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PONE-D-22-12472Detection of serum IgG autoantibodies to FcεRIα by ELISA in patients with chronic spontaneous urticariaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Park, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 18 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments : July 4, 2022 Dear Dr. Hae-Sim Park Ref: PONE-D-22-12472 Title: Detection of serum IgG autoantibodies to FcεRIα by ELISA in patients with chronic spontaneous urticaria Journal: PLOS ONE Thank you for your choosing us for your publication medium. Your study on the autoantibodies to the IgE receptor is interesting in our readers. However, there are some demerits in the discrete evidences and setting of experimental observation. We have completed the review process of your manuscript. As you can read the attached comments, there are several contriversial issues in your study, causing for the 6 independent reviews, which are not general. One reviewer is very positive, but the other criticisms are so important for your research to justify. I believe that the comments can help you to revise your MS. I hope you can easily revise it. Thank you Sincerely, Cheorl-Ho Kim Prof Sungkyunkwan Univ, Biol Science Dept. Editor of Plos One [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Partly Reviewer #5: No Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: I Don't Know Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The objective of this study was to investigate the prevalence of circulating autoantibodies to FcεRIα in association with clinical/autoimmune parameters in CSU patients. In the era of tailored medicine, endotyping of CSU is strengthened in order to provide better treatment option for CSU patients. Authors performed important study and demonstrated the presence of serum autoantibodies to FcεRIα using their own reliable ELISA methods which were much higher in the autoimmune CSU group. Further studies are needed to validate this methods and results in the large number of CSU patients cohort. Reviewer #2: Jang and co-workers investigate an ELISA method to detect IgG autoantibodies to the high affinity IgE receptor in patients with chronic spontaneous urticaria by using a mAb as solid phase antigen. Inhibition assays are used to assess the specificity of the method. They report that IgG to Fc�RI are present in sera of CSU patients, especially in those with an autoimmune phenotype. GENERAL COMMENTS A standardized in-vitro method able to detect Fc�RI autoantibodies has been sought for decades with little success. The present attempt is quite interesting, but the study shows a series of shortcomings that need to be addressed in order to increase its quality. SPECIFIC POINTS Line 85: Which allergens were tested? Line 98: This is a mistake! In most cases CSU patients with thyroid autoantibodies don’t show any defect in thyroid function. Thus, testing TPO and TG auto-antibodies only in the presence of abnormal TSH levels leads to an underestimate of autoimmune study subjects. Lines 166-7: The higher total IgE levels in CSU patients suggest autoallergy rather than IgG-mediated autoimmunity (see Schmetzer, at al. J Allergy Clin Immunol. 2018 Sep;142(3):876-882.) Lines 168-171. See previous comment to line 98. Line 227: Regarding the prevalence of ASST see Asero et al Clin Exp Allergy. 2001 Jul;31(7):1105-10. Line 229: See Fusari et al. Allergy. 2005 Feb;60(2):256-8. Lines 235-6: In most previous studies dealing with ASST and HRA, there has always been a marked discrepancy between the prevalence of these two markers, with ASST+ patients that were invariably much more frequent that HRA+ patients Lines 251-2: The functional basophil activation tests maybe are not widely performed but remain the only reliable method to check whether the autoantibodies to the high affinity IgE receptor or to IgE are functionally active (see also Ref 17) Lines 269-70: this is evidence against the specificity of the detection of these autoantibodies in the absence of a functional testing. Lines 293-305: Evidence of an association between HDM and CSU is dated and poor. Atopic status as a whole prevails in auto-allergic CSU patients (type I after Gell-Cooms). See Schmetzer et al. suggested above. Line 308: “Basophil functional assays… ”. These are missing but remain the only way to show that IgG autoantibodies are functional. Of autoimmunity Line 309: ANA and ASST are poor surrogate markers. See also Asero et al. Eur Ann Allergy Clin Immunol. 2021 Dec 14. doi: 10.23822/ MINOR POINTS Line 39: Why CU and not CSU? Line 48: Reference 17 is also appropriate at this point Line 56: a standardized method is still unavailable. Line 114: Sera? Maybe the authors mean the YH35324 bound to the solid phase… Line 117: dilution) were loaden onto… Line 223: and/or IgE (delete anti- and antibodies) Line 233: delete using. Lines 242-3: Please delete the sentence in brackets. Line 282: Suggestion: “Recent studies suggest that, along with mast cells, eosinophils, basophils and other cell types are involved…” Reviewer #3: This report seeks to evaluate auto-antibodies specific for FcER1 that could be causally-linked to CSU. The approach uses a novel fusion protein in which an extracellular domain of FcER1alpha is linked to an IgG4 Fc domain. I have several concerns with the report. I found it challenging to understand the methodologies, which could relate to language, but also due to the way it is presented. Some of my concerns: 1) The main ELISA appears to actually be an inhibition assay. Why is it not described as such (noting that a separate section describes an inhibition ELISA with dose-response curve)? Why is there no data using a direct ELISA - it would likely be easier to interpret and more compelling than the current presentation? How was the inhibition concentration of 5 ug/mL chosen for the main assays, when in the dose-response study this same concentration exhibited very little inhibition? 