Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 8, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-03882Contrasting genetic diversity between Planchonella obovata sensu lato (Sapotaceae) on old continental and young oceanic island populations in JapanPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Setsuko, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The reviewers have included some comments in order to improve the manuscript. In my opinion, one major limitation is the number of SSR used in the study, that can limit the demographic models used in the study. Therefore, I suggest to clearly discuss the limitatons of this study and to provide clear information on the validity of these models. I also suggest to reduce the number of figures and tables in the main text, and to avoid including m&M in the introduction (and figures). Please, carefully check the comments to prepare a revised version of your manuscript. Please, also improve the data availiability statement, by including a reference to a public repository or to the data as supplementary material, or other valid option. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, the authors focus on the genetic diversity of plant populations in island environments. Through the study of a tree species, Planchonella obovata, collected on a dozen Japanese islands with contrasting origins (continental vs. oceanic) and ages, they seek to understand the colonisation modalities and to highlight factors contributing to the observed diversity of populations. The present manuscript is well written, with proper analyses and provides interesting results. I only have a reservation about the demographic analyses and estimates of divergence dates. Indeed, the genetic data are limited to 11 SSR markers and the models tested by the ABC approaches are obviously very simple. The authors should be cautious in their interpretation and mention the limitations of these analyses. Reviewer #2: General comments: This manuscript has scientific merit and significant contribution to population genetics. The objectives are clearly defined. The Materials and Methods section has a strong scientific background. The results are well presented. The discussion shows that the authors have complete understanding on the results, on their implications on genetic diversity, with excellent use of previously published studies. The conclusions are direct related with the objectives. Thus, my recommendation is acceptance with minor revisions. The recommendation of minor revisions is based on some limitations of the current version, emphasized in the following specific comments. 1. Abstract: No materials and methods. Include. 2. Too long introduction (more than three pages including Figure 1). Note that the text in lines 86-87 is objective and the text in lines 118-119 is Materials and Methods. Remove. 3. There is no justification to change the distance to the nearest continent (specify the continent) or the geographical difference between two populations to a natural logarithm scale. Note that the correlation between the geographical difference in km and in Ln(km) is low. I computed 0.14. 4. Is there a justification to Ln-transform the island area? 5. There is no justification to arcsine transformation of He (expected heterozygosity) values. This is unacceptable. 6. It is important to specify the parameter set defined in the Structure software. How you defined the Ancestry model? How you defined the Allele Frequency model? 7. Insert the reference for the DA genetic distance (line 206): Nei et al (1983) J Mol Evol 19:153-170. 8. Figure 2 is referenced in the Materials and Methods section but the content is Result. 9. You can improve the conclusion section simply by providing objective answers to the questions raised in the objectives. 10. There are an excessive number of Figures and Tables. To keep a Table or Figure, it is important that it be informative to the readers. See my opinion below: Figure 1: Informative; keep. Table 1: Informative; keep. Please, provide tests for Hardy-Weinberg equilibrium using Fisher’s permutation test or chi-square with Bonferroni correction. In this way, you can assess if there is a significant FIS (inbreeding coefficient) and use this information to discuss population size. Figure 2: Non-informative; note that you did not reference it in the results section. Figure 3: Informative; keep. Figure 4: There is no justification to fit a regression model transforming the geographical distance to a natural logarithm scale. This is unacceptable. Is there a justification to use Fst/(1-Fst)? Figure 5: I can accept keeping this Figure if the AR and HE were ordered from the lowest value to the highest. Table 2: Is there a justification to keep? Figure 6: Informative but only the results for K = 3 should be presented. Remove also the items a) and c). There is no justification to present and, especially, to discuss the results for the other values of the suggested number of clusters. This is also unacceptable. There is no doubt that the Yaeyama and Daito’s plants represent a single population in Hardy-Weinberg equilibrium. Table 3: Is there a justification to keep? Table 4: Is there a justification to keep? A Table must be self-informative. None parameters are defined in this table. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Contrasting genetic diversity between Planchonella obovata sensu lato (Sapotaceae) on old continental and young oceanic island populations in Japan PONE-D-22-03882R1 Dear Dr. Setsuko, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Judi Hewitt Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-03882R1 Contrasting genetic diversity between Planchonella obovata sensu lato (Sapotaceae) on old continental and young oceanic island populations in Japan Dear Dr. Setsuko: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Judi Hewitt Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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