Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 6, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-10177Knowledge and practice of preconception care and associated factors among obstetric care providers working in public health facilities of West Shoa Zone, Ethiopia: A cross-sectional studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wakgari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 25 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised by the reviewers during the review process. Overall you need to strengthen in editing, analysis and interpretation areas. You have to address the reviewer comments in bullet point wise while submitting the revised version of the paper. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by June 8 2022. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://pone.editorialmanager.com/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Dr. Jayanta Bora Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewer’s Comment Reviewer1 General Comment: In general, it is a well design study, conducted in a way scientifically and technically sound methodology. Appropriate data analysis method was employed, and figures are consistent through the document. Nevertheless, this manuscript needs editorial revision and minor changes to the abstract and discussion to make it clear and more attractive for the reader. Detail line by line comments are provided below. Title: L112-118: the Data collection tools and procedures indicate that the study tool has five sections(demographic information, knowledge, attitude and practice, and associated factors of preconception care questions). The proceeding sentence also shows that you have assess attitude as well. Therefore, attitude should be included in the title, keywords, and result sections. Since the data collection tool(questionnaire) is not provided, I couldn’t verify the actual questions that address the attitude section. Please, provide the study materials with your revised manuscript. Abstract L27-33: Please paraphrase the result section of the abstract. •L27-30: has too many conjunctions “and/&” and it is unclear. •Select the most relevant findings to be included in the abstract. L32: "doing screening for reproductive life plan" oThis is a very specific task. I suggest using professional category or the department instead of pointing out a very specific task. Also, it would be much better if the result can be presented in carrier-wise like diploma, degree, midwives, physicians, and other gyn & obs care providers in the selected health facilities. Keywords: Add attitude if providers’ attitude was assessed, otherwise the attitude assessment questionnaire should be removed from the tool(See comment L112-118). Methods L98: “ the first two specific objectives” - Please mention each objective here. L106-107: Please, paraphrase as “ The sample was allocated to each stratum proportionally based on the number of health care providers working at the selected hospitals and health centers”. L114 - Indicates that knowledge, attitude, and practice preconception care of participants were assessed. See my comments above. L122 -124: Data quality assurance is beyond a questionnaire that includes data collection, data processing and data management. So, please paraphrase as "To assure quality of the study, data collectors and supervisors were given two days training about the study materials and data collection procedures. The study tool was pre-tested among ...... " L127: “… Cronbach's α tests which were 0.802 & 0.97 for knowledge and practice, respectively.” L172 - “1 -to 12” correct as 1 to 12 L174 - “ 7-to 136” correct as 1 to 136 L175-176: I don't think this sentence is important. The above sentence showed that how many of them perform good practice based on your classification of good and poor. Otherwise, you can explain as "only three participants were found to perform all the expected good practice on preconception care.... It is better focus on the meaning than the numbers. L187: I think the health centers are also public. This can mislead to a comparison of public and non-public sectors. Discussion and conclusion oPlease include strengths and limitations of this study. Reviewer2 Dear authors’ thank you for submitting this nice manuscript. Here under some comments about your manuscript. 1. You have used special character (&) in the abstract part revise it. 2. You have used stratified sampling technique in your main text part, but also stated as simple random sampling technique in the abstract part revise it. 3. What about the interaction effect between knowledge and practice? Try to put it clearly. 4. What is the advantages of computing two sample size in one study? Is there any scientific study that support your ways of computing sample size? Justify it. 5. What is the measurement scale for your dependent variables? Means that the knowledge and practice is not directly measurable, by what criteria have you categorized it. Put the justification clearly in your document. Look the following statement from your main text “After correct responses were given a score of 1 and incorrect answers were given a score of 0, the first dependent variable, knowledge score, was computed for each respondent. The practice score, the second dependent variable, was computed for each respondent. 'Never = 0, rarely = 1, sometimes = 2, often = 3, and always = 4' were the response alternatives. “Your dependent variables are dichotomous, how do you categorized them? Justify it. 6. Try to cite any scientific work which supports your statement “Binary logistic regression was done to identify those candidate variables for Multiple logistic regression at a p-value of < 0.25 for not to miss the important variables.” 