Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 6, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-32152Classifying ball trajectories in invasion sports using Dynamic Time Warping: a basketball case studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Although the manuscript was generally well received by the reviewers, its contributions should be made more explicit and the methodology should be better justified and explained. Please ensure that your decision is justified on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria and not, for example, on novelty or perceived impact. For Lab, Study and Registered Report Protocols: These article types are not expected to include results but may include pilot data. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 24 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review on Manuscript: “Classifying ball trajectories in invasion sports using Dynamic Time Warping: a basketball case study” NOTE: Please see the PDF file, I included some links and recommendation for further study. In this manuscript, the authors presented a method to compare and to classify ball trajectories based on Dynamic Time Warping (DTW). The paper is well-written with some arguments on how DTW solved problem of measuring distance between two trajectories that were misaligned in time. The authors argued that DTW is useful for feature alignment in space and time. The idea of this research is interesting, however I am not really convinced by how the authors explained the details of the proposed method and how the proposed method contributes in the field of time series analysis based on machine learning. Several comments regarding this paper: 1. What is the main contribution of this paper? The authors should explain contribution of the manuscript in the relevant field. In fact, Dynamic Time Warping (DTW) and K-Means clustering have been used widely in time series analysis across different research fields. In terms of time series analysis, DTW and K-Means clustering are not new methods. 2. Dynamic Time Warping is good for similarity measure between two time series data. However, this algorithm has a time and space complexity of O(Sn1, Sn2) where Sn1 and Sn2 are the lengths of the respective time series sequences between which DTW distance is to be calculated (see line 84-89). On the other hand, there are several other implementations of DTW that are faster in implementation, such as PrunedDTW , SparseDTW , FastDTW , and MultiscaleDTW . Why did the authors choose original DTW to be used in this research instead of considering other faster version of DTW? 3. What is the size of the local cost Matrix M? 4. In addition to the chosen DTW method, the authors also choose K-Means clustering by justifying that K-Means is simple and efficient (line 159). However, K-Means clustering is well-known as a “lazy classifier” and it takes more computational time in classification process. Simplicity in implementation does not mean that this algorithm is appropriate to solve the problem. More justification is needed and please compare the proposed classification method with other classification method. 5. In line 143-144, the authors wrote: “parameters such as boundary condition, continuity condition, monotonic condition and warping window condition were left the same during the analysis.” More detailed explanation on these parameters are needed to make this research reproducible. 6. In this research, the authors used a dataset of 72 women’s international basketball games ranging from the 2014 FIB world Championship to the 2016 Rio Olympic Games. Was there any specific justification in choosing this dataset? In fact, there are other datasets available in the internet, such as a dataset provided by Rajiv Shah. 7. More detailed discussions are needed, for instance: a. How does this research contribute in the field of machine learning, especially compared with previous works of time series analysis in sports data? Comparison with previous works is needed to see that the proposed method is better than current state-of-the-arts in the field. b. What are limitations of this research? What is the trade-off of implementing DTW and K-Means clustering? *** EOF *** Reviewer #2: I liked how this paper took a slightly different data science approach and applied it to get some useful sports analytic insights. It's hard for me to believe that this is the first application of DTW to sports trajectories. Also, citing some other direct work like this would be good: http://www.lukebornn.com/papers/miller_ssac_2017.pdf So just ensuring that previous related work is acknowledged would be valuable. But even if DTW has been done before for trajectories, this paper did focus on womens basketball games. I appreciate the authors taking time to visualize DTW and help everyone understand how the technique works. I like the detailed background and the application to the games. I could follow how DTW work and the resulting insights. Really great job sharing lots of detail. For the plays, could you explain why you focused on the full court plays? I have seen previous work that would just focus on trajectories after the ball passed half court. No need to change the analysis, just explaining your decision would be useful. I like that the paper doesn't try to extend itself too far, but is a solid piece of work on applying DTW to basketball. ********** 6. 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Classifying ball trajectories in invasion sports using Dynamic Time Warping: a basketball case study PONE-D-21-32152R1 Dear Dr. Wu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jean-Christophe Nebel, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed by authors. As for DTW parameters that were pre-coded in the DTW package, please clarify in the manuscript that those parameters were left as default. Reviewer #2: I found the revisions to the manuscript acceptable. I appreciate the authors diligence in incorporating these comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rajiv Shah ********** |
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PONE-D-21-32152R1 Classifying ball trajectories in invasion sports using Dynamic Time Warping: a basketball case study Dear Dr. Wu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Jean-Christophe Nebel Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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