Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-07760The impacts of hydropower on freshwater macroinvertebrate richness: A global meta-analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr.Trottier Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we think that it has merit but but it requires a minor revision. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In particular, please give additional rationale why you focused specifically on richness, instead of biodiversity and community assemblage. Also explain and justify your rationale for using benthic grabs instead of nets. There is a discrepancy in the number of included papers (24) and the 17 studies from which you collected metrics. Please see the reviewer's comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by 1 August 2022. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review of Trottier et al. The authors of this manuscript, “The impacts of hydropower on freshwater macroinvertebrate richness: a global meta-analysis” assess the impacts of hydropower dams on macroinvertebrate richness. They conduct a meta-analysis of the literature, and attempt to account for several potential moderators, including the biome the studies occurred in; whether the study sites occurred upstream (within the reservoir) or downstream of the dam; the study design; the sampling season; and the type of sampling gear used. Using a random and mixed effect modelling approach, the authors conclude that hydropower does significantly impact macroinvertebrate richess, but they observed a large range of effect sizes that were not accounted for by the included moderators, and suggest including local habitat variables in future studies would be helpful in understanding the response of macroinvertebrate richness to hydropower impacts. Overall, I thought the meta-analysis was well laid out and clear (following the PRISMA approach), however, there were a few areas of the manuscript that were confusing and require clarification. The authors focus their meta-analysis specifically on macroinvertebrate richness. In their introduction, they mention three aspects of biodiversity: richness, community assemblage and functional diversity. It might be helpful to provide some additional rationale as to why the decision to focus specifically on richness. Is richness more easily quantifiable and extractable for a metaanalyses? While functional diversity measures are likely more limited in the literature, community composition data is frequently assessed, and might also be insightful in looking at hydropower impacts. This might be beyond the scope of this paper, but perhaps some additional rationale to focusing on richness may be helpful. The authors included sampling gear as a proxy for habitat stratum (i.e. benthic grabs vs nets). This approach might need a caveat, as many biomonitoring protocols (including the EPA in the US) use nets for multiple-habitat assessments, whereas grabs are primarily used in deeper reservoir studies (upstream). The authors included a comprehensive literature search using the Web of Science core collection, and provide the terms used. In the research strategy (line 180; Figure1), the authors state that they reduced the number of included papers to 24, but in the data collection section (Line 192) mention collecting metrics from 17 studies. There does not seem to be any mention on how the number of studies was reduced from 24 (Table S2 does list 24 studies). The seasonal sampling moderator (spring/summer/fall/winter) seems very coarse. For either upstream draw down or downstream modifications in stream flow, were samples collected immediately after alterations or later in the season? As some macroinvertebrates are relatively mobile, they could recolonize shortly after short-term water regulation effects. In the data collection/extraction section, it might be helpful to include information on whether multiple authors were involved in abstracting the data, or if this was done by a single analyst. For samples from reservoirs, it might be useful to know whether samples were collected in the center of the lake or in the littoral regions. The authors state (Line 415) they were expecting a large effect of water level fluctuations. If these were samples collected from the profundal region in the center of the lake, water level drawdown might not have a large impact. Minor edits: Line 373: The authors state “despite the documented effects on macroinvertebrate richness..” while these are discussed briefly elsewhere in the manuscript, It would be helpful to include some citations with this statement. Line 399: states that the authors did not have a statistical supporting trend for both boreal and tropical, but previously (Lines 319-321), they state they did make statistically valid inferences for both temperate and tropical biomes (just not for boreal). Overall, I thought the meta-analysis was interesting, Perhaps it might be worth mentioning that in the discussing/conclusion that additional analyses of community composition and functional diversity would also be an important future direction in assessing the impacts of hydropower on macroinvertebrate communities. As mentioned by the authors in their introduction, taxon richness is only one aspect of biodiversity. Reviewer #2: This paper describes a meta-analysis of the literature asking whether hydropower, dams, and reservoirs affect macroinvertebrate species richness. The authors found that a preponderance of studies found negative effects on species richness. However, there was a range of effect sizes in their dataset and despite having a number of likely moderators that might explain variation between studies, the authors found that these moderators were not effective in explaining effect size variation. Generally this study was well conceived and completed. I liked the detailed description of how the meta-analysis was done and that they used the PRISMA methodology for conducing a metaanalysis. One thing I’d like to see clarified is what is being asked of the moderators. Are you asking if the moderators impact species richness, or if the moderators explain heterogeneity in the effect sizes? I think it is the latter, but this could be made more clear. I suppose that’s why you call them moderators and not covariates? Although I felt there was a lack of detail explaining this aspect of the study, there are at times places where it felt like there was too much detail (see specific comments below). In addition, a careful screening of the paper would be useful to address various grammatical mistakes – I’ve highlighted some below – which will make the paper more easily assessable to the reader. Minor comments: Line 29 and throughout (e.g., 258, 264, 267, 268): mixed effects models are mixed because they contain fixed and random effects. It is therefore redundant to say “random and mixed effect model”. Line 32: change “statistical way” to “statistically significant way”. Line 52: add comma before “but” Line 69: between <what> and “natural-like” flows? Line 71: delete “allow to” Line 81: Why would this latitudinal effect on species richness affect effect sizes? Perhaps more likely to see effects in tropics than higher latitudes because a floor effect makes it difficult to detect change in richness? In any case, it would help the reader to explain the reasoning rather than leaving the reader to connect the dots. Lines 88-97: Most of these study designs are not in your dataset – or even likely as you point out. What isn’t mentioned here are the two study designs you did use in your models. Lines 121-138: A little overly wordy – does meta-analysis really need this much defense as a method for the audience of PLoS One? Line 154: Why this date (1989)? Line 168: Why was sorting required? If you went through every result, then sorting is irrelevant. Line 170: Change “studies” to “study” Line 192: Everywhere else in the manuscript you say “24” studies. Lines 241-243: This belongs in the next section, not here. Lines 291-292: You call a “P = 0.07” “marginally significant” below. Lines 298-299: How is the “true heterogeneity” compared to the “methodological variability” assessed? Is this left-over variance not explained by your model? Line 300: Change “will be” to “was”. Lines 302-304: You mean hydropower, dams, and reservoirs DID have a statistically significant effect on macroinvertebrate richness, right? Line 322: Change “little” to “few”. Line 326: add “for all levels” after “df” Lines 353-354: Sentence begins in a way redundant with previous sentence. Change “Hydropower impacts macroinvertebrates, their richness…” to “Macroinvertebrate richness…” Line 358: Change “from which” to “with” Lines 364-365: Why are you now calling this a marginal effect? Lines 367-368: Delete “and thus potentially strengthen the statistical significance of the result”. Awkward phrasing that doesn’t seem necessary. Line 407: Change “been causing” to “caused”. Lines 426-427: Delete “(none could be included in this case)”. Redundant.</what> ********** 6. 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The impacts of hydropower on freshwater macroinvertebrate richness: A global meta-analysis PONE-D-22-07760R1 Dear Dr. Trottier We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jay Richard Stauffer, Jr. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I have made a few minor suggestions in the attached manuscript. The paper is now accepted for publication Reviewers' comments:
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PONE-D-22-07760R1 The impacts of hydropower on freshwater macroinvertebrate richness: A global meta-analysis Dear Dr. Trottier: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jay Richard Stauffer, Jr. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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