2) Why the IgG purification in line 120, but not in the main assay? This seems like comparing apples and oranges between the approaches 3) How good are the performance characteristics of the selected cut-offs for distinguishing between CSU and HC? 4) One of the main positive findings in the paper, namely Fig 1A, shows a difference between CSU and HC that is largely explained by several outliers in the HC group with high ratios. How are these values >1 explained? Are they biologically plausible or meaningful? 5) The discussion dominates the paper and is lengthy. Overall, there may be a story here, but the methods and results as described and shown are hard to understand and raise concerns about validity and reproducibility. Reviewer #4: The currently accepted definition for autoimmune urticaria is finding functional autoantibodies by basophil histamine release assay or basophil activation tests. ANA and ASST do not provide sufficient evidence. Positive thyroid antibodies with low total IgE are potential surrogate markers for patients with a positive positive BHRA. Functional anti-IgE autoantibodies have also been described in chronic spontaneous urticaria. They have not been assessed in this study. Immunoassays detect functional and non-functional antibodies. Earlier work by Dr Kaplan showed that the IgG subclass is important in determining functionality in the basophil histamine release assay. Why use UAS6 - the standard clinical scoring system is over 7 days? The methodology of the ELISA is difficult to follow. The clinical utility of this test is uncertain. Some of the references are misquote, such as 7 and 8. Reviewer #5: The manuscript “Detection of serum IgG autoantibodies to FcεRIα by ELISA in patients with chronic spontaneous urticaria” reported the results of a study that investigated CSU patients using an innovative ELISA test to detect serum Ig to FcεRIα. The study is interesting, but there are some criticism in the methods and the results are not in line with literature. In particular: Methods, lines 90-91. Atopy was defined when SPT showed a positive results or serum allergen specific IgE was elevated (≥0.35 IU/mL) to at least 1 common environmental allergen. Why you didn’t considered also clinical symptoms? Considering only SPT or specific IgE, you cannot diagnosed atopic dermatitis. Methods, lines 97-98. “In cases of abnormal TSH results, thyroid autoantibodies (anti-TPO or anti-TG) were checked”. Really, there are some patients with autoimmune thyroiditis and normal TSH. Also CSU guidelines recommended the measurement of serum autoantibody IgG to thyroid peroxidase. How you checked thyroid autoantibodies only in cases of abnormal TSH? Results, lines 176-177. “The ratio of IgG to FcεRIα was significantly lower in patients with CSU than in HCs.” This result is singular. In fact, in literature the incidence of anti- FcεRIα autoantibodies is normally higher in CSU patients (Immunobiology. 2018 Dec;223(12):807-811 - Egypt J Immunol . 2020 Jan;27(1):141-155 - J Microbiol Immunol Infect. 2020 Feb;53(1):141-147 - J Immunol Res. 2022 Feb 25;2022:6863682). Results, lines 198-199. “The autoimmune CSU group had significantly lower ratio of IgG/IgA to FcεRIα than the non-autoimmune CSU group”. Also, this result is singular. In fact, in literature the incidence of anti- FcεRIα autoantibodies is normally higher in CSU patients with autoimmunity (especially with positive ASST). Discussion, lines 207-208. “Higher levels of serum IgG/IgA to FcεRIα were noted in patients with CSU with autoimmune phenotypes”. In results, you state “The autoimmune CSU group had significantly lower ratio of IgG/IgA to FcεRIα than the non-autoimmune CSU group”. How can you explain this difference? Discussion, lines 232-234. “A previous study showed higher serum IgG to FcεRIα estimated by using immunoblot assay in CSU patients, especially in those with a positive ASST, although further replication studies are not validated”. Really, some other studies confirm higher serum IgG to FcεRIα in CSU patients, as above reported. Discussion, lines 236-240. “The discordance between previous studies and ours in the same ethnicity may be attributed to … the different detection methods applied (immune-dot assay vs ELISA). The sensitivity and specificity between these 2 different assays cannot be comparable.” In this case, the lower serum IgG to FcεRIα that you have encountered can be attributed to: (1) lower sensitivity of the method that you used; (2) lower specificity of other methods, giving false positive results. Can you demonstrate this statement? Discussion, lines 256-257. “The present study showed a higher prevalence of IgG to FcεRIα in CSU patients than in HCs”. In results, you state “The ratio of IgG to FcεRIα was significantly lower