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| Original SubmissionJanuary 16, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-01448Vasoactive pharmacological management according to SCAI class in patients with acute myocardial infarction and cardiogenic shockPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Udesen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 23 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study dealing with the vasoactive pharmacological management in patients with AMI and cardiogenic shock classified into different severity subgroups according to the SCAI classes C-E. Overall conclusion which is limited by the retrospective nature of the study is that the use of various vasoactive strategies does not have relevant influence on the short-term mortality, except for the SCAI class C subgroup, where the treatment with epinephrine was associated with higher mortality. I would like to ask authors to address the following questions: - Were there any baseline differences within each SCAI class which could favor lower or higher mortality in specific subgroups according to the vasoactive drug regimens? In this context, what about patients who did not obtain revascularization (reasons for that?)? How were those patients distributed within each SCAI class according to the vasoactive subgroup? - Do the authors know the cause of death in different subgroups of patients, especially in the epinephrine SCAI class C population? - What about patients, in whom inopressors were given first alone and after some time within the first 72h other inopressors were added. Under which inopressor regimens are those patients classified in this study? - AMI patients with cardiogenic shock were classified according to the SCAI classes and vasoactive therapy within first 72 hours at CICU and the mortality was shown for different subgroups of patients within the next 30 days. Do the authors have data on the vasoactive therapy beyond the first 72 hours, since significant changes in the composition of the drug therapy could have relevant influence on mortality wrongly blaming the initial choice of the vasoactive substances for the outcome. Reviewer #2: Vasoactive pharmacological management according to SCAI class in patients with acute myocardial infarction and cardiogenic shock, despite being retrospective it is a good study. It includes important data, from a representative population through a detailed analysis of patients admitted to intensive care, from 2010 to 2017, in 2 centers that provide tertiary cardiac care for a population of 3.8 million people. Treatment with inopressors was evaluated in detail with regard to its indication in relation to the severity of the disease, its response, and the type of drug used. In my opinion, although only two centers were included, it is a quality work, providing important information regarding the treatment of critically ill patients with cardiogenic shock following acute myocardial infarction. Reviewer #3: I read with interest the manuscript entitled "Vasoactive pharmacological management according to SCAI class in patients with acute myocardial infarction and cardiogenic shock" by Udesen, et al. This is a retrospective cohort study of 1250 patients with AMICS examining in-hospital mortality as a function of SCAI Shock stage and vasoactive drug use. I have the following comments and suggestions: Introduction - it should be noted that there are more data than just the SOAP-II trial that suggest harm with dopamine/epinephrine versus norepinephrine in CS, including other RCT's and meta-analyses of observational studies. The authors should cite the new SCAI Shock Classification (Naidu, JACC 2022). Methods - a table describing their SCAI Shock Classification would be helpful, as this is a new approach not used in prior studies. Clarity regarding how hypoperfusion was defined for SCAI stage C should be provided, although I assume it is the same as for the definition of CS itself. The authors should cite references regarding their SCAI Shock Classification, if only the consensus statement. Was cardiac arrest part of the SCAI Classification? Were other MCS devices besides ECMO considered in the SCAI Shock Classification? The authors should double check the VIS formula because a) phenylephrine was not included (although if this was not used it is irrelevant) and b) as I recall, the conversion factor for vasopressin is 10000 not 1000. The authors should specify when the VIS was calculated specifically. My personal opinion is that a simple across-groups comparison for SCAI Stages is not ideal, and instead linear or regression across stages would be more appropriate to determine if there were trends across the stages. This may not be necessary for all of Table 1, but should be done for Table 2 and the physiological variables for Table 1. Did the authors perform logistic regression for their mortality endpoints, either before or after adjustment? This seems important considering the differences between groups...For instance, prior analyses have showed that CICU patients who receive NE do better but only after adjusting for VIS (PMID: 34524266), with an interaction between higher VIS and greater benefit of NE. With 1250 patients, it is not appropriate to just report unadjusted associations, particularly considering the statement in the introduction "however, such studies often assume homogeneity in the AMICS population and do not stratify according to the severity of the disease." At the minimum, they should adjust for SCAI stage, MAP, MCS use and VIS +/- lactate but ideally should include multiple other covariates given the number of outcome events observed. This would help to determine whether the observed associations between vasopressor groups and outcome were due to confounding particularly considering that vasopressor choices changed with SCAI stage (stratifying by SCAI stage is a good start but likely inadequate). Each drug (NE, DA, EPI) can be treated as an independent variable and properly adjusted in this manner. Indeed, propensity adjustment would be ideal although if the authors do a good multivariable analysis I am not sure this extra step is truly necessary. Results/Figures/Tables - for Table 2, are the values reported the means during the CICU course or during a specific time period? The authors should calculate the ratio of MAP to VIS for inclusion in Table 1 and Table 2, this indexes the BP to the vasopressor load and should be lower in higher SCAI stages. The authors should report the maximum VIS, which has been previously validated as a mortality risk factor in the CICU even when adjusted for other relevant markers (reference #18 plus PMID: 32180344) and in patients with CS (PMID: 33590998 & PMID: 29463462, among others). The authors should also report the maximum # vasoactive drugs, which has been described previously as a marker of prognosis as well. Throughout, the authors should be clear about the time point they are referring to--at CICU admission versus peak, etc. The figures are difficult to read and the size/resolution should be improved. Figure 3 doesn't really show any major differences and is not very interesting. I suggest plotting the MAP/VIS ratio instead if possible and making this supplementary. For Figure 4, both should be line graphs. Discussion - an important question when considering the ideal vasopressor for CS is whether some drugs are beneficial or other drugs are harmful. My opinion is that NE is safer due to less toxicity than DA/EPI, as supported by studies such as SOAP-II and OptimaCC. Knowing that EPI was used primarily as rescue therapy in this cohort, the authors should discuss whether EPI is directly harmful or whether NE is simply safer. I worry that the results of this and other observational studies not correlating with RCTs, which suggests that there could be confounding by indication--for instance, fewer arrhythmias with DA may imply that it was used selectively in patients with a lower risk of arrhythmias. The DA dose issue may also be true, as the authors astutely note--this is my own experience. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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