Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 17, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-01617Phenotypic characteristics of peripheral immune cells of Myalgic encephalomyelitis/chronic fatigue syndrome via Transmission Electron Microscopy: a pilot studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jahaniani Kenari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. We apologize for the delay in responding but we were beset with problems concerning reviewers and Journal administration. Because of the detailed and constructive comments offered by the expert reviewer, however, a thorough review of the manuscript has been provided. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The concerns voiced by the reviewer mainly involve text changes. However, the issue of patient sex in the study must be addressed and the study needs to be representative of both genders for the reasons articulated by the reviewer. When re-submitting the revised manuscript, please also include a detailed point-by-point description of the steps taken to address all reviewer comments as shown below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 29 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript is worthwhile even though it is a curious combination of an extensive review on mitochondrial morphology in immune cells and ME/CFS along with a case report on two pairs of individuals discordant for ME/CFS. Both are valuable. Despite the authors citing a rather astounding 199 references, they have overlooked some key references that not only need to be added, but also discussed. Because of the “review-like” nature of the manuscript, I have paid particular attention to appropriate citation. I don’t believe any new experiments are required; instead there are important changes needed to the writing. Foremost among the missing citations is a paper from their own university that examined PBMCs from ME/CFS patients by TEM. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/27747291/ Likely they did not notice this one because of its title. The authors cannot claim their work is the first on TEM of PBMCS in the disease so need to eliminate such statements. But they also need to discuss why their results differ from the 2016 work, which is not as strong as the current manuscript, given that the prior work used unfractionated total PBMCs and it does not have the detailed quantitative comparisons found in this manuscript. I suspect the discrepancy might be related to the earlier work using frozen cells but there are other differences as well. The TEM measurements of mitochondrial size are consistent with the lack of differentiation of mass between patients and controls that were observed with an unmentioned fluorescent microscopy approach https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/31830003/. The authors appear to omit information about the sex of the 4 individuals, except for a perhaps accidental mention of “his” caregivers. So the severe patient and control must be male, but what sex are the twins? There is abundant evidence of sex differences, including in lipid metabolism, as well as the female predominance of the disease. For example, https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34454515/ , which found sex differences is not cited. There are several other papers describing lipid/fatty acid disturbances in ME/CFS that are not cited. https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/31947545/, https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/labs/pmc/articles/PMC5365380/ . The Naviaux PNAS paper, which also documented sex differences, is cited but may need more discussion in this context. It is important to know the sex of all 4 individuals to see whether differences—such as lipid accumulation—are consistent with the literature. A paper of one of the co-authors that was not cited is https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/34682970/ which showed abnormal elevated cholesterol/HDL ratio in severe ME/CFS patients. Surely the chlolesterol/LDL/HDL ratio and triglycerides, as they are standard clinical tests, must be known for at least the patients, if not the controls, and could be mentioned. Does the severe patient have an abnormal ratio given the finding of lipid droplets? Actually, comparing such levels in identical twins discordant for the disease could be interesting. It puzzles me when mention is made that $17 to $24 billion dollars is the cost of ME/CFS to society, when the original paper (not cited, https://dynamic-med.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/1476-5918-7-6) was written in 2008. What is the cost in today’s dollars? This sentence needs to be changed: “Behan et al. who also reported a substantial increase in mitochondrial abnormalities in the muscle cells in post-viral fatigue syndrome patients, a term the authors preferred over ME/CFS for describing the condition.” The reason they did not prefer ME/CFS is that such a term didn’t exist in 1990 when they wrote the article. Chronic fatigue syndrome as a name was not invented until 1988 and was not in use in the UK and Europe at that time and combining ME and CFS was never done. Instead, back then it was well known that ME was a post-viral syndrome. Subsequent to this statement: The role of exosomes in ME/CFS etiology has just begun to be explored” the authors describe only one paper and omit https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/29696075/, https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/31759091/, https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/33046133/, and https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/32034172/. ********** 6. 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Phenotypic characteristics of peripheral immune cells of Myalgic encephalomyelitis/chronic fatigue syndrome via Transmission Electron Microscopy: a pilot study PONE-D-22-01617R1 Dear Dr. Jahaniani Kenari, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Christopher T. Beh, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have addressed all concerns raised by the expert reviewer and the article is much improved. The paper should be of interest to those studying the cell biology of Myalgic encephalomyelitis/chronic fatigue syndrome. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-01617R1 Phenotypic characteristics of peripheral immune cells of Myalgic encephalomyelitis/chronic fatigue syndrome via Transmission Electron Microscopy: a pilot study Dear Dr. Jahanbani: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Christopher T. Beh Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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