Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 18, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-01418Comparison of two one-piece acrylic foldable intraocular lenses: Short-term change in axial movement after cataract surgery and its effect on refractionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Maeda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please read the comments from Reviewer #2 and #3 carefully and consider their comments in the revised version. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 21 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. How did you assess you case number? 2. Was the CASIA measurement performed only once in each case? 3. Was it performed by one examiner? Or more? Could you please provide ZEMAX simulation results or table as supplementary material? Reviewer #2: Comparison of two one-piece acrylic foldable intraocular lenses: Short-term change in axial movement after cataract surgery and its effect on refraction The study describes axial IOL movement of two different IOLs from day 4 to 1 month postoperatively and correlates it with changes in the MRSE over time. Methods: When the study was retrospectively conducted, it is unlikely that it took 15 months. Rather patients which had surgery in this timespan were included. Can you explain in short how the ZEMAX software works? Did you use the post-OP Cataract module of the Casia 2 software? Why did the authors include 42 eyes when only 34 were required according to their sample size calculation? Due to the retrospective nature of the study, no drop out correction is necessary. Why did the authors assume 0.1mm as a SD? There are a lot of studies available with SD`s for axial movement of IOLs. Since you study axial movement of the eye, you should clearly state which viscoelastics were used during the conduct of the study. Did the surgeon also remove the OVD from behind the lens? I ask this because one of the IOLs was a toric IOL, usually a surgeon removes the OVD behind the lens very thoroughly to avoid postoperative IOL rotation due to remaining viscoelastic. Did the surgeon remove viscoelastics for both groups under the same manner? Or were the same viscoealstics used? This could affect postoperative axial stabilization within the first weeks. How was the postoperative refraction (MRSE) assessed at 4 days and 1 month? Objective or subjective refraction? I miss a detailed description of both IOLs in the methods section (overall diameter, optic diameter, capsular bag angle, haptic resilience, and other characteristics) Results: It’s a little bit confusing that you present change in IOL depth and actual axial movement. What`s the difference between these two variables? You should describe this in detail in the methods. Are the results absolute values? Since the IOL can move forward and backwards? This is a very essential point I would also report the range for the IOL depths and/or IOL axial movements [min;max] or seeing Boxplots of the results to get a better feeling were all the results are located. Discussion: What do the authors mean by “constricted” and “straight” haptics, what exactly is the difference between the haptics of these two IOLs? A figure would be good for better understandability. The overall discussion is well written. I miss a single point: Since both of the IOLs show pretty much the same design, what may be the main reason or multiple reasons for this difference between the IOLs in axial movement? Another important point: was IOL movement correlated with axial length? It has been shown in earlier studies, that shorter eyes (or shorter preoperative ACDs) are more prone to axial IOL movement postoperatively. (Schartmüller et al, JRS 2021) (Schartmüller et al ESCRS 2019 Paris) Reviewer #3: The authors present an interesting manuscript about two different IOL (haptic) designs and their axial stability in the postoperative course. Results are set in context with refractive changes. Interestingly, the authors chose a toric lens and a nontoric lens, which leads to differences in the centration of the haptics, still I like the study design. While I think that overall, the manuscript is very well composed, I do see a few open questions: With Aquaeous depth as main criterion, the authors reported significant changes in posterior radial curvature but failed to report changes in CCT and in ACD. Changes in posterior corneal curvature might be a sign of swelling of the corneal endothelium, certain levels of Descemet striae and swelling are not seldom after cataract surgery. AQD should not be described without ACD and CCT. What is lacking is a discussion about the ideal timeframe for lens constant optimization, as a shift of the IOL and refraction obviously influence constant optimization if refractive results for certain types of IOLs are analyzed too early. I would think that an autorefractometer is influenced by the Abbe number of the IOL and a diffractive form. We see systematically differing results from subjective refraction that differ for various IOLs. I don’t necessarily advise to change to ARF. Furthermore, repeatability has proven better for us for subjective refraction than for pseudophakic objective refraction. It is of note that we actually have 0.125 Dpt steps for subjective refraction (although not for a phoropter) that can be used if 0.25 Dpt seems to be too imprecise. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-22-01418R1Comparison of two one-piece acrylic foldable intraocular lenses: Short-term change in axial movement after cataract surgery and its effect on refractionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Maeda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please carefully read the comments from reviewer #3 and consider these comments in the revised version. Especially the comments regarding the model eye and the use of OpticStudio should be addressed. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 21 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have properly addressed all comments. The manuscript is now improved in all its part. I suggest to send the exact ZEMAX table as Supplementary materials. Reviewer #3: The manuscript looks promising in its current state. Here are my last comments after the revision: Reviewer comments: o I didn’t view this as critical in my first review, but as both other reviewers noticed this point I have to agree that the description of how OpticStudio was used is kind of lacking in this study. Apparently the authors used a simulation model with 7 rays? Which model eye was chosen? Did the authors use full aperture raytracing or the paraxial simplification form? Was the individual pupil size and asphericity considered? Considering 2 different IOL designs were used was IOL geometry data known? At least all the actual simulation details used for this analysis should be provided in the materials section. o Regarding the answer to my own comments of IOL constants optimization: “The purpose of the current study is to investigate the postoperative IOL axial movement, not improve the prediction error of the IOL power calculation formulas.” Well, why else are we interested in axial IOL movement, if not for right (right lens constant) and stable (good IOL design) refractive results? Anyways, “we can say that at least 1 month or more after surgery is required to evaluate the postoperative refraction as many studies reported” is a sufficient statement, this doesn’t have to go into an in-depth analysis of every IOL calculation formula. Methods: o I think the statement “the industry standard optical system design” sounds a bit like advertisement, can this be omitted? o I figure the refraction lane length was standardized? Which lane length was used? Otherwise, this study can be accepted in my eyes. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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