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The procedure is simple (an estimation of the average expense multiplied by the number of anglers and relate it to the number and weight of tuna estimated to die in the catch, tagging and release operations) and the conclusions are clear. I am not familiar with this type of studies but, in spite of its simplicity, it provides a clear an interesting message: catch and release fisheries can be a source of income more profitable than extraction fisheries by providing an alternative type (non-lethal) of ecosystem services. In general, there are only a couple of moderately important issues that need further explanation and exploration: - Mortality: There are usually two types of mortality in tag and release studies: an immediate mortality (the fish is dead, or almost dead when hauled on-board) and a post-release mortality (that takes place when a fish is released seemingly in good conditions but ends up dying). It is not clear the rates the authors have used. Furthermore, in L. 233 the authors indicate they used a 5% mortality based on previous studies, but the numbers shown in table 2 are not in agreement with these percentages and, in L. 305 the authors mentions they obtain an estimate of mortality of 4.5%. It is confusing throughout the document how mortality has been computed and the values that have been used in the different calculations. It is important to describe the sources of mortality and clarify if the values in tables 1 and 2 correspond to at-vessel, post-release or total mortality. In my opinion, a good estimate of total mortality should include the number of tuna dead during the hauling plus the number of tuna released alive multiplied by a literature-based estimate of post-release mortality. Also, as will be explained further below, I was not able to reproduce the expenditure estimates shown in table 2. - Further recognition and exploration of potential biases: It is true that a priori there is no reason for considering the surveys can be biased. On the other hand, the surveys themselves could serve to check this point, by comparing the interaction rate of interviewed anglers with the total interactions and number of participants. As an example, the authors indicate in L295-299 that the average number of anglers onboard was 4 people, and that the number of ABFT caught per angler and season was two… Since there were, as an example, 500 anglers in 2019, on average in groups of 4 people and each group interacted on average with 2 ABFT, it would result in a total catch of 250 ABFT (assuming that each tuna is caught by a team and the four people in the team would report it as a catch). However, the total catch for that year is only of 50 fish. Even in the unlikely case two boats participate on average in the catch of a fish, it would also yield a figure well above the actual levels. It could be hypothesized that fishermen more active in the fishery, investing more time and resources are more prone to provide a response to the surveys. It that is the case, the total expenditure would be an overestimate. - Estimates on variabiliy (e.g., sd) throughout the document would be welcome (particularly table 2). Ideally, a statistical procedure (bootstrapping, montecarlo simulations… on expenditures, post-release mortality estimates, etc.) would provide confidence intervals for the estimates. Specific comments: L26 “northern” should be in lower case. L28 […] in Denmark, who often consider L30 […] in Denmark, which peaked L41-42 Fragmented, rephrase L54-55 I am not very familiar with those fisheries, but I seem to remember there was a fishery for ABFT in Scandinavia with significant catches in the 1940’s. Please double-check L61 Conservation of Atlantic Tunas L62 Consider changing member states by Contracting Parties (it is the regular nomenclature. The EU, as an example is a party, not a MS). L70 […] and, in 2006 and all subsequent years, […] L73 Do not understand very well the sense of “as late as” in this context. Does it mean “as early as”?. L78-79 The fact that Denmark and Sweden lack quotas is mentioned just two lines above. L82 Consider removing “landing based” since it is implicit in the term commercial. To my knowledge, there are no commercial non-landing based ABFT fisheries. L96 Some inconsistency with the lines above : 10,000 t x 69 €/kg = 0.69 billion €, but in L96 in the value is 0.9 billion € L97 Add abbreviation (T&R program), since it is used later throughout the document L108-110: Is this all mentioned in ref [16] or is this a conclusion of the current study?. If the latter, consider moving to the discussion section. L118 (Table 1) Tags not reporting are, IMHO, more likely to be mortalities than the average. In any instance, the estimate of % mortality should at least be done removing them from the calculation (e.g., for Wilson et al, 2015 the calculation should be 1/(68-8)=0.7%. It should be indicated in the legend or in the main text. Furthermore, it must be indicated (in the legend if it applies to all the studies or in an additional column if not) if the mortality is at-vessel, post-release or both. L142 […] the fishing activities, including […] L152 yellowfin tuna (lower case). Consider changing marlin by billfish. To my knowledge, the former does not include all the species in the family (sailfish and spearfish), although I am not sure if they are important in terms of recreational fisheries, please check. L152-153 In other parts of the world {remove e.g.