Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-17910 Semmes-Weinstein Monofilament esthesiometry for the definition of patterns of sensitivity alteration of the hands and feet in leprosy diagnosis and monitoring PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Frade, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 17 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Congratulation to the authors for their study “Semmes-Weinstein Monofilament esthesiometry for the definition of patterns of sensitivity alteration of the hands and feet in leprosy diagnosis and monitoring”. Overall the manuscript is insightful and contributes to the subject of nervous impairment in leprosy patients, specifically MB. The study is very detailed and meticulous. It addresses some gaps found in literature. However, we do have some concerns worth addressing: 1. You state repeatedly throughout the manuscript that you only included multibacillary (or “lepromatous”) cases of leprosy in the study. However, Table 2 details how 101 patients from the initial population were actually classified as Borderline. Therefore, I must inquire: - Which diagnostic criteria did you use to define the patients? The WHO classification, The Ridley-Jopling classification? (PMID: 17366457) Please define in Materials and Methods, for the sake of clarity. - Why did you decide not to include patients with paucibacillary leprosy in this study? This should also be stated in the manuscript for the sake of transparency. Perhaps include it as one of the limits of the study. 2. You stress the importance of tibial involvement in leprosy, which is not something new to date. You should consider better implementing what is already known in literature and discuss it in the manuscript (PMID: 4795534, which is also specific for MB patients, and PMID: 11391190). 3. You analyse the esthesiometric improvement in the tested nerves after treatment with WHO regimen. However, not all included patients started with the same severity. In fact, you should consider implementing a multivariate statistical analysis to understand the weight of severity on sensory recovery after treatment. Perhaps also consider evaluating the effects of age and gender as well. 4. You should better discuss the limitations in the study’s methodology. Specifically, you should at least mention alternatives that have been deemed superior in esthesiometric assessments, even if for different purposes, such as the PSSD (PMID: 26220428, PMID: 32128706). 5. The way serology and anti-PDL-1 positivity affected esthesiometric changes is unclear. Although it is true that some evidence suggests that it could be a useful tool for evaluating the efficacy of treatment (i.e. higher serology levels in untreated patients) [PMID: 19784481], one must wonder how relevant is this section for the purpose of your study? Especially considering that correlation index was found to be low. 6. Some minor critiques to the content of the manuscript should also be addressed: • Consider implementing the type of study (i.e. cohort study) in the title of the manuscript; • Introduction is not engaging enough, too long and too focused on academic concepts which add very little to the manuscript. Consider reworking it in order to make it more focused on the aims and endpoints of the study; • Consider moving the following sections of the manuscript to the Discussion: “In a series of studies […] fibular nerve and the median” (p. 4, lines 75-80); • Consider moving the following sections of the manuscript to the Materials and Methods: “The standard esthesiometer kit […] the dermatomes of each nerve” (p. 4-5, lines 84-92); “All patients were treated […] + clofazimine 50 mg” (p. 26, lines 474-477). • Finally, some very minor language concerns: “focallity” instead of focality (p.3, line 44); “surreal” instead of sural (p. 22, line 375). Please do consider using a native English speaker for a quick grammar and spelling check. Reviewer #2: 1)there is very little that is new in in this manuscript. The SWM(S"deemmes-Weinstein monofilament)and ball point pen and the PSSD (pressure-specified sensory device) have been reported almost endlessly to show that medical management is effective. This study does confirm these classic findings , and yet there is no reference to this, espeially not even one mention of the PSSD, which has been shown to be more sensitive in identifying early cases of Leprosy. At the end, I will include a few references that must be added 2) I am sorry to point out all that the SWM estimates the sensibility of a point of skin. it does not make a true measurement. As this paper proves, a set of 6 filaments were used, and therefore there are no normative data but an estimate of a range. Did each filament chosen as the correct one for that point of skin have the number of the filament,, for example 2.83, first converted from its logarithmic form before statistics That number on the filament is the force (not pressure) of that piece of skin and is the log to the base 10 of that force in 0.1mg. So if pressure is going to be discussed, each measurement of force must be changed to pressure by dividing by the diameter of the filament used. 3) The SWM measures sensibility of a piece of skin and yet the authors refer to these as dermatomes. Clearly they are measuring a piece of the skin territory of a peripheral nerve, and not a dermatome. See Figures 1 and 2 for example as well as the text. 4) rather paper should say skin pressure threshold for one point static touch was estimated with the SWM. when the above is cleared up, and tables, corrected, and