Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 28, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-02793The effects of α2-adrenoceptor stimulation on luminal alkalinisation and net fluid flux in the rat duodenumPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dahlgren, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. The manuscript has been evaluated by two experts in the field. After careful consideration, we feel that the manuscript has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the concerns raised by the reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 15 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Reviewer Comments: The article entitled “The effects of α2-adrenoceptor stimulation on luminal alkalinization and net fluid flux in the rat duodenum” sought to elucidate the mechanism by which α2-adrenergic receptor stimulation attenuates luminal alkalinization and augments net fluid absorption in the duodenum. The in vivo approach described herein systematically evaluated luminal alkalinization and net fluid absorption in the rat duodenum by perfusing different solutions in the presence and absence of α2-adrenergic receptor agonist. While it is obvious that a tremendous amount of time, effort, and resources were put into this work, some major concerns prevent me from recommending this article for publication. Major Concerns 1. There is no stated relevance or significance mentioned in the Abstract, Introduction or Discussion. It would be nice to know why these receptors are important, their role in disease onset/progression, or other notable involvement. 2. Additionally, the article is mostly observational and supports the reports of others. How has this work moved the field forward? What needs to be done next? These questions will need to be discussed in the introduction and expanded on in the Discussion. 3. It would be helpful to have a figure that summarizes each perfusion condition over time. It could be put in the methods section. 4. It would also be useful to have a final figure depicting the conclusions and displaying the events inside and outside the cell. Minor Concerns 1. The article needs further proofreading and editing by a native English-speaking individual. Reviewer #2: The paper by Sjöblom and collaborators aims to understand the role of alpha2-adrenoceptor agonism on fluid and acid-base transport in the duodenum. They employ a classical and elegant approach to achieve these goals, using in vivo measurements of fluid flow and luminal alkalinization/acidification. However, a number of concerns in my view must be addressed before the paper is rendered publishable. Major points: 1. presentation of the results - Up to the very last two subsections of the Results section, the text is very difficult to follow. It basically consists of an expanded list of expanded protocols (e.g. "clonidine +/- idaxozan", "Cl- free perfusion" etc) whose inner logic to address the issues the study aims to understand is not evident. The authors should thoroughly rewrite these subsections following the pattern they themselves used in the las two subsections, by briefly explaining at the beginning why they did those experiments and, at their ends, briefly explain which mechanistic conclusions can be drawn from the results. Also, the heading of each figure legend should be thoroughly expanded, as they should be self explanatory. 2. baseline levels - in many figures already the early baseline recordings are different between reference and text groups. The origin of such differences is not clear and are a big concern to the appropriate interpretation of the data (see point 3, below), as from what I could gather from the methods, one should not expect these differences, as the infusion of the drugs occurs acutely during the recordings, i.e. there is no pretreatment of the animals prior to the surgery that could generate these differences in baseline. Though not addressing this directly, the authors seem to have been concerned by that, considering they present various correlation graphs with data from the individual experiments. However, I did not see how these correlation graphs are helpful to their claims. As they are dealt with at present in the manuscript, I believe they could be withdrawn. If the authors choose to maintain them, then I believe they should be presented in the figures that present the summary data as they appear, not lumped together in a single figure. The fact that the authors state that the animals in the study weighed from 190 to 503 g is also a source of concern. Could this be a source of such big differences in baseline values, as such dispersion in weights suggest a big difference in ages as well? 3. Statistics - I think the use of two-way ANOVA as the main statistical approach to analyze the data would deeply strengthen the authors' claims, as this would allow the authors to answer questions such as: "does time affect the size of the effect?"; "does [e.g. clonidine] treatment affect the variable?"; and "does the treatment affect (e.g. anticipate) the effect in time?" [i.e. interaction between treatment and time factors], already from the summary main results of the two-way ANOVA. 4. Systemic infusion of drugs - Though I understand that due to the nature of the model a targeted manipulation of adrenergic terminals specifically in the enteric nervous system is very difficult, one cannot escape the fact that various other systems and circuits could have been affected by the drugs the authors infused in the animals. For instance, hexamethonium is a general ganglionic blocker, and thus ganglionic parasympathetic synapses certainly were also affected by that. Considering that the parasympathetic inputs are generally considered to be the most intense autonomic modulators of enteric activity, the authors must consider this limitation of their study in the discussion section as well as discuss how could a general parasympathetic effect be ruled out in the hexamethonium experiments. Minor points: 1. How many animals were used in total and what was their age range? 2. The authors present the luminal alkalinization data in units of umol . cm-2 . h-1. However, the reference they cite for the method presents the data as umol . cm-1 . h-1. Which is the correct unit? If the authors indeed did measure alkalinization flux per square area, how did they account for the increase in area due to luminal folds ans vilosities in the duodenum? 3. As absolute fluid flux data are presented as a function of time, it would make more sense if the data were presented as a cartesian plot with time as the x-axis, as the authors do for alkalinization flux, rather than presenting them as bar charts. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-02793R1Effects of α2-adrenoceptor stimulation on luminal alkalinisation and net fluid flux in rat duodenumPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dahlgren, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. Before the manuscript can be accepted please add the error bars in Figure 2F and superimpose all bar graphs with the dot plots to show the distribution of raw data. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The manuscript has been thoroughly revised and it is much improved in its readability. I congratulate the authors on their hard work and also on their thoughtful responses to this reviewer's comments on the original manuscript. The new summary figure in the discussion section is also very helpful. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Effects of α2-adrenoceptor stimulation on luminal alkalinisation and net fluid flux in rat duodenum PONE-D-22-02793R2 Dear Dr. Dahlgren, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alexander G Obukhov, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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