}. Only anglers adhering to minimum gear requirements (e.g. use of the circle hooks and 130 lbs test line), and with […] L158-159 Consider rephrasing: The anglers would have had to invest […] even if no minimum gear requirements had been enforced by the tagging project, as there are L160 […] there are no other significant recreational fisheries in Denmark which [..] L163 […] an open recreational […] L184 [..] contact with them L185 […] we attempted to contact anglers… L189 […] in the survey and, if they were,… L195 was sent L200 euros (lower case) L207-2021 Consider moving to the following section on expenditures L212-213 Merge with first sentence in the section (L202) L226 Consider using biomass instead of weight and “ABFT mortalities due to” instead of “ABFT lost to” throughout the document. L227 […] will give an indication of its impact on the stock. L228-231 This part is very confusing. I first understood the authors estimated mortality rate from the literatures and applied it to the total catches, then it seemed they calculated a relative mortality rate by dividing the number of mortalities in the T&R program by the total number of tunas caught, but now they mention they calculate a relative mortality rate based on the total number of mortalities and catches in the fishery and apply it again to the total number of ABFT caught each year (does it mean there are catches and mortalities out of the T&R program). This is a central point to clarify: how mortality rate is estimated, if it includes at-vessel and post-release mortality and if the observation rate in the T&R program is not 100% and the values observed are extrapolated to the global catches. L231-236 On top of the above, provide a rationale for the selection of 5% (it is not straightforward from the values in table 1). L237 […] multiplied by the mean weight of ABFT caught in each respective year… L238-239 It might be beneficial to indicate how fish measures, fish status, mortalities… were taken and recorded. L240 SFL/CFL relationship. Use same number of decimals. If it is derived from row 2 in table 2 of Rodriguez-Marin et al (CFL=-1.887+1.0507SFL) and I am not mistaken it should yield SFL = 1.7959+0.9517CFL L254 4,318,620€, resulting in average annual… L256 […] not owning boats, who spent… L264 A couple of significant issues (e.g., year 2018): (i) If the number of fish was 109 and a mortality rate of 5% was assumed, if would result in 5.45 tuna dead, not 3 (therefore, it seems they are not using a 5% mortality rate in the estimation, as stated in L 232). (ii) The total expenditures would be (227x2,356)+(75*10,734)= 1,339,862. This value, divided by the number of fish indicated in the table would be 1,339,862/3=446,620, but in the table 2 it estimates 257,671€ /tuna. The total expenditure should also be included in the table. Again, the value of fish dead is an actual observation (fish already dead when hauled onboard), an estimate of post-release mortality or a combination of both?. L269 (table 3) My understanding is that these expenses are only related to the ABFT T&R activity, i.e., they would not have taken place in the absence of the T&R program. If that is the case, please note in the legend. L274-276 I think splitting and showing the information for boat owners and non-owners was very useful. Consider doing it when mentioning incomes as well. L304 How many fish in total, 275 (table 2) or 276?. Also, 12/275=4.4 and 12/276=4.3, not 4.5% L305 Of the 276 ABFT, 104, 56 and 106 were caught in 2018, 2019 and 2020. Note in table 2 they are 109, 50 and 116. L307 Indicate it is CFL L312 At this stage, if the fishery has taken place using ICCAT research mortality allowance (BTW, it might be good to mention it in the MS) and there is not allocated quota, it should not be treated as an emerging fishery (it is not emerging, but only the result of a specific, discrete scientific action) L315 Same as above. L348 interested instead of invested? L348 […] fishing in genera and, as a consequence, were more likely… L350 […] in our analysis? L358-359. Beginning with “multiple anglers”. As it is now, it seems all the experiential value is related to the team work and that is not possibly the