Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 15, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-33139Development and cross-validation of a veterans mental health risk factor screenPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Carlson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for your work on this manuscript and the opportunity to review it. On the whole, I considered the content interesting and your presentation very detailed. I recognize this was a lot to present in a single paper and therefore quite a bit of effort, and in that light, I would like to offer a few thoughts about the manuscript overall. I thought the amount of detail was at times overwhelming, particularly leading up to the sections of the manuscript that spoke directly to the new work being presented. Overall, I recognize the importance in laying out this additional background as it is the foundation for the Screen Development and Cross Validation Studies, but I that some of the landscape and prior studies might have been more easily digested with the presentation of some of this information in either a tabular format or perhaps with a figure that laid out the overall flow of the work. This wasn’t a fatal flaw in my opinion, but I did feel the need to be extra careful in my reading to properly follow along. Narrowing my comments to specific items in your manuscript, there are several points where additional clarification might be beneficial for the reader. 1. I’m not sure that I fully understood the motivation for developing this particular new screening method. Lines 141-145 indicate that you modeled the process for developing the current tool after those used for two other successful screening tools. My best understanding of the need for a new screener was to have something appropriate to the primary care clinic setting. If that is the case, I would recommend noting that more explicitly and/or what the improvement being sought here is. 2. Line 395 was the first time it became very clear about what the “new” work was in terms of the development and presentation of new data. Because I read the manuscript first, I did not carry an impression of what to expect through the reading of the manuscript that I realized later was more clearly laid out in the abstract. I thought that giving a little more information about what comprised the second half of the paper earlier in the text would have been helpful. As an example, I was first puzzled why the VA Primary Care-II cohort was not included in Tables 2 and 3 but it had been included with Table 1. Only after getting toward the end did I fully appreciate that this was the new cohort being described. 3. Line 48: It might be nice to include the range here to support the “high variability” noted here. 4. Line 54: References cited could be reflected as 12-18 unless there is a typographical error here. 5. Line 108-110: This sentence might benefit by adding a reference. 6. Lines 235-237, Tables 1, 2 and 3: There are 3 different numbers associated with the VA Primary Care-I cohort: 114 (line 235), 131 (table 1) and 104 (tables 2 and 3). It is not clear what these differences are or why they are presented with different denominators. 7. Lines 318-319: It appears this sentence is inadvertently cut short. 8. Line 332: One iteration of the word “identity” should be “identify.” 9. Line 380: Is the phrase, “who reported major stressors...” supposed to be, “who reported no major stressors...”? 10. Line 381-383: This sentence is important to understanding why Table 4 does not include 232 patients, so it may be better to locate it closer to the tables and the mention of 232 patients (line 395). 11. Table 3: Does not include the Gulf War cohort. Is there a reason for this? 12. Table 3: For clarity, it might be useful to note that the VA PTSD Resident & Homeless cohort is the combination of two cohorts presented separately in Tables 1 and 2? Is there a reason these are combined here but not elsewhere? 13. Table 4: Dissociation is listed as having 4 items here but having 5 items in tables 3 and 5. 14. Table 5: The caption notes 5 risk factors but only lists 4 in the table. 15. There is a mix of citation styles used in the manuscript that should be unified. 16. Abbreviations that are not specified in the text and tables include: a. PTSD: Line 29 b. VA: Line 33 c. VHA: Line 36 d. SPTSS: Line 214 e. IA (presumably Iraq/Afghanistan): Tables 1, 2, and 3 Thank you again for your work on this manuscript. Reviewer #2: This is a well-done and important study. I have only a few comments for the authors to consider. 1) The authors make the case that 'moral injury' is a uniquely predictive risk factor for PTSD and Depression and developed 4 novel items to assess moral injury. Because these items were developed de novo for this study, I would recommend that the authors further substantiate their decision to include these items instead of the 'next best' predictive risk factor, e.g., depression or social constraints. I also suggest a bit more description of the construct and/or noting the 4 assessment items developed by the panel since this construct is less well-understood than the other risk factors. 2) The authors note that a limitation of the study is that the population in the cross-validation study is proportionately younger than the population served by the VA in general. It would be helpful for the reader to know to what degree the authors expect that this difference would impact the external validity of their results, i.e., how big of a deal is this? Does this have implications for future studies to confirm the risk factor assessment? 3) On line 319, there appears to be a word missing from the end of the sentence, "...a more patient centered ____". I think this is missing the word "model" or "approach". 4) This line (323-324) is a worded a little confusingly: "We examined the predictive or prospective validity of multiple risk factors as this is the form of criterion-related validity that is relevant when predicting future status is the goal". ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-21-33139R1 Development and cross-validation of a veterans mental health risk factor screen Dear Dr. Carlson: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Chong Chen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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