Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-12162Composite carotid intima-media thickness as a risk predictor of coronary heart disease in a selected population in Sri Lanka.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Abeysuriya, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 09 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a prospective study to evaluate correlation between segmental versus composite IMT and the occurance of CHD and the threshold for such an association. Globally the article is well understood. Concern: in 11 months period authors claim that they have recruited 694 participants. This is 63 particiopants per month, this is 2 patients per day including week-ends (it seems impossible for me for a single center), recruitment chart flow figure is absent and is highly appreciated to clarify this issue. A study published in February 2022 by Verma et al. https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0214916821001649 included south asian patients in India. How is this study different? US measurements : should specify the technique, is it manual? If yes how many measurements per segment were done to increase reliability and what is the coefficient of variation. Is it semi automatic or automatic? if yes, what is the quality index used and the coefficient of variation for the measurements. How many operators? authors mention just one : what about inter observer variability reproductibility study? Did the authors do intra-observer reproductibility studies even if it were for a small proportion of the studied population? Age, height, weight, BMI, waist and hip circumferences and waist-hip ratio are not mentionned in methods section nor is there mention of how they were measured, which medical device and the nearest decimal to which the meassurements were performed? Formula of BMI is lacking, although known, it should be mentioned. From the description of the methods section one cannot replicate the study which is the purpose of this section of the manuscript. Pearson's correlation coefficients could be done to evaluate correlations between CIMT and CHD. I understand that the objective is to compare segmental IMT versus the composite IMT but such analysis would be of added value. Results section lacks mention of the regression analysis which are seen just in the tables. Need to re write this section clearly. Line 131, Mannheim recommendations mention linear probe, authors mention an annular probe, explanation? A figure showing an example of IMT measured on an ultrasound image would be appreciated. Line 160 : abbreviation at first appearance for BMI Lines 176-177 which normative reference tables were used? Line 249 : what do authors mean by enter method? Table 2 round up values to 2 decimals. Same for table 3 and table 4. Table 4 : what does constant in the last line of the table refer to? This table is not clear. Explanation of the ACA R2 needed (first line) is lacking. Reviewer #2: Title: Composite carotid intima-media thickness as a risk predictor of coronary heart disease in a selected population in Sri Lanka. This is a prospective one-center study comparing models of use of carotid CIMT for the prediction of coronary heart disease. Separate CIMT measurements (CCA, ICA, or carotid bulb), as well as a composite CIMT (average value of all six segments of the left and right sides) are compared. 694 participants were enrolled in the study. There were variations in segment-specific values. ROC curve analyses show a better AUC for composite CIMT than for segment-specific methods. This study is interesting, globally well-organized. It addresses an important issue: validation of CIMT values in a specific population, under-represented in the literature (Sri Lanka). The manuscript is well written. Here are some more specific comments. Introduction: “The considerable impact of morbidity and mortality due to CHD and stroke is seen in low- and middle-income countries compared to the developed world [1].” Is this a superior impact ? Please rephrase. “Up to date, the majority of research has been conducted on Western populations in the United States and European countries. There are considerably few studies on CIMT among Asians”: Important issue Methodology: Definition of cases and controls is clear “Core lab with anonymous reading” : this means blind reading ? Please describe blind to what parameters: to the adjudication of cases and controls, to medical history, symptoms ? In the abstract, the composite score is clearly defined as: “A composite-CIMT score defined as the average value of all six segments of the left and right sides was derived. “ I do not find this clear definition in the main text. Results: p13 line 211 “The lowest average of CIMT was in the ICA of both groups.” Please give the value, as in the prior sentence. The composite score is labelled as composite score, ACA or composite-CIMT score. Please use a consistent labelling. Discussion: “Studies conducted in Poland (n=277, cut-off CIMT value - 0.933mm; n=412, cutoff 292 CIMT value - 0.76mm) [20] ». Why is there 2 cut-off values, but only one reference ? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Composite carotid intima-media thickness as a risk predictor of coronary heart disease in a selected population in Sri Lanka. PONE-D-22-12162R1 Dear Dr. Abeysuriya, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Composite carotid intima-media thickness as a risk predictor of coronary heart disease in a selected population in Sri Lanka. This is a prospective one-center study comparing models of use of carotid CIMT for the prediction of coronary heart disease. Separate CIMT measurements (CCA, ICA, or carotid bulb), as well as a composite CIMT (average value of all six segments of the left and right sides) are compared. 694 participants were enrolled in the study. There were variations in segment-specific values. ROC curve analyses show a better AUC for composite CIMT than for segment-specific methods, for the association with CAD. This study is interesting, globally well-organized. It addresses an important problem a validation CIMT values in a specific population, under-represented in the literature (Sri Lanka). The manuscript is well written. All comments have been addressed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-12162R1 Composite carotid intima-media thickness as a risk predictor of coronary heart disease in a selected population in Sri Lanka. Dear Dr. Abeysuriya: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Guy Cloutier Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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