Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 19, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-33175Development and Psychometric Assessment of Cutaneous Leishmaniasis Prevention Behaviors questionnaire in adolescent female students: Application of Integration of Cultural Model and Extended Parallel Process Model.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alavijeh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 26 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Note that it is not acceptable for the authors to be the sole named individuals responsible for ensuring data access. We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I read the manuscript about “Development and Psychometric Assessment of Cutaneous Leishmaniasis Prevention Behaviors questionnaire in adolescent female students: Application of Integration of Cultural Model and Extended Parallel Process Model.” This research is a fascinating study about one of the essential points facing leishmaniasis: prevention behavior. One of the positive points of this study was the integration of two cultural and individual models n, which according to the social structure of the study area, can be effective in investigating prevention behavior. A suitable questionnaire has been designed using the opinions of health education specialists and healthcare workers together as an expert in this field. Considering the location of Isfahan as one of the most critical endemics of leishmaniasis in Iran, a careful study of residents' opinions regarding prevention behaviors can be of great help to health system planners The authors developed a preliminary questionnaire based on the integration of cultural PEN-3 and Extended parallel models and were completed by 460 adolescent female students resident in endemic areas of zoonotic CL IN Isfahan. However, minor revisions are needed before being considered for publication in PloS One. - Mixed capital and small letters are used in the title. The title should be corrected based on the journal's style. - Mixed capital and small letters have also been inconsistently used in the subtitles (parts 3.1, 3.2, 3.3, and others). - Some terms should be definied at first appearance (i.e., PEN, ICC should be defined at previous parts). - A thorough revision of the text is critical. - L69, currently, the official incidence rate is 10,000 to 15000/100,000 persons annually. - The authors should elaborate on the study area, the causative species, and the disease's burden. - The prepared diagrams is not sharp Reviewer #2: Dear Editor: Thank you for concerning me to review the manuscript, entitled “Development and Psychometric Assessment of Cutaneous Leishmaniasis Prevention Behaviors questionnaire in adolescent female students: Application of Integration of Cultural Model and Extended Parallel Process Model.” The aim of this article is to development and psychometric assessment of Cutaneous Leishmaniasis prevention behaviors questionnaire with application of integration of cultural PEN-3 Model and Extended Parallel Process Model in adolescent female students in endemic areas. Overall, the study is interesting and novel; however, the following concerns need to be corrected: Title: - According to the format of journal, all the first letters of the words except the first word should be written in lower case. “Development and psychometric assessment of cutaneous leishmaniasis prevention behaviors questionnaire in adolescent female students: application of integration of cultural model and extended parallel process model” Abstract: - Please explain more about the aim of the study in the abstract section. - Line 48; write the word “Test-retest” in lower case. Introduction: - The manuscript needs extensive stylistic and English editing by a native speaker with science background. - Line 69; use “incidence” instead of “incident” and in recent references; Iran is one of the seven countries with the highest prevalence of cutaneous leishmaniasis (CL). Correct this sentence with new reference. o Mehdi Bamorovat , Iraj Sharifi , Esmat Rashedi, Alireza Shafiian , Fatemeh Sharifi , Ahmad Khosravi , Amirhossein Tahmouresi . A novel diagnostic and prognostic approach for unresponsive patients with anthroponotic cutaneous leishmaniasis using artificial neural networks. PloS One. 2021;16(5): e0250904. - Line 81: Correct “CL” with upper cases. - Line 84: Use “CL” instead of “cutaneous leishmaniasis”. - Line 104: Cite references after “…. environments to prevent CL”. - Line 105: Figure 1 is not sharp. Increase the resolution of Figure 1. Method: - Mention the age range of participants. - Figure 2 is not sharp at all. Increase the resolution of that. - Line 150: were the students who requested to comment on the importance level of questions, infected to cutaneous leishmaniasis? - Line 211: Correct “0.889” Results: - Table 1: the questions of the first factor "Perceived efficacy” are not enough and useful and they are just repeated and are not enough for effectiveness of the recommended behaviors. - Line 219,224,239,229,231,233 and …: Correct the decimal point “/” to “.” Like 1.895. - Table 1. In the ninth factor, "Perceived Susceptibility in case of Insufficient Personal Protection" Is question 2 proper for this section? - Explain more about table 2. Discussion - Line 7: Write the “Leishmaniasis” with lower cases. - In part 4-1-3 “Perceived susceptibility”: compared your results with another studies such as this review study “Behaviors and Perceptions Related to Cutaneous Leishmaniasis in Endemic Areas of the World: A Review” - Part 4-2-2” Individual enablers and environmental enablers”: in this part you explained about results and questionnaire, please compared with another studies. Conclusion - Explain more about the message you want to deliver. Availability of data and materials - Line 162: correct the “fles” to “files” ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Development and psychometric assessment of cutaneous leishmaniasis prevention behaviors questionnaire in adolescent female students: application of integration of cultural model and extended parallel process model PONE-D-21-33175R1 Dear Dr. Zamani-Alavijeh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I read the revised manuscript about “Development and Psychometric Assessment of Cutaneous Leishmaniasis Prevention Behaviors questionnaire in adolescent female students: Application of Integration of Cultural Model and Extended Parallel Process Model.” All comments made by the author have been applied and in my opinion are approved for publication in Plus One journal. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-21-33175R1 Development and psychometric assessment of cutaneous leishmaniasis prevention behaviors questionnaire in adolescent female students: application of integration of cultural model and extended parallel process model Dear Dr. Zamani-Alavijeh: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Mona Dür Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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