Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 23, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-23995Preliminary neural correlates of anterior cruciate ligament injury-risk biomechanicsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Grooms, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 28 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments The aim of this study was to study the association between bilateral motor control brain activity (assessed via fMRI, during a leg press dynamic task) and a specific ACL injury risk biomechanical parameter, i.e. knee abduction moment during landing from a drop vertical jump, in a population of pediatric females (n = 30). The main findings of the study are the following: 1) greater landing knee abduction moments were associated with greater brain activity in specific regions that integrate visual, proprioceptive and attentional information; 2) the subgroup of participants classified as at higher ACL injury risk had greater brain activity with respect to those at lower injury risk. The study is original and has been conducted with methodological rigor. I offer suggestions for methodological clarifications, data reporting and editorial amendments. Specific comments LL 29. If possible I would suggest to add details regarding the leg-press load (e.g. %) LL 106. The choice of studying pediatric female participants because of their “greater relative ACL injury risk, increased propensity for reduced frontal plane knee control, lower extremity valgus alignment during landing and pivoting moments” relative to males has been properly justified in the methods. However, the emphasis of the entire introduction (as well as in the abstract, discussion and conclusion) seem not to be specific to the studied population, but rather it focuses on the fact that ACL rupture is “a common sport-or physical activity-related injury among adolescent and young athletes”. My question is the following: has this analysis been made on female participants only? And more importantly, could the same results be expected for males also? This point should be probably addressed in the discussion section, where results seem to be discussed and generalized to the whole population level, rather than to be specific to the involved population. LL 119. Please be consistent when using terminology: high-risk participants (in the text) vs. high-injury risk (Table 1). Same for low-risk group (text) vs. low-injury risk (Table 1). LL 120. It is stated that the “pairwise matching” between low-risk group and high-risk group participants was based on age and on body mass index. However, BMI data are not reported in table 1. Moreover, from table 1 it seems that the high-risk group had similar age, but was slightly taller and much heavier than the low-injury risk group. Therefore, how was the matching performed? Furthermore, how were the 5 participants out of 11 selected/identified for the pairwise matching analysis. Please clarify. LL 128. Sometimes it is used “body mass” (L 151), sometimes only “mass” (L 128) or “weight” (Table1). Please be consistent throughout the text. LL 138. “The bilateral leg press involved an eccentric loading phase and…”. From this sentence, it seems that fMRI was recorded only during the eccentric phase, whereas from LL 142-146 it is clear that participants performed both contraction phases (eccentric + concentric) continuously for 30 s (from full extension to 45° knee flexion). Consider rephrasing. LL 138 and 171. Were participants familiarized with both bilateral leg press exercise and with drop vertical jump? LL 151. How was the elastic resistance standardized? Why was 35% of body mass selected? Despite the necessity to keep a low resistance to avoid head artifacts, the 35% of participant’s body mass seems to be quite a low resistance to assess, also if we consider the potential forces acting on the knee during a drop vertical jump. LL 181-191. This entire section provides detailed indication of parameters extracted from the drop vertical Jump (e.g. VGRF). However, these variables related to DVJ data have not been described in the results. LL 221. It is not clear where the “RESULTS” section starts, as this is not indicated in the manuscript. As it is, it seems that Methods and Results are described in the same section on a continuum. LL 230. Please be more specific when describing the figure caption. What do the numbers on top of each image indicate? What is the unit of measure of the yellow-orange bar at the bottom? I assume that all the figures are representative of one participant, presumably with an high ACL injury risk. LL 231. Refer to comment LL 230. LL 238-239. It seems that that in the sentences starting with “Cluster 1” and “Cluster 2” the main verbal tense is missing. LL 247. Please be consistent when reporting the number of decimals in the p-value (sometimes you report 5 decimals, sometimes 4, sometimes 2, sometimes 3). LL 267. Is “drop landing peak knee abduction moment” a specific marker for young female athletes? If so, it would be better to specify it. In this way, also your choice of studying females only could be better justified. LL 303. The reference paper to this “recent experiment” is only reported 10 rows below. I would suggest to add this reference either here or to move it up a bit in the text for better clarity. LL 387. The fact that the association was studied in pediatric females only should be addressed in the limitations. LL 415-417. The fact that the association between brain activity and this specific ACL injury risk biomechanics parameter has been studied and observed in pediatric females only, may not support and justify such a broad and generalized conclusion. Reviewer #2: Overall, the study is very well structured, detailed in the methodology, in line with the most recent evidences and provides important information to deepen the knowledge about the underlying causes that increase the risk of sustaining an ACL injury. This was achieved by correlating known biomechanical risk factors (knee abduction moment) with brain activity in different areas, analyzing for the first time a two-legged task such as the bilateral leg press. Personally, I believe that the study is highly suitable for publication. Below some minor remarks: Methods Page 5 Line 108: How did you select the sample size? Did you perform an apriori sample size calculation? Please argue on that Page 6 Lines 139-140: “thereby facilitating a greater correspondence with actual neuromuscular control demands of the DVJ”. I suggest removing this sentence since the speculation may send out an ambiguous message considering the complexity and the real neuromuscular-coordinative demand of a jump-landing maneuver with respect to the bilateral leg press task. Page 8 Line 174: How did you measure maximum jump height? Please argue on that Discussion Page 13 line 280: Please change “This assertion is support not only by” with “This assertion is supported not only by” Page 13 line 281: Please change “but the implicated sensory” with “but also by the implicated sensory” Limitations Please add the small sample size as a limitation to the generalizability of the study results. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Preliminary Brain-Behavioral Neural Correlates of Anterior Cruciate Ligament Injury Risk Landing Biomechanics Using A Novel Bilateral Leg Press Neuroimaging Paradigm PONE-D-21-23995R1 Dear Dr. Grooms, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Riccardo Di Giminiani Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have no further comments. I thank the authors for their commitment in answering all the main points I have raised. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: jacopo emanuele rocchi ********** |
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PONE-D-21-23995R1 Preliminary Brain-Behavioral Neural Correlates of Anterior Cruciate Ligament Injury Risk Landing Biomechanics Using A Novel Bilateral Leg Press Neuroimaging Paradigm Dear Dr. Grooms: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof Riccardo Di Giminiani Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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