Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 23, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-30699How much does it cost to implement the Baby-Friendly Hospital Initiative training step in the United States and Mexico?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Arslanian, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have made helpful suggestions as to how to strengthen the draft (below): please address these in the revised draft. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 24 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a really interesting article that explores an economic modeling approach for step 2 of the BFHI program. The authors had a very clear grasp of the existing literature and the need for this type of research and modeling. The authors also clearly understood the tensions that exist between public health interventions and implementation through scale up processes. I believe with some additional clarification this article will be one that is cited for years to come. Strengths: The introduction was very through and provided a strong foundation for the purpose and need for the study. The authors were very clear in the formulas and regression approaches that were undertaken in their methodological approach. I really appreciated the table of steps as it was very easy to read and to follow. The data sources that were used were very appropriate and were adequately described. The economic approach was sound and the assumptions were reasonable for the model. The process is repeatable and the findings are in line with existing evidence. The study expands our current capability to cost BFHI step 2 for policymakers. Weaknesses and Improvement Suggestions: Greater clarity is needed in several areas. They are: The methods section needs additional detail. It was unclear to me what cost year and method of inflation was used (e.g. consumer price index, medical cost index, general). It seemed like 2020 costs were used for US data while 2019 was used for Mexico for some costs and outcomes. The article would be improved if everything were standardized to the same year to the extent possible and if there was a appendix or supplemental table that more clearly described the year and standardization that occurred. The information is there I think, it is just not very clear. The values that were used for staff salary and the year that salary represents is not clear. The authors do state they used wage data from the US bureau of labor statistics for the occupations. However, I am not sure what year/quarter this data was from, what the value was, and whether it was national or region specific. Table 5 shows cost data but I'm not sure if this is total or per hour. It would be helpful to add a supplemental table that more explicitly defines the estimates. I would encourage the authors to present the information as hourly wage and total. This is especially true for the US model because 80% of the cost was driven by labor replacement. I would urge the authors to also consider using an wage premium of 1.25 in there sensitivity analyses of wage to account for the likelihood that agency personnel would be needed for staff replacement. This would yield a stronger estimate as well as a better understanding of the sensitivity to wage fluctuation. The sensitivity analyses are not well defined. The article would be stronger if the authors clarified what sensitivity modeling approach was used and how they varied cost/pricing. It would also help to know at what price points did the cost per birth and total change significantly (say 50% or 100% increase). Finally, as a minor weakness, the article does need to be proof read an additional time. There were several places in several sections where phrases or words were duplicated (e.g. the the). One additional read through for those minor errors would make the study clearer and stronger. Final Recommendation This article is timely and explores a topic that is needed to improve our understanding and economic support for BFHI. I recommend that the authors review the article one more time to address the weaknesses identified above. I think once addressed, the study will be a significantly cited paper and provide a valuable resource to the BFHI community. I support publication with major revision. Reviewer #2: This study is very important as training is a crucial part in the success of interventions. Given that BFHI has a crucial role in improving breastfeeding rate, providing the cost is essential for scale up, evaluation and/or advocacy purposes. I believe the costing method is pretty straight forward except for step 1 and 2 of the formula that I think might confuse readers. I have some clarification and comments that hopefully may improve the paper. Methods: 1. There is a type o in the definition of variables of formula (1), page 7 line 141, averarage should be average. 2. Regarding the RW definition, wouldn’t it be better if it is defined the productivity loss associated with the training. For me the term replacement wage is a bit misleading, as whether the training takes place or not, the salary related to the service provided by the staff on training will be paid (to the staff or his/her replacement). The cost, however, stems from the work that is not done by the staff on training although she/he still receive their regular salary. In my opinion, the RW formula actually captures this productivity loss cost. 3. Do the staff on training receive some kind of extra benefits/incentive/per diem for joining the training? This really depends on the local regulation but may result in a quite a sum and should be calculated if this exists in the respective countries. I see that this study excluded this cost as it assumes that the training takes place in the hospital. But, again, this really depends on the local regulations and may need to be stated in the limitation or discussion section. 4. Page 8 line 171-172: the authors stated that the number of hospital staff since 2014 would not likely be substantially different. I am not familiar with the US system, so I would ask how can the authors be sure of such condition? It would be helpful if authors could provide 1 or 2 references to support this. In addition, the authors could also project the current number using some kind of available growth parameters for relevant variables? 5. I found it a bit difficult in following step 1 and 2 where there were regressions performed. I may have missed this, but how do exactly the coefficients obtained from the regressions were used in the overall calculation? Please elaborate. Results 1. Page 19 line 303 – 304: I believe Step 2 here refers to the training, correct? Just for precaution, this may be misleading as readers may be confused between step 2 of the formula or step 2 as the training itself, even though there is already an explanation of step 2 of the BFHI (readers may have missed this). 2. I may have missed this, but were the costs between US and Mexico compared using PPP? Discussion 1. Page 24 Line 392: I am not sure it is the place of the study to state that BHFI training had poor cost-effectiveness in small hospitals with low obstetric care specialization. Please consider whether the discussion should be on lower cost efficiency instead, which relates with the following arguments in the paragraph. 2. Page 25 line 406 – 407: this is important, please add references to support the statement. 3. Page 26 line 431. I agree that the future studies on cost effectiveness should be conducted, but I’m not sure whether the paragraph should stary in that context. The paragraph discusses on the more efficient approach of the training, which directly relates with the study. The need for cost effectiveness studies would be better placed at the end of the paragraph. 4. Page 27, limitations: I think the authors skipped the third limitation? 5. Limitations should also consider the possibility of differences in local characteristics which cannot be fully captured by the current method. This is actually the strength and weakness of micro costing which the authors mentioned in the background. However, it is also the weakness of the current method which can be used more generally, but may have missed local context variations. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors dud a fantastic job revising the manuscript and addressing all comments. I believe this manuscript is ready and should be accepted for publication. I do have one very minor phrase addition for final publication that would be helpful though is not mandatory - page 27 line 262 after Consumer Price Index add for all goods and services. This clarifies that the authors did not use medical inflation of the CPI which is often much higher and saves the reader from having to check the reference to verify which inflation calculator was used. Thank you to authors for this excellent work. Reviewer #2: Authors have addressed all of my comments thoroughly. I have no further suggestion and I believe it is now publishable. ********** 7. 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