case. Consider merging this statement with the following paragraph, were there is a clear link with the economic implications of the experience at the group, rather than the individual, level. L368 Remove “entire”, since it is not comparing total incomes, but the average of the whole commercial fishery. L370 […] trout and salmon, which are… L383-384 Please, see note about L269 (table 3). It means the expenditures in table 3, including angling gear, boat expenses and equipment (which account for around half of the total in 2018) would not have taken place in the absence of the T&R program. Is that correct?. L384-387. Not sure about the inference: With few exceptions, the different expenditures would have been additional inputs to the local economy regardless of the origin of the anglers. In fact, some of them (angling equipment, boat equipment…) are likely to take place elsewhere when the anglers are foreigners… L409 Again, not sure if it is assuming a 5% mortality rate or using the observed data. Moreover, a 5% mortality would imply 3.4t fish and the 3t seems to correspond to the observed values… A good reference for the discussion could be: Sun et al. 2019. More landings for higher profit? Inverse demand analysis of the bluefin tuna auction price in Japan and economic incentives in global bluefin tuna fisheries management. PLoS ONE 14(8): e0221147 DOI: 10.1371/journal.pone.0221147 Reviewer #2: This manuscript is an investigation of the potential economic benefits of a restored recreational bluefin tuna fishery in Denmark, especially in the Skagen peninsula. Bluefin tuna have begun reappearing off the Danish coast in the past decade and a small catch and release recreational fishery has followed. Following the collapse of bluefin in the 1960s, Denmark lost its allocation of the ICCAT Atlantic bluefin harvest, so the reemergence will remain catch and release for the foreseeable future. The authors of the manuscript surveyed Danish anglers for three years (including during the pandemic) and engaged a portion of them to engage in an unpaid recreational tag and release program, then calculated associated expenditures. The authors then project those expenditures to estimate the full value of a catch and release program to the Danish economy as well as the potential impacts on the bluefin stock from discard mortality. The article sometimes confused economic value and economic expenditure. The economic expenditures of a recreationally landed or caught species is not directly comparable to the commercial value of a landed fish. The first is how much was spent catching the fish (a comparable commercial number would be how much was spent by a commercial fisherman doing the same) but that is not in line with the authors’ intent. In fisheries economics, we would compare consumer and producer surpluses, but that is outside the scope of this paper. There are many problems with using only expenditures–for one, it implies that the value of the fishing goes up when trip costs become more expensive (for example, if fuel prices rise), which is quite the opposite of the way an angler would perceive it. The Canadian report that the authors cite (13) is looking at charter sales (a commercial enterprise), not the recreational fishing expenditures of private anglers. They later cite Goldsmith, Scheld, and Graves (2018), who did generate consumer surplus estimates and hence economic value. The Bohnsack et al (2002) paper is more similar to what they do here, which looked at economic expenditures and economic impact. Lines 86-96, 360-372 and elsewhere that attempt to directly compare whether a fish should be allocated to the commercial or recreational sectors should be discarded or at least scaled back. Recreational fishing may well be a better use of BFT than commercial fishing, but this paper cannot show that with the data provided. I see no issues with the biological sampling or impacts sections, with the caveat that I am an economist and not a biologist. The sampling frame looks fine and the authors did a commendable job with pushing through during the pandemic. Less important notes: Section on “Angler participation in the T & R program” beginning line 138–was Danish bluefin angling exclusively limited to these participants? The paper was somewhat unclear on this. Clarify. I assume that anglers can catch and release whatever they want, but I may be wrong. Lines 283-284 seem to suggest that there is a pre-existing season for BFT angling, then lines 411-412 indicate that “ a substantial recreational sector could develop in Denmark.” Lines 171-172 –the FAO manual is on fisheries economic impacts, which is how much money is being spent in the area, make sure to use that language throughout the manuscript. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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