Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 10, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-06507Proteomic analysis of Masson pine with high resistance to pine wood nematodesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 13 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present a proteomics study in two groups of Masson pine samples with contrasting response to PWN. The used biological material came from individuals selected and tested for 20 years regarding their resistance to PWN. Several putatively important proteins associated to resistance are identified and discussed. This is an important topic given the damaging potential of PWD on pine forests worldwide and the results presented are relevant for PWD research. However, several major issues should be taken into consideration by the authors to improve the manuscript. These include (1) a more detailed description of the biological materials used and sampling, (2) clarification of the PWD resistance evaluation procedures of the Masson pine clones, and a (3) more focused comparative discussion of the results with previously published work on PWD resistance in pines, as follows: (1) It is not clear why were 9 lines (what is the definition of a line?) selected, does this mean that each biological sample is a mixture of 3 individual trees? Are these 9 lines from the same or different families? Was the PWN inoculum prepared from several isolates? How were the symptoms evaluated? How long after inoculation was the sampling performed? (2) The results from the inoculation and the evaluation of resistance are not quantitatively described. If this has not been previously published (in which case a reference should be provided) further detail is needed. (3) the results from differentially expressed proteins identified should be discussed within the context of previously published results, either using similar comparative approaches, either proteomic or transcriptomic, within the same pine species between resistant and susceptible individuals, e.g. P. pinaster. Such discussion can help to clarify if resistance mechanisms may be similar or specific. In addition to these major concerns, additional comments are listed below: Abstract - Please rephrase “Most of the downregulated proteins seemed to take back seats prior to pathogen attacks” Introduction – the sentence “The endophytic and rhizospheric microbial community changes that are potentially caused by B. xylophilus infection of pines [9]” seems to be truncated Results and Discussion – Fig. 1. What is meant by field vaccination? I could not have access to the data by following the provided link. A supplementary table with detailed info about the proteins and their classification in GO terms (Fig 3) is missing. The authors claim they found 42 resistant genes that were upregulated in resistant P. massoniana compared to vulnerable clones. What do the authors mean by resistance genes? Did they use any available database such as Plant Resistance Genes database (Osuna-Cruz et al., 2017)? It is mentioned that “Though SA was not detected in resistant P. massoniana lines here, the highly expressed aspartic proteases suggest a stronger defense system.” Stronger that what? Please clarify. Please rephrase the sentence “Thus, tremendously enhanced peroxisomes would benefit P. massonina as an “evil” to fight B. xylophilus infestation and as a “good” to provide metabolites in a variety of physiological processes.” Reviewer #2: This manuscript reports on the analysis of proteomic changes in Pinus massoniana resistant and susceptible plants after inoculation with pinewood nematode, the causal agent of pine wilt disease. This manuscript is relevant to understanding better the mechanisms of P. massoniana resistance to this parasite and can be interesting for researchers working on pine wilt disease. However, the manuscript needs improvement before it can be accepted for publishing, especially in the discussion and conclusions. Throughout the manuscript it is stated that P. massoniana resistant plants “evolved” certain mechanisms of resistance. However, pinewood nematode was introduced recently (40 years ago) in China, giving no time for a long lived tree to evolve resistance to the disease. Instead, resistance is likely to occur due to natural standing variation, and has probably evolved though other selective pressures or genetic drift. Please remove the references to evolution throughout the manuscript. Introduction: Line 44: The first time Monochamus alternatus is mentioned there is no explanation why it is important for pine wilt disease, which is confusing. It should be mentioned before that it is the insect vector. Lines 72-75: Why give details about P. yunnanensis resistance when there is a paper about P. massoniana resistance? Should this not be the focus? Methods: In the Methods, more details should be given. Were there any controls inoculated with water? What is/are the sampling timepoint/s? What is the comparison made to obtained differential expression results? Resistant vs control? Resistant vs susceptible? When it says up- or downregulated, what is compared to what? If the comparison is between susceptible and resistant it would be clearer to talk about proteins more expressed in one or the other. Lines 101-103: This is not very clear. Were the samples pooled in groups of 3 for protein extraction? Needs to be rephrased. Line 107: Why use only the phloem? Lines 163-165: This sentence needs more details. “multiple repetitions of each sample” – How many repetitions? And what part of the protocol was repeated?; “average values between the two samples” – What two samples?; “differential expression of the control group” – What control group? Lines 165-171: What is the program and version used for the statistical analysis? Results and discussion: Discussion is confusing in the way it is presented. Why not compare the proteomics results with transcriptomics available for several species after pinewood nematode inoculation, and specifically for P. massoniana resistant varieties (Liu et al. 2017, Scientific Reports)? Lines 175-179: There should be some results presented here about the inoculation assays, like percentage of plants that are resistant, the differences between families, the disease progression during the time of the experiments, etc. Has this part of the work never been published before? If it was, please provide reference(s). Fig. 1: “vaccination”? Lines 215-216: There is no table or image representing expression levels of the proteins. I suggest it is added, even if it is as supplemental material. Fig. 3: The font is too small, it is difficult to read. (C) What is log2 fold enrichment? Is it a GO enrichment analysis? please make the legend of the image more clear Lines 238-239: What are resistant genes? Do you mean candidate genes for resistance? Lines 252-254: This sentence is not clear. Is it a comparison with results obtained elsewhere? Lines 254-258: I do not see the connection of resistance genes/receptors to alternative splicing? The discussion about the possible role of alternative splicing in resistance is also not clear. Lines 275-276: It is not clear what you want to say here. Lines 292-294: This is not supported by what was observed in Liu et al. (2017, Scientific Reports), in which values of H2O2 were similar between resistant and susceptible P. massoniana before pinewood nematode inoculation. Lines 307-310: Susceptibility to what? Lines 316-319: This is the opposite of what was found in some transcriptomics papers of pine response to pinewood nematode. This difference should be discussed. Lines 319-326: I do not understand this part of the discussion and how it relates to your results. Conclusions: The text is confusing and it seems like the continuation of the discussion, instead of conclusions. ********** 6. 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Proteomic analysis of Masson pine with high resistance to pine wood nematodes PONE-D-22-06507R1 Dear Dr. Xu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jon M. Jacobs, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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