Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 13, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-22611Supporting Older Family Caregivers of Young Adults with Intellectual and Developmental Disabilities (IDD): A Pilot Program with Socially Assistive RoboticsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by June 24, 2022. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a very interesting paper and the authors are embarking on a very relevant topic. I appreciated the stages of the research study - first working with people with developmental disabilities and their parents to adapt the robot, and then doing a carefully designed experiment in the lab, and then evaluating it. I think the study can be strengthened by shifting the language and describing what was done differently. My most fundamental question is why is the study emphasizing supporting older family caregivers of young adults and not the value of robots for young people and their family caregivers? The authors do include the young adults in all stages of the study but yet they are secondary in the title and emphasis from research questions. A robot only ends up supporting social respite if first, fundamentally, the robot offers social companionship and entertainment to the individual. I think whether this might work to also provide respite becomes a secondary exploratory objective. The experiment involves a 15 minute interaction with a novel machine. This does not "Test" respite at all. It is not in the home, it is not with something the young adult is familiar with and the parent is not going about other activities not watching the young person. This experiment is an early exploration or development of something that might be useful in this way. That needs to be more heavily emphasized. Related to that, given that it is only 15 minutes in a lab environment outside of the home, with something novel the young person is not used to, the pre and post measures seem odd. They would not reflect changes in stress levels through having respite. They simply measure the reaction to the 15 minute experiment. It could be ok to still use these measures but they should be framed differently. I do not think that this study looks at how much these robots help with social respite. They look at whether young adults and families like them and if they think they would be willing to explore how in the future, depending on the way they work, they could be an alternative to humans to provide social respite. Also importantly, because all of the young people were able to provide their own consent, this suggests that the utility of these robots would be helpful with young people who are able to manage with some independence at home, emphasizing social aspects of respite, as opposed to safety issues. These were not young people with more severe disabilities requiring more constant hands on supervision. A few additional specific comments follow: I would remove their CR's from the manuscript and use terms that seem more empowering and respectful of these young people. Line 41 page 2 as an example. Could say instead: Both the young adults and their parents scored favorably... (note they are all parents according to the table). I would also remove the term "children" when possible to avoid confusion on the age of the young people. I am not sure why in the first paragraph authors use the term intellectual and developmental disorder and right after developmental disabilities. Perhaps use disabilities instead of disorder throughout. (p 3 line 60). I would revise the introduction to talk about the importance of companionship and support for young people with IDD living with older parents and the possibility of SAR. The examples of SAR provided with older people are specific to the older individual who needs social assistance and not to the caregivers of these older people and the same should be for those with IDD. There can be some discussion of need for respite but I would first talk about need for engagement and companionship to the individual. In the literature on interventions for family caregivers, authors could cite literature reviews on mindfulness based interventions for family caregivers, and also on family caregiving of adults with IDD. Line 97 page 4 - I am not sure the main reason for in home respite is financial. Paying someone to work at home and out of the home can cost the same amount. It may be easier for the family if it is at home and does not require the parent to take the person to respite, and it also may be more comfortable for the individual. lines 109-115 page 5 on SAR focus on benefits to older person. So not a strong argument why SAR good for social respite to parent. This framing feels disrespectful to me. I may change the objectives in this way: 1 development of SRA that was well accepted by both young adults with IDD and their aging parents.. 2. development of adequate responsiveness and engagement with young adults 3. potential for improving well being of young adults 4. potential to provide respite and improve well being of older family caregivers methods page 7 line 150 is an example of their CR's, same line - make sure they understood, and line 151 in written FORMAT respectively page 7 line 158 - comment on skills/abilities of individuals who participated does not represent all adults with IDD as they were all able to provide written informed consent independently. Measures - not surprising that there was no change in quality of life and burden related to a brief 15 minute intervention. I would not have chosen these measures. For QofL for adults with IDD, is this measure valid for these young adults? My guess is it would not be appropriate. This will ultimately be the authors' decision but I do not think that the parent or young adult pre post measures add anything to the study. I would have selected measures that are sensitive to change in the moment, such as calmness, mood. And for the young people I would use valid measures for them. I the qualitative comments are much more relevant, as well as measures of the experience with the robot. Results I found the quotes quite rich and informative. I might separate how people experienced the robot from what they think they could do with a robot if they had one in their home (either to interact, or for skills teaching or respite). Discussion I would reframe the discussion to de-emphasize respite (it did not test respite), but rather an exploration of whether SAR is feasible for companionship, skill building and potential respite from the perspectives of young adults and older family caregivers. There should be some discussion on why young people need additional social companionship and also the ethical implications of supporting older families but providing robots in the home as opposed to more community based engagement opportunities. Limitations Not only was the representation of the older caregivers limited so was the representation of the young adults. This should be mentioned, especially around their cognitive ability. If future work wants to focus on respite, there needs to be more specific measurement of respite needs and what respite is. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Socially Assistive Robotics and Older Family Caregivers of Young Adults with Intellectual and Developmental Disabilities (IDD): A Pilot Study Exploring Respite, Acceptance, and Usefulness PONE-D-21-22611R1 Dear Dr. Xu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Robert Didden Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-22611R1 Socially Assistive Robotics and Older Family Caregivers of Young Adults with Intellectual and Developmental Disabilities (IDD): A Pilot Study Exploring Respite, Acceptance, and Usefulness Dear Dr. Xu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Robert Didden Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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