Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 15, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-11179Social and maternal behavior in mesoderm specific transcript (Mest)-deficient micePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Koza, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers agree that the work was performed well and clearly reported. The differences in behavior found between the two MEST KO alleles is an important finding, that both reviewers felt was handled well in the discussion. Reviewer #1 felt it important to include data that verifies the absence of MEST in the new allele. This work was previously reported, although showing the specific loss of the protein within the brain would strengthen the article, I do not believe this is required. Nevertheless, this reviewer does bring up doubts regarding the effect of the new KO allele that could be exists with other reviewers. Further highlighting the results of this KO on MEST expression with a more complete description, or the addition of supplementary material would be helpful. Reviewer #2 had more detailed comments regarding the descriptions and discussion of the behavioral tests and reporting of the results. I find these comments to extremely helpful for improving the manuscript and preparing it for publication. Importantly, they do not appear to require any additional experimentation, and do not impact the validity of the results. For resubmission, please carefully consider this reviewers comments on the discussion and description of the different behaviors used, and the difficulties with the time scales. Also, please be sure to report the outcomes of the statistical analysis within the RESULTS section. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors reported normal social, maternal and cognitive functions in a new Mestp/gKO line. It is interesting and informative, as they show stark contrast of decreased survival and severe behavioral abnormalities in a previously-established MestKO. Because of the importance of Peg1 and relevant issues in scientific field, I endorse publication of this article in Plos One. Two things to be added before publication is the confirmation of the absence of Mest/Peg1 gene or gene product from the KO; and more description about survival and general health of the present strain of MestKO. Because the differences in their health condition are very large in these two lines, the reader may doubt the proper deletion of the gene. At least more thorough discussion, and a possible limitation of the present study should be provided to the text. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript the authors describe a series of experiments to test various aspects of behaviour in a new Peg1/Mest KO mouse model (Mesttm1.2Rkz). The rationale for doing this experiment is that in breeding the Mesttm1.2Rkz line, the authors found no deviation in expected ratios of the different genotypes, which is in contrast to studies of a previously generated line (Mesttm1Masu) which was due to poor maternal care by females carry a paternal deletion. Here, the authors test a number of different behaviours, including maternal care, in the new Mesttm1.2Rkz line, examining both paternal and full (i.e. homzygote) knockouts. The authors find no difference between the groups in measures of anxiety / memory / sociability or maternal behaviour, despite clear loss of Mest mRNA in the hypothalamus and embryonic brain. Generally, the behavioural analysis is robust and well-carried out. There are a few issues I think need to be addressed however. Firstly the number of behavioural test performed by each animal is not ideal, the key problem being the timescale within which all these behaviours were peformed - six separate tests (some last >1 day) in ~20 days is not ideal, especially as some (EPM, tail suspension) are quite aversive. I do not expect the authors to rectify this, as I doubt it will affect the outcome, but I think it needs to be acknowledged in some way in the Discussion. Another thing that is not clear from the methods is the relation of this batch of tests to the maternal behaviour testing in virgins and subsequently primiparous mums. I assume the females tested in the battery of tests were the same ones used in maternal behaviour testing? I also think it needs to be made clearer that the virgin females were then mated (how long afterwards?) and re-tested as primiparous mums. This also needs to be briefly discussed in the Discussion, as mice (including virgins) will improve maternal behaviour with subsequent tests, and so the primiparous mums have effectively had a practice run whilst virgins. This is a confound, however I doubt it will have consequences for the overall findings. The authors refer to "cognitive function' throughout. In fact this actually refers to one test, the novel object test. As there is not a more comprehensive wide-ranging set of cognitive tests, I would suggest simply referring to this domain of behaviour as "object recognition memory" (or, at a stretch, "memory"). There seems to be no statistics presented in the Results and / or figure legends. If ANOVA has been used (as indicated in the Methods) then I would expect to see an F-statistic and degrees of freedom, not simply an asterisk on a graph. This makes it very difficult to judge what test has been used to test each set of data. For instance both the "nest quality" and the latency data are not normally distributed (the latency has an upper bounding of 300s, which limits the Virgin data in particular) and so should not be analysed by ANOVA - but it is difficult to tell HOW they have been analysed. Again, looking at the data (which are nicely presented in the figures) I doubt this will effect the outcome, but it is important it is correct. The central focus of this work is on the maternal behaviour and, although it is clear there are no genotype differences in this behaviour in dams, I think some of the other inferences need clarity. The test itself is only 5-minutes (300s) long. 5 mins is a very short time period for retrieval, particularly for the virgin females as this window would not have given them adequate time to display parenting – hence the large amounts of NR in Figure 3. Is there any reason the authors didn’t allow longer, say 15 minutes like the original Surani paper. Either way, this limitation needs to be acknowledged in the discussion. Similarly, on line 321 the authors refer to digging behaviour in this test as ‘aggressive behaviour’ – is there evidence to support this being classified this way and not just an exploratory behaviour? Relatedly, are there any behaviour measures of what the mice were doing during the 5 minute retrieval for comparisons i.e. did the WT’s spend less time interacting with the pups or more time exploring or in the nest alone? Adding these could reveal differences or strengthen the argument that there are none. Finally, the assertion that maternal instinct appears ‘enhanced’ is a bit of a stretch considering that there are no significant differences between the groups and the ‘mean differences’ will be largely influenced by the one failed WT dam retrieval within the time limit. Since all the animals began to retrieve their pups within a short time window (< 5 mins) I don’t think there is any good evidence of an ‘enhancement in maternal instinct’ here, and this should be removed from the text. The Discussion is focused on explaining why these findings in the Mesttm1.2Rkz line deviate so dramatically from the those seen in the Mesttm1Masu line. Here, the authors do an excellent job in outlining many of the possible explanations. One thing that is touched upon, but not considered in detail, is the effect of the presence of LacZ in the Mesttm1Masu - LacZ has been shown to have effects on neuronal development and function previously (e.g. https://doi.org/10.1523/JNEUROSCI.0187-21.2021). A key issue the authors highlight could be the lack of an effect of the deletion in the Mesttm1.2Rkz on the intronic miR-335. I wonder why the authors did not look at the expression of miR-335 in the brain? This would easy given the available RNA (Fig. 5). Minor issues: Figure 2 – confusing when the colour scheme for female (red) and male (blue) is used to now separate stranger (red) and empty (blue). Shades of red for female only graphs and shades of blue for male only graphs would keep the colour scheme consistent and still distinguish stranger vs empty. Figure 3/4 - would be good to see latency clarified (I’m assuming it is latency to retrieve the first pup to the nest? But its not clearly stated) ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Anthony R. 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