numerical pressure not force values are used, I am happy to reconsider this paper here are recent articles showing what these authors show with medical treatment, but these apply to nerve decompression, which is the disability these patients have after medical treatment (also not mentioned in this paper) Baltodano, PA, Wan, E, Noboa, J, Rosson, GD, Dellon, AL, Selecting a Test for Leprous Neuropathy Screening, J Reconstr Microsurg, 31:607-613, 2015. Wan, E, Rivadeniera, AF, Serrano, HA, Napit, I, Garbino, JA, Joshua, J, Cardona-Castro, N, Dellon, AL, Theuvenet, W, Protocol for a randomized controlled trial investigating decompression for leprous neuropathy (the DELN protocol), Lepr Rev, 87:553-561,2016. Wan, EL, Noboa, J., Baltodono, PA, Jousin, RM, Erickson, W, Wilton, JP, Rosson, GD, Dellon, AL, Nerve decompression for leprous neuropathy: A prospective study from Ecuador, Lepr Review, 88:95-108, 2017. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Gennaro D'orsi Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-17910R1Semmes-Weinstein Monofilament esthesiometry for the definition of patterns of sensitivity alteration of the hands and feet in a cohort leprosy studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Frade, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 27 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Fabio Santanelli, di Pompeo d'Illasi, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: SWM “esthesiometry” Leprosy Rev 2021 1. The title of the paper and throughout the paper misuses “esthesiometry” and “sensitivity” and these need to be changed throughout the paper. The SWM estimate a range for one-point static touch sensibility, not sensitivity. Esthesiometry is the measurement of tactile sensibility The SWM cannot measure tactile sensibility and hence they cannot do esthesiometry, even if this how the literature has misused these terms in the past. Time for perhaps this paper to use the terms correctly. Their title therefore might be: Evaluation of altered patterns of touch sensibility in Leprosy using the Semmes-Weinstein monofilaments, and short title might me Patterns of Sensibility in Hands and Feet of Leprosy Patients. 2. Abstract: This sensation is an example of how difficult it is to express what the authors are trying to say. They state “a 18% improvement in tactile sensitivity for the hands, and 28.7% for the feet was detected.” What can this possibly mean. Do they mean that 18% of their total number of hand patients had an improvement in sensation, or do they mean that the pre-treatment mean measurement has improved 18% for the hand. 3. Abstract: the next line is very confusing also: “In the hands, by esthesiometry, radial nerve was significantly asymmetric, while in the feet, the difference between the sum of altered esthesiometric points showed significant asymmetry when comparing both sides, highlighting the tibial nerve for the establishment of asymmetric leprosy neuropathy.” Can even the authors understand what this means???? 4. The word “sensitivity” is still in this manuscript. Sensitivity is a statistical term as in sensitivity versus specificity. They use it wrongly when they should be saying sensibility. 5. Conclusion: Sadly ,the authors FAIL to discus that the remaining disability these patients have is due to chronic nerve compression, which can be helped by surgical decompression. They must emphasize that while the r value of .80 is great after triple drug therapy, r2 = 64 which means that 36% of meaning is unexplained or not improved. Those patients after triple drug therapy have residual disability that appropriate peripheral nerve surgery can help. References to this fact were added as refs 34 and 35 at the very last lines of the Discussion, however only to say that drug therapy can reduce the need for surgery, rather than adding the remaining patients would benefit from surgery, and this needs to be emphasized. a) Wan, EL, Rivadeniera, AF, Jousin, RM, Dellon, AL, Treatment of Peripheral Neuropathy in Leprosy: The case for nerve decompression, Plast Reconstr Surg GO, 2016; 4:e637; doi10.1097/GO0000000000000641. b) Wan, E, Rivadeniera, AF, Serrano, HA, Napit, I, Garbino, JA, Joshua, J, Cardona-Castro, N, Dellon, AL, Theuvenet, W, Protocol for a randomized controlled trial investigating decompression for leprous neuropathy (the DELN protocol), Lepr Rev, 87:553-561, 2016. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Evaluation of altered patterns of tactile sensation in the diagnosis and monitoring of leprosy using the Semmes-Weinstein monofilaments PONE-D-21-17910R2 Dear Dr. Frade, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, George Vousden Staff Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: During the revision of your manuscript a reviewer requested that two citations be added to your manuscript, and these have been added as references 34 and 35. Please note that it is not a requirement for publication to cite these references, you may remove them from the version to be typeset if you feel that these works are not relevant to your work. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: great job with revisions all questions answered I have nothing else to write I have nothing else to write ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-21-17910R2 Evaluation of altered patterns of tactile sensation in the diagnosis and monitoring of leprosy using the Semmes-Weinstein monofilaments Dear Dr. Frade: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. George Vousden Staff Editor PLOS ONE |
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