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PONE-D-22-06920Raw Material Choices and Technical Practices as Indices of Cultural Change: Characterizing Obsidian Consumption At ‘Mycenaean’ Quartier Nu, Malia (Crete)PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Carter, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 04 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The theoretical and methodological positioning is clearly presented. It is regrettable that, concerning the notion of the lithic technology ‘chaîne opératoire’, the references do not refer to one of the founding publications such as Tixier et alii 1980, Préhistoire de la pierre taillée 1. Similarly, if the approach implemented does concern technology, sourcing and typology, the use of the term 'functional' is abusive here, since no functional study in the proper sense of the term (use-wear analyses) seems to have been carried out. Note that the illustration in figure 5 has already been published in exactly the same way in Carter 2004a: fig. 21.6. The historical and archaeological context, local, regional and supra-regional, as well as the problematic and the objectives are precise and complete. Some repetitions from one part to another could be removed, i.e. at the beginning of the section Charting… concerning aims, type of study and questions in debate. Despite a rather weak corpus, the exploitation of the results seems convincing, but the lack of availability of all the data tables (6 tables) makes it impossible to be sure. In general, the conclusions drawn from the results seem well argued. It would have been interesting to enrich synchronic comparisons of material choices and production techniques with assemblages from 'normal' contemporary sites; this would have supported hypotheses of privileged access to obsidian from Melos, redistribution of obsidian products, and skilled-pressure blade makers as part of political capital involved in access to elite status. In order to improve the paper some modifications and corrections are required: - fig. 4: add the north and a scale, indicate the main areas described in the text (court, kitchen, wings) - fig. 8: complete the lithic drawings with the drawing of the platform and the profile, the preparation of the removal, and the technical conventional symbols (direction of blank knapping, place of the cross-section, etc.). In their current form, the drawings do not support the technological analysis. It could be beneficial to complete them with other pieces of strong technical information, such as cores, whole blades, crested blades, even if they have not been the subject of a NAA. - Delete references listed in the bibliography but not in the text: Carter et al 2012; D’Annibale 2013; Driessen 1994; Farnoux 1997; Georgiadis 2008; Hood 1990; Karantzali 2016; Kardulias 1992 - Add references cited in the text but not included in the bibliography: Barth 1969; Carter 2007; Jones 2007; Roddick & Stahl 2016; Shennan 1984 - Correct references in the text that are different from the bibliography: Broodbak & Kiriatzi 2007 or 2008?; Carter 2004: a or b ?; Driessen & Farnoux 1994 a or b?; Kiriatzi & Knappett 2016 or Knappett & Kiriatzi 2016?; MacGillivray 2001 or 2000? Reviewer #2: Overall, this is a fine detailed study. At first, I wondered why it was based only on 36 artifacts, but saw later that those from Quartier Nu were being compared with 60 from Quartier Mu. The incorporation of characterization with sourcing and the overall chaine operatoire are important. And while these were not randomly selected from the total obsidian assemblage, it is clear that Dhemenegaki is a very low percentage. One item that is inconsistent is the number of pieces of obsidian: on p. 14, it first says "...1153 pieces" but then at bottom of p. 15 it has 125/1276. Also on p. 14, there was a "sample of 168 pieces" - how were they selected in that study? When was Melos occupied, potentially with local production of cores to Crete and mainland Greece? Or was it entirely raw nodules that were quickly acquired and brought "home" to Crete (as suggested on p. 23). Very significant is the difference in use-wear between Crete and the mainland in obsidian tool types (denticulates, arrowheads). Since wheat harvesting was important in both places, could this be due to the regular availability of chert on the mainland? With 98% of the lithics at Quartier Nu of obsidian, no surprise that it was used for all lithic tasks. Minor corrections: p. 4, line 1: the plural of obsidian is obsidian p. 4, 3rd to last line: add period to "et al" p. 5, line 3: change "site" to "sites" p. 5, line 5: change "contribute" to "contributes" p. 7, line 3: add space so it reads "LM 1B p. 7, line 9: add period to "et al" p. 8, line 8: add "of" so that it reads "Sometime around the end of the..." p. 8, 1st line of 3rd paragraph: delete "by" p. 9, line 1: add space so it reads "LM IIIB" p. 11, line 12: add periods so it reads "Orange et al., 2017" p. 17, 3rd line last paragraph: remove apostrophe so it reads "1970s" p. 18, line 5: make lowercase "hydrofluoric" p. 18, line 6: add space so that it reads "~100 mg" p. 18, 3rd line from bottom: change to "obsidian" (no s at end) p. 23, line 12: is it necessary to have "LM" three times? Couldn't it be "LM IIIA:2 - IIIB:1 and IIIB:2"? p. 24, lines 1 and 2: add space before "cm" so that it reads "1.81 cm" and "1.23 cm" p. 24, 6th to last line: add space so it reads "11.7 cm" p. 26, line 13: add "in" and a space so it reads "..also known in LM 1A deposits..." p. 27, line 5: remove second "LM" so it reads "...from LM 1 - III..." p. 28, line 10: add space so it reads"...the 4-5 cm range..." p. 31, line 3: remove comma after "mainlanders" p 32, end of 1st paragraph: change "here" to "there" ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: all remarks and comments have been taken into account. The authors have thus either modified the text according to the recommendations made, or responded appropriately to the remarks. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all of my previous requests. Just one minor issue: In Table 5, should have consistent number of decimal places (one for all?), at least by column. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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