Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-05299Association between the risk of malnutrition and functional capacity in patients with peripheral arterial disease: A cross-sectional studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cucato, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please have a professional editing service to edit your manuscript before the resubmission of your manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 21 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. The authors are commended for their work. 2. I still continue to see the term "intermittent claudication" used in some (but not all) vascular publications. The nomenclature using the term "intermittent" seems at least to this reviewer, to be outdated. The ACC/AHA guidelines do not refer to it in this way and we don't typically refer to angina as "intermittent angina" so consider just referring to the symptom as "claudication." 3. Abstract, line 40: Revise the sentence "We considered as significant p<0.05" as it is awkward as written. 4. Abstract, line 42: Do the authors mean distance achieved during the six minute walk test, claudication onset time? Please clarify absolute and relative as well, typically six minute walk test distance is a key performance outcome often reported. 5. Abstract, line 43: Lower SPPB total score? 6. Risk of malnutrition and peripheral arterial disease are already in the title so consider different keywords. 7. Introduction, line 62: Minor but change "lower limbs strengths" to "lower limb strength". 8. Were other comorbidities exclusionary? For example, patients with heart failure, previous cardiac and/or peripheral revascularization, those taking medications to treat PAD (cilostazol, etc) were excluded? These and other comorbidities could have had an impact on functional testing so please clarify or perform analyses controlling for these variables. 9. For the six minute walk test, why were patients asked to complete it at their usual pace, rather than as fast as they could? 10. Discussion, lines 225-226: Please revise "worst perfusion". 11. Table 1: Minor, but there is a typo (Phycological). 12. I appreciate Table 2 and the information it provides, but I think it would be helpful for readership to provide a figure(s) to graphically display some of the data if possible. 13. The paper would benefit from additional copy editing for the English language. Reviewer #2: The manuscript studies the association between the risk of malnutrition and functional capacity in patients with peripheral arterial disease and claudication. The disease process and associated co-morbidities can lead to poor quality diet and low levels of functional capacity sometimes complete immobility, with resultant energy, protein, and micronutrient deficiencies. This research attempts to emphasize that a proper diet maybe improve the functional capacity of patients with peripheral arterial disease and claudication, which implies dietetic care plays a vital role in the management of PAD. Before I can recommend it for publication, the following questions and comments should be addressed. 1)An review published in 2020 year demonstrated that most patients with PAD are overweight or obese, 3/4 under sub-optimal nutritional status and high-fat mass, lower vitamins, and minerals. I suggest the authors explain the definition of malnutrition in people with PAD clearly. 2)I notice that the SPPB is consist of a series test. I suggest the authors explain it in the abstract section briefly. Now, the methods part and the results part are not a one-to-one correspondence. 3)The authors only concluded the association between the risk of malnutrition and objective measurements of functional capacity in patients with peripheral arterial disease and claudication. How about the association between the risk of malnutrition and subjective measurements of functional capacity in patients with peripheral arterial disease and claudication? 4)For the relationship between functional capacity and PAD, I suggest the authors give an explicit explanation. 5)For the relationship between nutritional status and PAD, I suggest the authors give an explicit explanation. 6)For the applicability of MNA-SF in brazil’s PAD, I suggest the authors give an explicit explanation. 7)In lines 72-79, it is not clear why the authors want to invest the association between the risk of malnutrition and functional capacity in patients with peripheral arterial disease and claudication. I suggest the authors give an explicit explanation. 8)In lines 99-101, the inclusion criteria are inconsistent with the abstract section. How about the assessment of claudication? 9)In lines 202-206, the results section, it is not clear the association between the risk of malnutrition and subjective measurements of functional capacity (WIQ, and WELCH) in patients with peripheral arterial disease and claudication, and the balance with the risk of malnutrition. 10)In lines 225-228, it is not clear how nutritional deficiency aggravates the functional capacity in people with PAD and claudication. 11)In lines 244-246, there are some wrong descriptions. it is not clear whether functional capacity is due to nutritional deficiency in this study. 12)In addition, I suggest the authors improve the presentation by considering the following minor changes: Line 40, “per cent” -> “percent”, Line 73, the questionnaire used in references 13 and 14 should be MNA instead of MAN-SF. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-22-05299R1Association between the risk of malnutrition and functional capacity in patients with peripheral arterial disease: A cross-sectional studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cucato, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 18 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Thanks for addressing my comments. 2. Abstract line 45: Typo, change “analyzes” to “analyses.” 3. Introduction: PAD is understood to be referring to atherosclerotic plaque development in the lower limbs. Thus consider changing the opening sentence to “…which results in partial or total obstruction in the arteries of the lower limbs.” and delete “…especially in the lower extremities.” 4. Please include a hypothesis at the end of the Introduction section. 5. Page 5, line 10: “were” is repeated please delete. 6. Page 5 and 6, lines 130-131: Delete the level of accuracy of height and weight measurements. It is awkward as written so if you do want to keep it please revise to clarify. 7. Page 6 lines 141-142: Bad grammar in the sentence starting with “The data are…” Please revise. 8. Page 6 line 151: Why is there a bracket at the end of the sentence ending in “…stand test.”? 9. Page 7 line157: I thought both gender were included so please change the term “his” to include both. Also in the same sentence the statement “…and the time was timed.” is awkward. Did the authors mean and the total time was recorded? 10. “His” seems to continue to be used which needs to be changed. 11. Line 219: missing a period. 12. It would be helpful for the raw/continuous values of the outcomes were reported (e.g., 6MWT, SPPB, WIQ scores, etc). Reviewer #2: Comments to the Authors The authors are commended for their work. For comments 4-6, I suggest the authors make some supplements in the introduction section. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Association between the risk of malnutrition and functional capacity in patients with peripheral arterial disease: A cross-sectional study PONE-D-22-05299R2 Dear Dr. Cucato, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yih-Kuen Jan, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No **********
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PONE-D-22-05299R2 Association between the risk of malnutrition and functional capacity in patients with peripheral arterial disease: A cross-sectional study Dear Dr. Cucato: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Yih-Kuen Jan Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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