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PONE-D-22-06422Glycated Haemoglobin and Fasting Plasma Glucose tests in the screening of outpatients for diabetes and abnormal glucose regulation in Uganda: a diagnostic accuracy studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Francis Xavier Kasujja Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.
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Authors will need to consistently follow the STARD guideline and use the STARD checklist to REWRITE their manuscript. In table 2 authors are reporting specificity that is comparable (overlapping CI) however in the result description and summary in the discussion, authors have reported low specificity of HBA1c as low specificity. Authors will need to clarify or rectify. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Interesting piece of science given the near absence of data on diagnostic utility of current recommended diabetes screening and diagnostic tools among Africans. The choice of the topic is also of clinical significance to many physicians practicing in sub-Saharan Africa. Besides, their otherwise large sample size is a good indication of effort made to inform science on this important but otherwise neglected topic. However, after reading through the manuscript, I have several queries: 1. Are investigators in a position to run 'sensitivity analysis' of their findings prior to publishing the manuscript? Reason: The investigators reported in their manuscript to had applied 2-stage sampling strategies. However, in both cases, the approaches were non-probability sampling in nature. Strangely, the inferences were heavily dependent on probability sampling analysis. For all practical purposes, the so called "consecutive sampling" is a non-probability sampling method. One of the immediate impacts (despite all posteriori statistical manoeuvres done) of such 'design error' include estimates that blow-out disproportionately out of the bounded confidence interval values. That can be evident in their manuscript since optimum level specificity for their HbA1c had an estimate (98.7%) outside the stated 95% C.I. (96.2% - 98.4%) in both abstract (refer line 47 of page 2) and even in their table 3. Usually this thinking invalidate the entire analysis of their primary analysis. However, I am optimistic of the findings, based on both 'near-infinitely large sample size', as well as 'inverse probability weighting', that controlled for bias in the primary findings (sensitivity, specificity, PPV & NPV), obtained out of likely 'partial verification bias' prominent by design. It is highly likely, that their large sample size, approximate the 'real population' of interest, and therefore somehow offset all the doubted possibilities of significant biases. A sensitivity analysis is likely warranted in this scenario. 2. The study design was better suited as population-based study instead of hospital-based analysis of present. 2.1 - as stated by investigators, Iganga hospital is a referral health facility and hence the studied sample is unlikely to be representative of the entire population. In fact, there is a possibility that their findings to be mere 'hospital statistics' data. Time after time, hospital statistics data are known to be 'negatively biased' with respect to the clinical diagnostic utility studies. No wonder, their sample has an age range of 30-75 years. Highly likely those 'older than 75 years cohort' who are the most at risk to be diabetic were selected out from participating in this study. Likewise, the 'younger cohort' (<30 years) who are otherwise, least likely to be impaired glucose tolerant/diabetic were unlikely to be part of this study 2.2. Prevalent clinical conditions in the population that can significantly affect HbA1c levels were not reported to had been controlled in the study by design. For instance, how many (and proportion by %) of their participants in the study were pregnant women? and how many (and proportion by %) were HIV-seropositive on ante-retroviral treatment? Both conditions (quite prevalent in Uganda) are known to significantly affect glycation process, and with severe impact on values of HbA1c test in the diagnosis of diabetes mellitus. 2.3. Investigators reported in their methods section that continuous variables were to be reported in "mean +/- S.D." However, in the results, most of the continuous variables were reported in "mean with 95% C.I." Even though there is a natural mechanism for conversion from one to another, consistency is key. I would advice they choose one and leave the other in their reporting strategies. 2.4. Arbitrary Cut-off points: why was HbA1c level for abnormal glucose regulation (standard) made at 5.7% instead of the usual 5.6%? - Can't that decision results to 'lower sensitivity' as stated in the manuscript? - How different will it be if they stick to the standard HbA1c level cut-off point of 5.6%? 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Glycated Haemoglobin and Fasting Plasma Glucose tests in the screening of outpatients for diabetes and abnormal glucose regulation in Uganda: a diagnostic accuracy study PONE-D-22-06422R1 Dear Dr. Francis Xavier Kasujja, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Fredrick Baragi Haraka, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: None |
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