Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 13, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-32703COVID-19 pandemic and food security in different contexts: a systematic review protocolPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Mohammadi-Nasabadi , Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 30 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Doustmohammadian et al. proposed a protocol for a systematic review on the impact of COVID-19 pandemic on food security in different contexts. They described the importance of this review, thoroughly. Also, their search strategy seems reasonable for me. Although I have some comments to address. 1. Section 2.2.1: Please state what are the inclusion criteria. 2. In the discussion section, please elaborate on specific conditions such as eating disorders. Please refer to the meta-analysis by Haghshomar et al. to discuss this part. (https://jeatdisord.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s40337-022-00550-9) 3. Please reconsider using RevMan, as it is not the most professional software for conducting meta-analysis. 4. Please consider utilizing JBI Critical Appraisal Checklist instead of NOS, to cover all kind of the included studies. Reviewer #2: Recommendation Major Revision Comments to Author Ms. Ref. No.: PONE-D-21-32703 Title: COVID-19 pandemic and food security in different contexts: a systematic review protocol Overview The article “COVID-19 pandemic and food security in different contexts: a systematic review protocol” is a systematic review protocol article. The objective of this protocol is to study the covid impact on different aspects of food insecurity, including availability, accessibility, consumption, and stability. Overall, the article needs to be more specific, needs search syntax revision and needs writing improvement. Comments • The outcomes of the study are not clear enough. It is not clear how each indicator of food security is defined. If this is defined based on the outcomes provided in table 1, why authors didn’t use those outcomes in their search syntax? For example, one of the outcomes of the availability is “Adequacy of protein supply”; however, there are no keywords about it in the search syntax. • In addition, the outcomes presented in table 1 are different from the reference they cited. For example, in the FAO report, the “average protein supply” was mentioned as an indicator of food security. However, here, the “Adequacy of protein supply” is mentioned, which has a different meaning. • The search syntax needs significant improvement. 1. Using COVID in the filter of search is not comparable to using covid-related words in the search syntax. Your search will be inaccurate if you don’t use COVID in your search syntax. This is because filtering papers to COVID doesn’t necessarily mean the retrieved papers are related to the impact of covid on food security. In addition, filters are based on MeSH terms, and it takes time for each paper to get MeSH. Thus, the recently published papers will not be shown up in your search results. 2. It is not clear how the authors selected the keywords. 3. Parenthesis and quotation marks are needed for many of the terms. For example, instead of searching grocery store[tiab], it is better to search “grocery store”[tiab] or (grocery[tiab] AND store*[tiab]). • The population of the study should be more specific. The disadvantaged group needs to be identified clearly. With the current format, this protocol paper is not suitable for publication. Reviewer #3: COVID-19 pandemic and food security in different contexts: a systematic review protocol The authors of this study protocol developed a search strategy to assess the impact of COVID-19 pandemic on food security. The conceptualization of the systematic review is robust and the results would benefit policy makers on the prevention food insecurity during emerging diseases. Although the manuscript is designed and drafted well, some comments need to be considered prior to the decision on this submission. Title: 1. From the context of the manuscript this study includes meta-analysis as well, please consider mentioning it in the title if this is correct. Introduction: 2. Although the effect of food insecurity caused by pandemic could manifest itself with delay, but we have entered the endemic phase of COVID-19. Therefore, it is suggested that the authors revise the aim of the study accordingly. The results could be of value for policy making for other epidemics. 3. Line 110-111. The target population for this study is “At-risk population”. However, in lines 135-137 of the method the population of the study is “all groups”. Please revise line 111. Method: 4. Line 136: Please clarify the scope of the study here. Throughout the text different words such as individual, household, country, regional and global are mentioned. Also, If the study is on the regional level please mention what is categorization source (e.g. World Bank, WHO, …) 5. Line 136: It is suggested that “disadvantaged groups” to be defined here and have their own section in the search strategy table as well. 6. Line 174: Some of the reference website provided for grey literature are not accessible (e.g. https://www.nyam.org/library/online-resources/grey-literature-report/). They could also be presented at the Reference section and not at the main body of the manuscript. Discussion: 7. Assuming there are some limitations to the study, the authors could mention them Search strategy 8. The search terms in the table 2 of the appendix seems to be chosen carefully. However, based on the indicators that were presented at Table 1 there are four categories of the food securities that lack of each has several outcomes. It seems that the results for some outcomes could not be extracted from the search results with the current search strategy (e.g. the utilization category; wasting, stunting, anemia and underweight outcomes) Minor comments: 1. There were some typos across the manuscript (e.g. line: 211, 215, 223, or in the appendix, search strategy table, No.8, word oradequate) Appendix: 1. The table of search terms is the first one in the appendix, please renumber the table to Table 1. Reviewer #4: 1. in the method section, In order to detect and adjust for publication bias, the trim-and-fill method can be used. To lower the impact of publication bias produced by the remaining studies that cause a funnel plot's asymmetry on overall effect estimate. 2. In the introduction section, line 59-60, ""Increased micronutrient deficiency and decreased immunity level, increased overweight, obesity, and non-communicable diseases would also occur "" it may more apprehensible to be written in stratified format, reporting increased items and then decreased one. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: Seyedeh Melika Hashemi [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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COVID-19 pandemic and food security in different contexts: a systematic review protocol PONE-D-21-32703R1 Dear Dr. Mohammadi-Nasrabadi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thanks. The revised version is now suitable for publication. There are no more recommendations from me. Reviewer #3: The results of this study will be of interest for public health authorities working on food security area. The revised manuscript has addressed all comments and no further revision is needed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Rosa Haghshenas ********** |
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