first postnatal chest X-ray". Is there currently a standard method for this measure (vertebral level etc.)? Also, is this affected by size of endotracheal tube? "Assessment for any local side effects of the balloon (signs or symptoms of tracheomegaly and /or tracheomalacia)" At what age will this be done? Will tracheomalacia be diagnosed via DLB? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Vedanta S. Dariya ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Fetoscopic Endoluminal Tracheal Occlusion with Smart-TO balloon: study protocol to evaluate effectiveness and safety of non-invasive removal. PONE-D-22-21857R1 Dear Dr. Sananès, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Abhishek Makkar, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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