7. In your result part you have used only descriptive statistics. Why not Cross tab? Try to analyze your data again by using cross tab and interpret the result by considering each categories of dependent variable with each categories of independent variables. For instance: which age group of individuals have better practiced? So in order to answer questions like this you have to use cross tab rather using simple descriptive statistics. 8. Why not you haven’t seen association between the dependent and independent variable, by using Chi-square test? 9. Try to modify table 2 & 3 title, because the result is not only the binary logistic regression. 10. Interpret the cross tab result presented in the table 2 & 3, it is not interpreted. In general your manuscript needs major revision. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In general, it is a well design study, conducted in a way scientifically and technically sound methodology. Appropriate data analysis method was employed, and figures are consistent through the document. Nevertheless, this manuscript needs editorial revision and minor changes to the abstract and discussion to make it clear and more attractive for the reader. Reviewer #2: Dear authors’ thank you for submitting this nice manuscript. Here under some comments about your manuscript. 1.You have used special character (&) in the abstract part revise it. 2.You have used stratified sampling technique in your main text part, but also stated as simple random sampling technique in the abstract part revise it. 3.What about the interaction effect between knowledge and practice? Try to put it clearly. 4.What is the advantages of computing two sample size in one study? Is there any scientific study that support your ways of computing sample size? Justify it. 5.What is the measurement scale for your dependent variables? Means that the knowledge and practice is not directly measurable, by what criteria have you categorized it. Put the justification clearly in your document. Look the following statement from your main text “After correct responses were given a score of 1 and incorrect answers were given a score of 0, the first dependent variable, knowledge score, was computed for each respondent. The practice score, the second dependent variable, was computed for each respondent. 'Never = 0, rarely = 1, sometimes = 2, often = 3, and always = 4' were the response alternatives. “Your dependent variables are dichotomous, how do you categorized them? Justify it. 6.Try to cite any scientific work which supports your statement “Binary logistic regression was done to identify those candidate variables for Multiple logistic regression at a p-value of < 0.25 for not to miss the important variables.” 7.In your result part you have used only descriptive statistics. Why not Cross tab? Try to analyze your data again by using cross tab and interpret the result by considering each categories of dependent variable with each categories of independent variables. For instance: which age group of individuals have better practiced? So in order to answer questions like this you have to use cross tab rather using simple descriptive statistics. 8.Why not you haven’t seen association between the dependent and independent variable, by using Chi-square test? 9.Try to modify table 2 & 3 title, because the result is not only the binary logistic regression. 10.Interpret the cross tab result presented in the table 2 & 3, it is not interpreted. In general your manuscript needs major revision. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Knowledge, attitude, and practice of preconception care and associated factors among obstetric care providers working in public health facilities of West Shoa Zone, Ethiopia: A cross-sectional study PONE-D-22-10177R1 Dear Dr. Negash Wakgari, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. We recommend you to complete the reviewer's minor comments and thoroughly do the English editing. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for their efforts to address all issues in this manuscript. They have addressed all my concerns and the manuscript is significantly improved now, except it has minor editorial errors still. I feel this manuscript can be appropriate for publication after proofreading and some editorial correction. No further peer review is required. L16-27: Editorial correction needed. L33 – 35: Editorial correction needed It seems the library and internet had good knowledge than seen as positive predictors of good providers’ knowledge on preconception care. You may revise as … “Library availability [AOR: 1.7, 95%CI: 1.04-2.85] & and internet access [AOR: 3.4, 95%CI: 2.0-5.8] in working health facility were positive predictor of providers’ good knowledge about preconception care.” L43 – Still it is ok, but I prefer to avoid “favorable attitude” so that not to mix the positive and negative findings in one sentence. “ This study found that more than half of obstetric care providers’ had poor knowledge and practice of preconception care.” Reviewer #2: Dear Author, thank you for your nice response. The manuscript does not need the further comment. No comment! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Serebe Gebrie Reviewer #2: Yes: Lema Abate Adulo ********** |
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PONE-D-22-10177R1 Knowledge, attitude, and practice of preconception care and associated factors among obstetric care providers working in public health facilities of West Shoa Zone, Ethiopia: A cross-sectional study Dear Dr. Wakgari: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jayanta Kumar Bora Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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