Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 2, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-21582Severity Predictors of COVID-19 in SARS-CoV-2 Variant, Delta and Omicron Period; Single Center StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ogawa, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 06 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This article overcame the limitations of the clinical real world, finally collected 141 patients to explore the predictors of COVID-19 severity caused by SARS-CoV-2 variants. Research focused on the specific time from the onset of COVID-19 to aggravation, creatively followed with interest of 4 days of attention from onset to hospitalization of the patients, and suggested appropriate medical management within this time, which might provide reference for clinicians and future diagnosis and treatment. In this paper, the characteristics and data of 141 enrolled patients were analyzed statistically, which provided support for the above conclusions. However, there are still some problems, which might be troubled the support. 1.Table 5 We can see that the four indicators have statistical significance. We know that you must have done the ROC curve analysis for the other three indicators, and in order to highlight the key points. The problem is that it seems that only four positive indicators are selected and the findings are highlighted. After all, the OR value of Smoking is the largest among the four indicators, and the p value of LDH is the largest among the four indicators. Why the period is the final target ? And it is shown as a unique figure. Looking at the above question from another view, it is suggested in Table 3 that Gender, Dyspnea, Height and other indicators showed significant differences. In addition, Figure 2 of reference 12 provides a good data display of the ROC curve analysis. 2.Table 5 From the results in Table 5, which is the most important argument supporting the conclusion, there seems to be no separate statistics for Delta and Omicron, but regression analysis for disease severity. It is not difficult to understand the painstaking efforts of clinical observation to divide the virus variants into two time periods, however, it raises a new question that are all 89 enrolled patients diagnosed with delta typing in the delta time period, and all 52 omicron? This prompts us to pay attention to the contents in supplementary Table 1. It seems that only part of contents in supplementary Table 2 is involved in supplementary Table 1. The data of clinical observation, treatment and laboratory diagnosis are missing or selectively deleted. This part of data can be used as a reference for readers to understand the comparison between Delta and Omicron period. It is suggested to supplement this part of data. And the supplementary Tables 1 and 2 might be displayed together. After all, supplementary Table 2 is a stratification reanalysis of the data in supplementary Table 1, according to disease severity. Further more, as discussed in the article Line 189-192, the impact of mutations may be huge, so why not analyze and display the existing data? Line144-145, what are the factors between the two periods? 3.Table 2 The same data missing display occurred in Table 2. Compared with Table 3, it can be seen that there is a lack of baseline data of laboratory diagnosis and the length of hospitalization which is the most relevant data to the focus of the paper. It is suggested that Table 2 and Table 3 can be combined. Although it could be understandable that Table 2 needs to be more concise, please refer to the data display mode of Table 1 in reference 14, which may provide more information. After all, the data in Table 3 is also the continuation of the stratification reanalysis of the data in Table 2. The above three questions are the main questions of the manuscript and the places that need to be analyzed. Next questions 4-15, there are some specific details that need to pay attention, but no longer affect the logic of the full text. 4. Numerical standard of SpO2 There are three numerical value of 93% in Line 45, 94% in Line 46 and 92% in Table 1. In particular, the first two values may be confusing to readers, because they are very close. 5.Median age of 141 patients 59.6 in Line 95, meanwhile 58 in Table 2. 6.Range of age of moderate group 18-83 in Table 3, meanwhile 19-93 in Line 112. 7.Cases of vaccination According to supplementary Table 2, the two p values should be 0.165 and 0.595, respectively, with the latter one missing. 47 and 39 in Table 3 seem to represent the number of patients without immunization, which should be 44 and 11, respectively. Can these data support the conclusion in Line 105-106? 8.Cases of comorbidities 23 in 50 (46%) of patients in severe group have hypertension, although no significant discussion in Line 125. 9.Table 4 Baricitinib and casirivimab have no significance, while tocilizumab and molnupiravir include the case where the admitted patient is 0. However, discussion in Line 139 says each treatment. 10.Line 167 We did not focus, however, a whole section from Line 168 to 192 was discussed. 11.Line 196 There were no significances except obesity, however, renal disease and continuous hemodialysis were in Table 3, although it explained in the following paragraph. And additional references are required in Line 201 to help readers understanding, instead of listing them in Line 195. 12.Line 212 The negative data conclusion is not shown in the chart. This is not a problem. The key point is part of the data of the full text seems to consider displaying in a scatter chart instead of a full table, as Figure 1 in reference 23. In addition, Figure 1 in reference 15 and Figure 2 in reference 23 are also another good way to display data of correlation analysis. 13.Line 247 Previous studies of supplementary Table 1 in correction version of reference 10 compared time from onset of symptom to test of two groups, so do Table 1 in reference 14, Table 1 in reference 19, and Table 1 in reference 20. 14.Line 251-253 Is the ultimate reason, that the treatment plan of the one unfortunate patient in the moderate group in Table 3, just violates this way mentioned here? 15.P value For the p value in the full text, especially in the table, please uniformly keep the digits after the decimal point, and it is better to mark the p value of statistical significance with an asterisk or other common symbols. Reviewer #2: In this study, a total of 141 patients were enrolled and divided into two groups according to disease severity to analyze the characteristics, clinical features, and outcomes of COVID-19 caused by the delta and omicron variants of SARS-CoV-2. The article has unique significance. I appreciate the work, however if the pulmonary CT of cases can be supplemented, the article will be more complete and full. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Severity Predictors of COVID-19 in SARS-CoV-2 Variant, Delta and Omicron Period; Single Center Study PONE-D-22-21582R1 Dear Dr. Ogawa, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The revise manuscript explores the predictors of COVID-19 severity caused by SARS-CoV-2 variants in 141 enrolled patients, and focused on the specific time from the onset of COVID-19 to hospitalization, which might provide reference for clinicians and future diagnosis and treatment. The authors can be able to review opinions one by one and make modifications or explanations. I appreciate the research in this article and recommend. But I must also point out that, compared with Table 3, the data in Table 2 only includes data from sex to comorbidities in list column, missing from laboratory data to outcome. Similar situations occur in Supplementary Table 1, compared with Supplementary Table 2. However, the method of presentation of the data does not affect the current logic of the paper. I also perceive the author's explanation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Although this paper is a retrospective, single-center study, the data provided are relatively detailed and the statistical methods are appropriate, which can support the conclusions drawn by the study. I personally think this paper can be published. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Aimei Liu ********** |
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PONE-D-22-21582R1 Severity Predictors of COVID-19 in SARS-CoV-2 Variant, Delta and Omicron Period; Single Center Study Dear Dr. Ogawa: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Benjamin M. Liu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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