Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-05042The Devil is not as Black as He is Painted? On the Positive Relationship Between Food Industry Conspiracy Beliefs and Conscious Food ChoicesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marchlewska, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 28 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. This paper is technically sound and consistant, approaching the research question with proper quantitative methods to demonstrate that food industry conspiracy belief is positively associated with consumers' conscious food choice. 2. The data analysis (Exploratory factor analysis and hierarchical regression using SPSS) is conducted properly and the procedure is well described. One recommendation is to refer to the communalities in the text, especially for study 2 which shows rather low (although still acceptable) average variance explained for food industry conspiracy beliefs and conscious food choices, to clarify whether all items are included in the construct. 3. The questionnaire, treatment and SPSS codes are available from the link on page 8. Full question items for general conspiracy beliefs is missing from the text and the shared data, and it would be better to be made available as well. 4. The quality of English is good enough. As an additional comment, the practical implication(manuscript p.28) is not very clear, and it can be more specific about how the results should be interpreted and utilized. One concern is, boosting the level of food industry conspiracy means increasing consumers' distrust in or hostile view toward food companies, which is not generally desirable. While the association deserves investigation, I suppose that food industry conspiracy itself is not a "tool" to raise consumers' consciousness about food. This point should be acknowledged if the authors consider the same. Reviewer #2: General comments: The authors present the results from two studies with Polish consumers on their conspiracy beliefs about the food industry and how this relates to their conscious food choices. It is an interesting study field because, as the idiom in the title suggests, conspiracy believers are usually associated with maladaptive behaviour. Through both studies the researchers found a positive link between food industry conspiracy beliefs and conscious food choices. Overall, the structure of the manuscript needs to be improved. Several of the specific comments below discuss some of the gaps or overlaps because of the structure. Subdividing study 1 and study 2 at the highest level creates repetition. More importantly, the fact that 2 constructs were measured in a different way in study 2 but still have the same name makes the interpretation of the results more difficult for the reader. The authors should consider a small change in the name of the variables. The change of measurement tools is not discussed in much detail. The reason behind this choice and the impact on the results should be addressed. The first issue with the design of the study lies within the construct ‘conscious food choices’ and how it is interpreted. Not much information is provided on how the long version was developed, however for the short version the authors refer to a number of papers on socially responsible consumption. The items used to measure conscious food choices all refer to ‘I will pay attention to …’, which measures how informed consumers are when making their food choices. I would like the authors to add a discussion on why they assume adaptive behaviour based on this construct. The second issue is the use of education and settlement size variables as dependent variables in the regression analysis. The authors do not mention any recoding of these variables so assuming they used the data as is, this is a wrong approach because these are not interval data. Specific comments: 100: Throughout the manuscript it seems the authors only consider the food conspiracy beliefs in relation to food safety issues. Considering the definition of food conspiracy beliefs on line 128, I believe the broader concept of food integrity could be used here, which includes food safety but also authenticity. Irregularities with food products’ integrity do not only apply to food safety issues but can be food fraud or mislabelling (f.e. organic or country of origin labelling). 111: The authors should include at least one example from Europe or Poland. 136: The last sentence of this paragraph is unclear 191: It would be interesting to discuss the order of the questions in the questionnaire. Were the conspiracy beliefs asked before the conscious food choices, and if so why did the researches choose this order and how could it have affected the results? 204: The authors report a reliability measure for 4 items of the scale ‘food conspiracy beliefs’. Later on in the manuscript it is mentioned that this scale was measured using 4 items in study 1 and 14 items in study 2. It is important to make this difference clear in the methods section. 244: The authors chose to discuss both studies separately and make a ‘Results and discussion’ section for each of the studies. There is actually not much discussion of the results in that section, and there is another section ‘General discussion’ later on. I would suggest to restructure and rename the sections of the manuscript to make it easier to navigate as a reader and avoid repetition. Overall for both study 1 and study 2 I would be interested in more discussion of the results. 260: Table 1 shows the correlation matrix, including education and settlement size as variables. Can you provide more details about how these were measured and how they could be considered continuous variables? 