in patients with CSU than in HCs.” How can you explain this difference? Discussion, lines 259-260. “The autoimmune group had a higher prevalence of IgG to FcεRIα than the nonautoimmune group”. In results, you state “The autoimmune CSU group had significantly lower ratio of IgG/IgA to FcεRIα than the non-autoimmune CSU group”. How can you explain this difference? Reviewer #6: Authors have established an ELISA for IgG, IgM and IgA autoantibodies against FceRIa, using a recombinant chimeric molecule which consists of human IgG2 and FceRIa. Using this system, the authors studied the presence of IgG, IgA and IgM autoantibodies against FceRIa in sera of patients with chronic spontaneous urticaria (CSU) and healthy controls, in relation to autoimmune characteristics and other clinical backgrounds. They detected all IgG, IgA and IgM subclasses of autoantibodies against FceRI both in sera of patients with CSU and healthy controls, but the prevalence is higher in IgG subclass of patients with CSU, especially that in patients of autoimmune group, and IgA subclass in patients with CSU of autoimmune group, but not in IgM subclass. The reason for discrepancies between this report and previous reports of the autoantibodies against FceRIa remains unclear. Major problems: 1. The presence of autoantibodies against FceRIa is commonly compared with reactions in autologous serum skin test (ASST) and basophil functional assay (histamine release test or basophil activation test) rather than the comprehensive autoimmune characteristics defined by the authors in this study, i.e. positive results to ASST and/or antinuclear antibody (ANA) (autoimmune group). The authors stated that they were not afford to do basophils functional assays. However, the reviewer argue that the authors should show relationships of the amounts of autoantibodies and results of ASST. Authors should also describe why they employed ASST in combination to ANA, which was not taken in their previous study of the autoantibodies using dot blot assay (ref 19). 2. Authors showed that the level of IgG autoantibodies against YH35324 in patients with CSU was higher than that of healthy control. Moreover, the level in patients in autoimmune group was higher than that of non-autoimmune group. How about the comparison between patients with CSU in non-autoimmune group and healthy control? 3. For the inhibition test in ELISA, authors used YH35324 as an inhibitor. I wonder why not recombinant FceRIa, which should reflect more specific binding of autoantibodies against FceRIa. 4. Figure 1. Cutoff values for autoantibodies in this study should be shown as dotted or broken lines. 5. Page 4, line 80-84. The way of evaluation by UAS6 should be described in more detail. Is it the sum of UAS in 6 days? If so, the worst score should be 36, but sever urticaria was defined as 11 to 15 in line 83. 6. Page 7, line 132-135. These descriptions read to me that YH35324 was used as an inhibitor. If authors intend to show the superiority of their ELISA using YH35324 to ELISA using recombinant soluble FceRIa, which is the method employed in reference 10, they should use recombinant FceRIa rather than YH35324. In any case, data of such comparison is more convincing for readers. Moreover, a figure of relationship of IgG binding to HY35324 and that to recombinant FceRIa in sera of individual donors should be shown as a supplementary material. 7. Page 10, line 211. A phrase, “as well as serum free IgE in the sera of various allergic” should be deleted. Data in this manuscript do not contain any information directly support this statement. 8. Page 11, line 235-236. “However, the present study showed no ….” As pointed above, data should be shown, even if there is no difference between ASST-positive and negative groups. Table 2 showed the number and rate of ASST positive patients in IgG autoantibodies positive and negative patients, but did not show the numbers of IgG autoantibodies positive and negative patients in ASST positive and negative patients. 9. Page 260, line 260. The prevalence should also be described in the Result section as well. 10. Page 13-15, Discussions in line 276 to the end, especially to 305 are too long and tedious. The level of anti-house dust mite IgE does not have much relevance to the study of autoantibodies taken in this study. Minor problems] 1. Page 6, line 122. Is “IgG antibody” a mistake for “anti-IgG antibody”? 2. Page 11, line 215. “to FceRIa” should be “to FceRIa or IgE”. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Detection of serum IgG autoantibodies to FcεRIα by ELISA in patients with chronic spontaneous urticaria PONE-D-22-12472R1 Dear Dr. Park, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Cheorl-Ho Kim, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): August 9, 2022 Dear Dr Park, Thanks for your submission to Plos One. I have checked your revision and found it valuable for publication, although there are still controversial issues on the clinical tests or examinations. As you know, the serum IgG autoantibodies to FcεRIα has been detected by other works before your submisison to our Plos One. However, I recognized your work as a systemic validation from patients with chronic spontaneous urticaria. Thank you Sincerely Cheorl-Ho Kim PhD Academic Editor Plos One Reviewers' comments: |
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