Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 18, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-01178Implementation of a Kangaroo Mother Care Model at a Tertiary Level Hospital in Zambia Using the RE-AIM FrameworkPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Manasyan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 12 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the diligent work of Muttau et al, Implementation of a Kangaroo Mother Care Model at a Tertiary Level Hospital in Zambia Using the RE_AIM Framework.” I recommend consideration for publication after minor revision. The authors are to be congratulated on collecting such important data on KMC intervention in an environment with a high burden of neonatal mortality. The authors report an impressive weight gain and an acceptable average hospital stay. The information in this study will guide clinicians in resource limited settings, to use such models for quality improvement in Kangaroo Mother Care methods. I have several questions and suggestions intended to clarify and strengthen the article. Comments: 1. I believe that the methods of data collection was appropriate although the study is missing a comparison period which to me is a significant missing opportunity to evaluate the model appropriately. A period of initial baseline data collection even for 3 months would have been enough to make a conclusion. 2. The time spent skin-to-skin is important for maximizing the benefits of KMC. The fact that this was not documented is also another limitation (mentioned by the authors as well) , although I acknowledge the difficulties of obtaining this information. 3. Overall, what is the newborn mortality rate in this hospital with 20,000 deliveries per year. Furthermore, it will be important to understand preterm birth rates in this hospital to understand the magnitude or the needs for KMC facilities. Where were the other preterm being taken care of if there was no space in Kangaroo ward (before expansion) 4. The author should explain what happened (outcome) to the 28 newborns who went back to NICU (Line 189-191). The conditions that necessitated them to go back should also be clearly stated. 5. The authors concluded that there was evidence that the model improved neonatal outcomes. It is difficult to justify this statement and I recommend to change it (Line 457) 6. Line 293 I agree this is a quality improvement initiative, however, as researchers, it is good practice to ask for consent for using data for publication. Verbal consent would have sufficed. Reviewer #2: This is a very relevant and priority area of research in the context of LMICs with high proportions of LBW and preterm babies, inadequate access to appropriate facility care, sub-optimally functioning government health facilities and the challenge of resource allocation with multiple competing interest. The study addresses an important question of KMC implementation in facility. Few issues that may be reviewed to strengthen the manuscript This study has been based on the principles of implementation research (IR) as it appears from the manuscript. RE-AIM framework has been used but complete description is lacking. The first dimension of RE-AIM, i.e., Reach has not been addressed. It is the penetration of the project into its intended audience, in this case it could have been the LBW and preterm newborns in the defined study area. IR aims at population-based coverage. This study was conducted in one facility, in that context Reach could be defined as the proportion of all LBW and/or preterm babies who received KMC out of all such babies born or referred to during the study period. Ideally, the intervention should have been institutionalized to address the Maintenance component of RE-AIM, both at the facility and community levels. For scaling up any efficacious or effective intervention, cost is an important information. The authors can state if they are planning to or have already conducted any economic analysis. A relevant reference can be added, Mony PK et al., Scaling up Kangaroo Mother Care in Ethiopia and India: a multi-site implementation research study. BMJ Glob Health. 2021 Sep;6(9): e005905. Specific comments Line 125: stable babies are hemodynamically stable, need to mention whether they were on IV fluids or not or whether they were able to feed orally. Lines 135: only one study nurse was engaged 24*7 and 7 days a week, this does not seem feasible, the authors can elaborate on this. What was the back up for leaves? Were any pre-facility interventions implemented to refer all eligible infants to the hospital The eligibility criteria for KMC initiation need to be specified- age of the infant, birth weight, gestational age, etc. The mean (SD) age of initiation needs to be mentioned. The mean (SD) gestational age in weeks of the enrolled infants need to be mentioned. The duration of skin to skin contact over 24 hours and in days is missing. What was the definition of KMC in this IR, did the definition include hours of skin to skin contact over 24 hours and exclusive breast feeding? If yes, data needs to be shown in the manuscript. Analysis to determine the association of weight gain with the hours of skin to skin contact (dose-response) would be an important information. The exact period of follow up is not mentioned. The authors did not mention anything about sample size calculation. There is no description of the study teams. IR always involves mixed methods design with a qualitative component. There is no mention of this. It is not clear whether the outcome measurement team was independent form the persons supporting implementation. It is not clear why normal birth weight infants were admitted to KMC unit, KMC is an intervention for LBW and/or preterm babies, if these babies were preterm, that needs to be mentioned. Table 3a shows the total number of babies as 528 but the sample enrolled was 573. The authors have described well the strengths and limitations in the discussion section. The discussion should also include a section on research in context and policy implications. ********** 6. 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Strengthening Kangaroo Mother Care at a Tertiary Level Hospital in Zambia: A prospective descriptive study PONE-D-22-01178R1 Dear Dr. Manasyan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hannah Tappis, DrPH, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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