268: Significant relationship between age and education and conscious food choices are found. Is this in line with your expectations? 274: Please discuss the R squared value of the regression model 274: Unclear what you mean with term ‘basic prediction’ 291: general instead of generic 326: Explain in more detail how the items were designed. On line 298, the authors mention that the conceptual principles to develop the tools in study 1 still applied. This made me assume that the added items would follow the principles of line 193, being ‘Each item included three elements: an implied agent (1) secretly undertaking specific action (2) to obtain some type of gain (3). However, when reading the added items, this seems not to be the case. 348: In similar vein, explain how the nine items for the conscious food choices were developed. Overall, the use of the same construct names ‘food industry conspiracy beliefs’ and ‘conscious food choices’ throughout the paper, while measuring them differently is confusing. The authors should differentiate clearly. 370: Have the authors considered if they can accept participants that shop for groceries once a month or less as valid respondents for this study? 370: Was the data analysis carried out with the scale of the variable ‘frequency grocery shopping’ as such, or was this recoded to actual frequency? 381: The researches could elaborate more detailed about why they chose to use mediation analysis and how assumptions for mediation analysis were checked. 383: avoid the use of ‘basic variables’ 385: use ‘correlation’ instead of ‘link’, and discuss here that this was not significant in study 1. Could the difference be related to the new way of measuring conscious food choice? 388: since including shopping frequency, I suggest using the term socio-demographic instead of demographic 388: Later on in the results, a significant effect of the treatment (threat vs control) is found. I would expect an explanation why you discuss the difference in socio-demographics without differentiating between those treatment groups. As opposed to study 1, there is difference in conscious food choices between males and females in study 2. Would the difference results be due to different way of measuring conscious food choices or because this study included the experimental manipulation? 392: Age is positively correlated to food conspiracy beliefs but negatively to general conspiracy beliefs, this is an interesting finding. Discuss by comparing to previous studies. 405: avoid the term items but use variables 414: Authors should discuss and interpret R squared of the final model. 434: Please rephrase ‘a significant negative effect of gender’; specify that you entered gender as a dummy variable 445: In study 1, education was significant, but in study 2 it turned out not to be. This difference should be discussed. 477: This paragraph is generalizing the results too much. There were difference between the results of study 1 and study 2 and they are not sufficiently reported and discussed. 486: The authors always refer to the number of respondents that endorse food conspiracy beliefs, based on the results of study 1. In study 2 they used better measurement for this variable, so it seems contradictory that they don’t use the results from the better measurement to give the reader an indication of the food conspiracy beliefs of Polish consumers. The ‘threat’ group could have been influenced by the message, however the control group was not. It would also be interesting to report the difference in mean value of the food conspiracy beliefs for the 2 treatment groups. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-22-05042R1The Devil is not as Black as He is Painted? On the Positive Relationship Between Food Industry Conspiracy Beliefs and Conscious Food ChoicesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marchlewska, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 04 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Hans De Steur Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: Dear authors, Given the concerns of one reviewer regarding the statistical analysis, I recommended major revision in order to allow you enough time to address these crucial concerns. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Thank you to the authors for there extensive answer to my comments on the original manuscript. You have made additions and changes that have improved the manuscript. Most of the comments have clarified some of the issues I had with the paper. I would still hope you can further clarify why education and settlement sizee, used as covariates are treated as continuous variables. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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The Devil is not as Black as He is Painted? On the Positive Relationship Between Food Industry Conspiracy Beliefs and Conscious Food Choices PONE-D-22-05042R2 Dear Dr. Marchlewska, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hans De Steur Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing my concerns and taking the time to make the changes in the analysis. The final manuscript is an interesting view on conspiracy beliefs in Poland. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-05042R2 The devil is not as black as he is painted? On the positive relationship between food industry conspiracy beliefs and conscious food choices Dear Dr. Marchlewska: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Hans De Steur Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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